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Naruto/Existing Girl)

Naruto/Another Jinkuriki

I'm sorry this update took so long. Depending on which one wins Ill add sub categories later on. I've been reading past chapters and they have awful grammar, so I'll try to read over my work. This chapter will contain a special ability I've been waiting to give Naruto. Read,Review, and Enjoy!By the way I've been getting no reviews whatsoever so if any of you could do me the favor of advertising me it would be appreciated.

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Naruto lazily smashed and lunged his arms into a log which had branches sticking it out of it many directions. It had been at least an hour or two since the whole fight with Itachi, and he wasn't in the mood to rest. Instead he wanted to go ahead and meet Hijo's son and the rest of the clan. So since he couldn't yet, Naruto had decided to train.The restless blond kept on doing this until he was delighted with the sound of Hijo's return. The boy rushed toward the front door expecting to see him. Hijo was there, with a few bandages here and there, but for the most part the clan leader was alright.

"Hijo-sensei!" Naruto squeaked with delight.

"Heh. Good day Naruto. You really have shown me that you've improved. Anyway it's time to meet the clan. I've told them to be in the main room, so they should be waiting for us." he said

Naruto nodded and walk along with Hijo. He staggered a few times on the ice, but for the most part he was getting used to using his chakra control to keep himself on his feet. Soon they arrived at a dead end at the back of a hallway.

"Hijo-sensei... there isn't a door here."

"Naruto, a ninja doesn't always have to believe what he sees or in this case does not see." Hijo said. Hijo placed his palm on the ice and suddenly there was a loud creak which was followed by the ice disappearing and a doorway coming into view. The duo walked in and were suddenly greeted by at least fifty or more people in a rather large room.

"Hello everyone! As some of you may know, I've taken a ninja under my arm. Today I will be introducing him to every one of you." Everyone waved at him or gave him a shake, and then said their name, and a few things about themselves. Soon only one more person was left. He had a sleevless blue shirt with a black t-shirt underneath. Underneath that was one of those netted clothings. The person also had fingerless gloves with an emblem(probably the clan emblem) which was engraved on a small metal plate. He was also wearing baggy shorts, even though it was ridiculously cold inside.

"Naruto, please meet my son Hijaku." The child tottered up to him and put out his hand and said

"Nice to meet you Naruto-san. I can guess we will be nice friends." There was a little bit of social activity after that, but everyone except Naruto and Hijaku left. It was some time around mid-day and the spar that had been promised them could still take place. The two were about to leave when Hijaku spoke up and said

"Wait, let's take the faster way. Doton:Earth Fusion" Yet again Naruto was fully submerged into the ground and shortly after arose from the dirt. He was standing, in a stadium like place. It was pretty much a giant square that was partially made out of dry land and water. To be more specific it was a big square that had been made out of dirt, and in the middle was a medium sized pool of water. Unsurprisingly the clan had gathered around this stadium to watch the fight. Out of the crowd walked Hijo.

"Hello you two. I'm sure that you guys are eager to test out your abilities, and now is your chance.As you know, you are supposed to be fighting today, but I thought that it would be better if the entire clan watched so that they could know how excellent you really are."

Hijaku released a toothy grin and set himself in a battle stance.

"Heh! You can't beat me!" he said.

"Well, we'll see about that!" Naruto hollered. There was a short awkward silence ,but it was disrupted by a loud gong symbolizing the start of the match. Before anything moved the two took their weights off to increase their speed. To begin the fight Hijaku blurred from view with his amazing yet brilliant speed. Naruto quizzically glanced around looking for him until he felt a slight movement of wind.

"Heeyah!!!!" Hijaku screamed as his fist came crashing down from the sky which left Naruto barely seconds to dodge. As he leaped out of the way Hijaku yet again blurred out of view.

"Where is he now!?" His question was quickly answered by the feeling of cold metal against his neck.

"You lose, Ha! I knew you couldn't beat me." When those words left his mouth Naruto poofed away, which had meant it was a clone. The ninja smoke obscured his view so he was open to a wide array of attacks.

"Wher... ack!!!" He shrieked as he bent down and the crowd gasped as Naruto appeared behind him. In other words the young chuunin had smashed his fist full force into a specific area of the spinal cord. This area controlled the little sparks of electricity that sent message across the body. In other words, Hijaku's movements were messed up . Hijaku tried to move his legs but instead his shoulder moved. He tried to raise his arms but his legs moved. When he moved his neck his arms moved. Hijaku practiced a few more times before he had a basic idea of how his body worked. The boy slowly got up, and raced towards Naruto. Hijaku waved his hand and water collected in the air, which formed a spear like weapon.. Naruto pulled out his own blade and the two were locked in a struggle of power. As the two tried to overcome the other Hijaku's spear began to melt. In a few minutes it had split in two. Hijaku jumped back then raced forward delivering a hard gash at Naruto's chest. The blond clutched his chest in pain and Hijaku took this a opening for another attack. He preformed a few quicks seals and bit his thumb. A small drop of the crimson liquid dropped on his double spears. He then set them in the ground. There was a short silence before a big cloud of smoke appeared and once it had a cleared was a great white hawk.

"Hello again, look we have a new opponent! Naruto, bet you didn't know you could summon right?"

"Actually..." Naruto receded into his mind.

"Kyuubi, is it possible that I can use the contract with the foxes now?"

"Kit, if you release them now, a portion of my chakra will also be acquired to summon them because you do not have the needed ability to do it yet."

"That's fine with me."

A red stream poured from the cage and swirled around him. Naruto slowly opened his eyes as he felt knowledge being poured into his head. He started soothly going through each hand seal and once he reached the last one, the crowd was sure that a tower of red chakra had risen from him. There was a poof and in the smoke was standing a majestic fox.

"Great Lord Kyuubi! Where am I? Oooooo I see dinner, but what is this I sense Lord Kitsune!" The huge fox looked down at the boy with a very irritating grin.

"I am Uzumaki Naruto, the holder of the Nine Tailed Fox"

"Oh my, Lord Kyuubi has been sealed. It doesn't matter, I am at your command."

"Okay then, can you take care of that hawk over there?"

"Ooooooo, big dinner... Yes he's mine!" The hawk and fox chased each other into the woods. They were out of the way so Naruto could fight Hijaku only. Though when he looked towards him, there was nothing there.

"Wha..." he murmered. Suddenly out of the blue, Hijaku appeared with his reunited double spears. If he didn't move he would be injured and that would relinquish his chances of winning.Oh no!I cannot dodge this.. It is over...

"Its time to end this!"

Minor seconds before Hijaku hit, a surge of energy radiated from his body. Waves emitted from himself and glowed radiantly.

"Uggh!!!!" There was one final large wave, and the form of an angel formed in white chakra over Naruto's head. The was a brief silence before Naruto's eyes morphed. Power surged through his body and he could feel chakra equal in power to the Kyuubi's welling up inside of him. Yes, he had a chance now, he would figure out what happened later but for now it was time to change this fights destiny. Hand seals came to him simultaneously and he shouted "Tomoshibi:Yari Renda No Justu" (Light Release:Spear Barrage). Glowing beams shot upward circling Naruto. Hijaku's attack was only mere seconds from hitting, he would have to counter fast. The beams stop moving and tilted onto their sides so they were facing sideways towards Hijaku.

"Hyah!" Naruto shrieked thrusting his arms forward. The beams also shot forward spiraling in the air sending shock waves ricocheting in all directions. Hijaku shrieked as the beams exploded on impact. He shot out of the cloud of smoke bruised and landed in front of Naruto.

"Seems the dead last loser has yet again defeated another foe. Heh!" He stretched his hand out and helped Hijaku up.

"What was that? Light Release? I did not know that was an affinity." Hijo appeared from his spectator view and walked towards them.

"Light Release. I've seen that before. It is an affinity acquired by activating the doujustu called Elegant Feather. The user receives many enhanced physical abilities. But that is only for the first stage. I know of four. Naruto, you have a kekkai genkai."

"Seems I do! That's one step closer to beating Sasuke. I will master my bloodline limit and use it towards my advantage!"

"Well that was quite a spectacular performance you two. Naruto you've earned the clans respect. I think you two should go and rest."

"Nah." Naruto replied, "Even though I won, I wouldn't have done it without that sudden event. I think I'll try my training workout a few times before I lay out."

"Well done, you are learning well."

"I'll go with you, I should be able to win, bloodline or not." Hijaku said.

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I understand the story is lacking description and makes it very hard for the readers to visualize but because of this I have considered having a beta. I think they help improve the structure of your stories. If so please contact me through my profile. I Know this chappy took a long time but I was considering deleting my fics because I don't ever get reviews but with the help of a fellow helper I figured out that was the weak road out for cowards and quitters. In the words of a stubborn blond

"I will never give up, that is my ninja way!"