06/10/19
I think I'm running out of things to say at the beginning of these chapters now...
Anyone see 'Dark Phoenix'?
It wasn't good.
How about PewDiePie? He still around?
Eh. I don't care.
Reviews
-d. felipe76: To each their own.
-Dread55: I know, but I've been brunt out on this story for a good while now, that's mostly why I'm not doing a part three. Sorry these chapters haven't been all that good lately, I've just lost all motivation for it, and want it to end already. When I do the rewrites, I'll make it look nicer, but the story's still the same.
-LoudRisque: I'm sorry, but I'm not talking anymore suggestions.
-That Engineer: Luna was already getting to her melting point throughout the story, and having her idol, whom she praises as a God, insulted, was the straw that broke the camels back.
Chapter 11: The 'B' Story Part 2
The two Loud parents were laid on top of the family van, Vanzilla, completely naked under the night sky, Rita resting her head on her husbands slightly hairy chest, feeling content with her life.
"This is nice, honey." Lynn Sr said
Rita purrs, "It sure is."
After a few seconds of peaceful silence, she said, "I don't want to move."
"I know. I don't want to either, but we can't stay out all night. I hate to imagine how badly the house is right now." her husband shivers just thinking about the possible damage to their home.
"I think you're over reacting. Lori's there, and Lincolns been good at keeping the rest of the girls in line."
"True." he nods, but the thought still lingered in his mind
Rita sensed that her husband wasn't going to let it go, and with a soft sigh she sat up, "We can go back home. It's getting late anyway." she said sadly, "Rita..." Lynn Sr sat up, and put his right arm around his wife, but before he could say anything the couple were shined on by a flashlight
"HOLY SHIT!"
The Loud parents looked behind them to see three teenagers, on bikes, the one in front had his phone out, while the two behind him, had bags filled with unknown items.
"AAH!" Rita screams, covering her breasts with her arms, "Quick! In the Van!" Lynn Sr shouted, jumping off of Vanzilla, and helping his wife down, all the while the teen in front was taking pictures, and videos
Rita got in the van, her face completely red, while her husband was trying to start it
"Come on! Come on you hunk of junk!" he shouted at the family van
One of the teens knocked on the driver side window, "Yo, man! You guys gonna fuck, or something?" he asked
"Leave me, and my wife, alone." he said nicely in hopes that these kids will leave him, and Rita, alone
"Man, did you see the tits on that chick?" the two heard the other two teens talking, "I know. There were bigger than our heads, bro!". Rita blushed a darker colour, some kids were talking about her boobs, while she was still here, and within earshot of.
Lynn Sr banged his fist on the dashboard out of frustration
"What about the old dude? Did you see what he's packing?"
"I know. Go figure some fat old dude had a huge cock."
One of the teens chuckled, "Which was bigger? His dick, or his nose?" the two started laughing
Lynn Sr face-planted into the steering wheel, this was the worst night ever.
Lynn Jr, and Lincoln, were staring at Lucy in disbelief
"Sigh." Lucy looked down, feeling nervous about what she was going to say, this had to be done now, before it gets out of hand. "Like I said... I did this. I've been planning this night since last month."
Lincoln was the first to speak up, "How?" he asked
"It all started when Lynns letter came in the mail." she said, "Wait, what letter?" Lynn Jr asked
Lucy walked into the kitchen, with Lincoln, and Lynn Jr, right behind her, "On top of the fridge." she points at the fridge, Lynn Jr reaches for the top of the fridge, struggling on her tip toes to reach it, "Dang it." she mutters to herself, too ashamed to ask for help due to her short stature.
"Help her." Lucy whispers to Lincoln, but he doesn't respond back, instead he looks away, dishearteningly.
Lynn Jr jumps on top of the counter, and sees a letter on top of the fridge, it had collected some dust over the month, damn Lola didn't do her chores at all, dusting the kitchen was her task.
She jumped off the counter, and ripped open the letter, her jaw drops once she sees who the letter is from
"Standford University." she dropped the letter, her whole world was spinning, "I feel lightheaded." she leaned back against the fridge, a large smile on her face, "I can't believe it." her eyes were getting watery, "I did it. I DID IT!" she raised her right fist, proudly, into the air, "LYNN FREAKING MARIE LOUD JR DID IT!" she cheered loudly, completely unaware of the sadden looks from her two siblings.
"It's all thanks to Lisa, she pulled some strings with some Professor there, whom invited some people to watch your last few games, and they liked what they saw." Lucy informed her older sister, she still had her fist in the air.
"Congrats, sis." Lincoln said softly
Lynn Jr looked back at her siblings, still not noticing the sad expressions on their faces, "Why did you wait so long to tell me?!" she demanded
Lincoln sighed, "Mom, and Dad, were going to surprise you after your graduation."
The gears in Lynn Jrs head began to move, "Wait..."
Lucy chimed in, "It's why you started this stupid game. You wanted to get one of us to spill the beans about the special gift Mom said you were getting after graduation."
Lynn Jr facepalmed herself, hard, "AAAH! I completely forgot!" she yelled at herself, a red hand print present on her face from how hard she facepalmed herself.
"Your competitive nature got the better of you, which is what I had planned would happen." Lucy stated
"Plan... you said you planned this. Why the hell did you have planned?" Lynn Jr asked
"My plan was to get everyone to stop hiding things, and actually come forth with their burdens. The only solution was a game of truth, or dare. So for weeks I've been planting ideas for you in your sleep for weeks so that you'll come up with a plan to get Mom, and Dad, out of the house, and have everyone play this game. So that I can help Lori with her newfound alcohol dependency, Lola with her negative self-imagine, get Lisa to confess to her crush, but mostly this was for Lincoln."
"That's creepy, sis." Lynn Jr commented
Lincoln finally spoke up, "You knew all this?" he asked
Lucy only nodded
"We could've gotten Lori some help! I would've taken care of Lola, and Lisa!"
"Do you honestly think Lori would've accepted our help? She's too proud to admit it, and you know it. She would take a drink every so often, and eventually it would lead to her getting drunk. Tomorrow she'll realize the consequences of her action from tonight, and she can move on from there. It has to be on her own term, or she won't get any better."
Lincoln stayed silent
"With Lisa, and Lola, they need to be push, and you're not doing it right, cause you're too afraid of being just like Lori was when she use to be here."
Lucy noticed Lincoln flinching slightly
"Which brings me to the last item on the list... you."
"What's wrong with Lincoln?" Lynn Jr asked, she was kinda out of the loop here
"Do you wanna tell her, or should I just go on?" she asked her older brother, whom remained silent
"Sigh." Lucy shook her head, "Ever since you got that letter, have you noticed his behavior getting worst?" she asked her older sister. Lynn Jr scratched the back of her head, trying to recall how Lincolns been this last month, "Eh." she just shrugs, "He's been really uptight is all."
Lincoln glared at Lynn Jr, "I wouldn't have to be if you weren't so irresponsible! Someone has to be in charge here!" Lincoln shouted at his older sister, before Lynn Jr could yell back at her brother, Lucy got in between the two, "That's enough!" she yelled at the top of her lungs.
Seeing as the two of them weren't going to go at it, for now, Lucy continued
"He's been going through mood swings. One minute he's his usual happy self, next he's angry, and after that he gets sad. It's been happening ever since Luan moved out, and it's only gotten worse since that letter came."
"Why?" Lynn Jr asked
"Because he's-"
"Because nothing!" Lincoln interrupted his younger sister
Lincoln took in a deep breath, "We're still in the middle of this game." upon the mentioning of the word 'game', Lincoln saw the fire in his older sister eyes, "And I believe I was going to win." he said, egging her on
"Yeah... you're right about that. We are still in the middle of this game, but you're wrong about who's going to win, little brother."
Lucy looked back, and forth, at her siblings, "Really?" she asked
"Lucy, I dare you to melt your Edwin bust." Lynn Jr said, without making eye contact with her younger sister
With a loud groan, Lucy walks away, heading upstairs, "If the two of you kill each other, I'll make sure you both haunt this place for all of eternity." she threatens them, but once she got around the corner she smirked, knowing full well that the last part of her plan was about to work.
"You ready, little brother?" Lynn Jr asked
"Depends. You ready to lose?" Lincoln asked
The two Loud siblings were staring each other down... too bad this won't be settled until the next chapter
"Lame." Lynn Jr crossed her arms as the scene changes
Lynn Sr panted, completely out of breath, "I. Need. To. Work out. More." he wheezed, not fully realizing just how out of shape he truly was
Rita looked behind her, she had one arm covering her large bust, while her other arm was covering her privates, "Lynn! Hurry!" she shouted back for her husband, and continued running ahead of him, unintentionally giving her husband a great view of her rather big arse jiggling under the street lights.
He looked down at his erect member, "Stay down, boy!" he told his junk as he went back to sprinting after his wife.
The parents have been on the run for a good few minutes now, after the family van suddenly decided it didn't want to start anymore, gotta have Lana check it out later.
Up the street, Rita saw flashes of light, "Oh, god." she looked around for a hiding spot, and saw a large tree, "Lynn, over here!" she points at the tree, and heads for it, Lynn panting loudly as he runs towards the same tree. Rita pressed against the oak, while her husband pressed himself against her, "OH!" Rita moaned quite loudly, and quickly covered her mouth. She turned her head back, and glared angrily at her husband.
"Heh heh. Sorry, dear." he whispered to her, he had aparently jabbed her big, juicy, arse, with his, not so little, friend
The parents saw two people walking down the street, their flashlights out, Ritas jaw dropped when she saw who these people were, "I can't believe it." she mentally facepalmed herself, it was the McBrides, the only adults that the Louds haven't annoyed, or pissed off, in all of Royal Woods.
Howard shivered, he hated this nighty patrols in their neighborhood, it was always scary at night. "What was that?!" he screamed, Harold shined his light at a squirrel running across someones lawn. "It was just a squirrel, Howard."
Howard sighed softly, "Good." he was relieved that his big, strong, man was here with him
Harold look around, taking glances at each house, it was his husband, and his, turn to patrol the neighborhood tonight, and so far everything seemed okay. No teens causing damages, no trash on the sidewalks, all the lawns were mowed, and all the cars were parked in their respected driveways. This neighborhood watch was a brilliant idea he came up with at the last meeting, he smiled proudly.
Lynn Sr, and Rita, poked their heads out from behind the tree, seeing the McBrides walking away from them
Rita tip toed out from behind the tree, Lynn Sr followed in her steps, but some random squirrel ran across his feet, startling the full grown man, "AAAAHH!" he let out a blood curdling scream, waking up the entire block with his less than manly scream
"Uh oh." he said as all the house lights turned on, and people were running out of their homes, a few of them were armed
"RUN!" he yelled loudly, Rita, and him, running as fast as they could, with an entire neighborhood chasing after them
They were so close to their home, Rita saw Mr. Grouses house just up ahead
"Lynn! Fence!" she hollered, and jumped the fence belonging to their next door neighbor. Lynn Sr jumped, and face planted on Mr. Grouses backyard plants, "Ow." he groaned faintly
Rita helped her husband up, "Come on." she told him, helping him limp towards their house
She pulled out the hidden key from under their mat, and opened the front door, only to be greeted with the sight of Lincoln, blushing, with Lynn Jr bent over his lap, her underwear pulled down, her face just a red as her brothers, and a bright red hand print on her arse.
They all looked at each other in silence for what felt like hours, "We didn't see anything, and you didn't see anything." Rita told her children, the two of them nod, Lynn Jr getting off her brothers lap, pulling her underwear back up.
Lynn Jr, and Lincoln, watched, in silence, as their parents slowly made their way to their bedroom
"Isn't Lori still-" Lynn Jr was cut off when she heard their parents yell
"Lori?!"
Lincoln sighed, "Yep.", they were so dead, he thought.
Shout out to Isom for daring Lucy to melt her Edwin bust
So, there's been a change in plans for this story. Chapter 14 is being cut, and Chapter 13 will be the last chapter. I'm doing this because these two chapters were going to be a two-parter, and I felt the last chapter would be too short. Usually, for this story, I aim for over 2k per chapter, but below 3k.
Another reason I'm cutting a chapter is because I'm just done. I've been burnt out on this story since last month, when I came up on how I want this story to end, and once I had that in mind, I just want this story to end.
I have kinda the same problem with my other story 'Loud Defenders', but that's only because I'm sad that all those Marvel Netflix shows are cancelled, including one of my favorite TV shows of all time, 'Daredevil'
With my main story 'Super Lincoln', I'm still just as passionate for that story as I was when I first started making it.
Some people have told me I should take my time, and take a break... and I do plan on doing that, but that's not until November actually.
I've been working on all these chapters ('Super Lincoln' Ch21, 'Loud Defenders' Ch15, LTOLD2 Ch8-13, 'Peeking Sam', notes for 'Peeking Lucy', and some rewrites) since May started. (I did the LTOLD2 chapters first)
I know some people aren't happy with this story anymore, and I understand, but these chapters are already done now, I'm just releasing them every week.
Until next week, see ya.