Writers Comments
Hey everyone this is chapter 11 oh ya I'm in the double digits already. Well hope you like it
Disclaimer: I do not own Naruto
Naruto woke up and got dressed and as usual met Hinata at the front gate and they both ran to training with Jiraiya and as always caught him peeping again.
"So Hinata-Chan how should we bust him this time" Naruto said with his prankster face on
"Umm…how about we…umm well surprise me Naruto-kun" As she said that Naruto then made his way in for the kill. Very slowly he crept up to pervy sage until he was about 5 inches away from him. Naruto then made a hand seals and took two fingers and implanted them in Jiraiya's back side only to launch him a good 30 feet in pain and right in front of the girls he was peeping on. Jiraiya got quit a few lumps but not as many as usual.
"Ok kid you got me but did you have to use the 'Secret Finger Jutsu'' Jiraiya said while rubbing his butt.
"You bet I did…so what do we do today…after all it is the day before the final round of chunnin" Naruto said with a exited look
"Here's what were going to do…nothing" Jiraiya said with a smile
"WHAT…but it's the day before chunnin" Naruto said with a dropped jaw
"Ya I know the day before chunnin…you should be using this day to rest up and get your chakra levels to their peek understand…here how about I treat you two to lunch at Ichiraku's" Jiraiya said with a smile knowing that Naruto could not deny free ramen.
"Sure let's go" Naruto said while grabbing Hinata's hand
"AHH…I just can't get over how cute you two are together…Young Love" Jiraiya said with a sigh at the last part
"Hey what was that sigh for pervy sage" Naruto and Hinata looked at him with a puzzled look on their face's
"Well if you must know…when I was young I never had a date because I spent all my time chasing after one woman who was not in the least interested in me" Jiraiya said with a deeper more depressed sigh
"Really that reminds me of me back before I asked Hinata-Chan out… I was chasing after Sakura-Chan but I got rejected every time…but then I saw the signs that Hinata-Chan was giving me and I went for it" Naruto said while putting his arm around Hinata
"Well at least you knew when to give up on a lost cause…as for me I didn't and all that got me was lumps and being yelled at and called a Baka" Jiraiya said with a even sadder tone
"Oh come now Jiraiya-Sama…as are the words of my love…Never give up" Hinata said with a bright smile
"HA…easy for you to say…you two already got what you two always wanted…Oh well I have all the ladies in the world who want a peace of me" Jiraiya said striking a pose with a thumbs up at the two Genin. They both sighed while they arrived at Ichiraku's Ramen Shop and they all ordered Miso Ramen and some rice balls. But right as they all got done they just noticed that Jiraiya had disappeared and left the two genin to pay for him and themselves.
"That cheep scat perv…I swear I'm going to kill him"! Naruto said while taking out Gama-chan and paid for their meals
"It is ok Naruto-kun…I should of seen it coming" she said with a sigh
"NO, no Hinata-Chan It is not your fault…it's that cheep scat pervy sage…you should not blame yourself for things that are not your fault all the time.
"Yes Hiashi-Sama I…oh sorry Naruto I didn…" she was cut off by Naruto
"He is your father isn't he…he's the one that always keeps you down and calls you worthless" Naruto said with a serious face
"Y-yes" She said as a tear went down her cheek and was whipped away by Naruto's thumb
"Hinata-Chan…" Naruto said startling Hinata
"Don't you dare listen to him…you are the strongest and most beautiful person I know…so when he says that your weak and worthless you just remember that it doesn't matter what he thinks that it only matter's what you think…at least that is what I learned and you know what I know it is right…people would call me every name under the rainbow but I always told myself that they were wrong and that I was strong and look at me now" He was stopped by a sobbing Hinata who was had started hugging him.
"T-thank y-you n-Naruto-kun I don't k-know what I w-would do with out y-you" she said while turning her head to receive a kiss from Naruto. After about a minute of hugging and kissing and comforting Naruto finally said something
"You're the strongest person in my book Hinata-Chan" Naruto said with a kind voice
"Thanks Naruto-kun needed to get that out of me" she said whipping away the last tear on her face. "Oh Naruto-kun I just remembered…I forgot to tell you that I made it to the finals as well" She said with a smile
"WHAT…REALLY…oh Hinata that is great…see I told you that you were strong…ah man that is so awesome Hinata-Chan let's make chunnin together" Naruto said was he kept ranting on but Hinata was thinking about something completely different.
"Oh Naruto-kun…I would love to make chunnin with you but it just wont happen…because only one person can make chunnin not two so that means that we are going to have to fight even if we don't want to" she said in her head and nodding to everything Naruto was saying for she couldn't live with herself if she crushed Naruto' confidence.
"And Hinata-Chan I do realize that we might have to fight…not very excited about that but even so we should still be happy at least one of us will make chunnin and I hope you do Hinata-Chan" Naruto said with a smile. Hinata could only stare in shock he knew and he didn't care not to mention he wants her to win.
"Well good luck to both of us" She said with a smile
"Come on let's go for a walk together Hinata-Chan…while we are both still genin" Naruto said with a foxy smile
"Ok Naruto" she said while grabbing her hand. But what he didn't understand was every time they walked by a Hyuuga Hinata would release hands with him and get a good distance away from him.
"Hinata why is it every time we come near your house or near a Hyuuga you get all weird" Naruto said while scratching the back of his head
"W-well Naruto-kun I never told my father that I was seeing you and all the normal Hyuuga's that you see at the door or guarding the front gate I know personally and they agreed to keep it a secret" She was cut off by Naruto
"Why would you want to keep this a secret…I mean I know your dads not nice but" He was cut off by Hinata's crying and explaining.
"Oh Naruto-kun y-you don't understand he wants me to merry a Hyuuga and if he found out that we were together then he…would break us apart" She said while dropping to the ground in tears
"…" Naruto was silent at first still trying to let this new information sink in. "FUCK HIM…" He said scaring Hinata "I love you and there is no way some old bastard is going to take you away from me…NOT NOW NOT EVER" He said with a serious face that she had never seen before there was even some of the Kyuubi's chakra seeping out
"B-but Naruto-kun he" she was cut off by Naruto
"Do you love me"? He said still with his serious voice
"YES…but" she was cut off again
"Then…that's all you need…if we need to we can fight back…wow calm down" Naruto said with a worried voice leaving Hinata a little confused
"Who did you say that too" she said with confusion
"Kyuubi…he really was not happy about this either…he want to talk to us" Naruto said
"Ok" then Naruto grabbed her hand and they were suddenly in Kyuubi's lair
"EXPLAIN HINATA" he said with anger. She then explained the whole situation
"Dam that Hyuuga bastard…no offence…he can't break up love"! Kyuubi said while chakra began to boil out of him
"But K-Kyuubi-Sama he will" She said with tears in her eyes
"HA…just let him try…I have to ask you one thing Hinata…do you love Naruto…TRULY"? He said with seriousness
"OF COURSE…I love Naruto-kun with all my heart" She said with some aggression
"Good then you two have my support" Kyuubi said with a thunder
"Support"? She said with confusion
"Love is worth fighting for and I will be on your side if a fight does break out and hey not saying one will but I want you to keep in mind…if you want something you have to fight for it and don't worry I will personally speak to Hiashi" Kyuubi said with a bright grin
"B-but how" she said with a better voice
"Well you will see now won't you…but first you will have to tell him about you and kit and if he tries anything drastic you better worn him that he will be dealing with me at his door step in rage" Kyuubi said with a laugh
"Really Kyuubi-Sama…" she said with hope in her eyes that she and Naruto would get to be together
"You better believe it…if someone messes with the kit then they are messing with me…and that just wont slid" Kyuubi said with a demonic laugh
"I don't know how to thank you Kyuubi-Sama" she said with a smile
"Easy…Love Naruto and be with him…and we will call it even…oh and if he tries anything really bad just leave it to me and Naruto" He said with a smile
"Yes Kyuubi-Sama" she said with a bow
"Man I never get tired of that Kyuubi-Sama…no body has ever called me Sama before…so for that I thank you" Kyuubi said while think about how it would be if everyone called him Sama. Then in flash Naruto and Hinata were back in the park
"Wow Naruto-kun he will help us" She said still excited not thinking about what would happen if it did become a battle
"Ya I know even if he did not support you still have me" he said rubbing the back of his head while getting a passionate kiss from Hinata. "I want to tell him now" she said with a smile
"Dang Hinata trying to start a war already…I mean we just found out that Kyuubi would help" Naruto said sarcastically
"I know…but I feel braver then I have ever felt before and I want to do this before I lose that confidence" she said as she began to rush home and tell her father leaving Naruto in the dust. Naruto was struggling to catch up and by the time he got to her door the servant said that she had just entered Hiashi's chamber.
"OH DAM" was all Naruto said while he went on his way to Hiashi's chamber.
Writer's Comments
OH boy things are going to get ugly in there. Hey I have an idea let's vote if you think Hiashi will understand Review the answer Yes with the symbols and if you think he will be outraged and deny them then Review the answer No with the symbols. Now you don't have to do this it is just for fun the chapter will be up on Wednesday October 31, 2007. So that is when the pole closes and we will see who is right or not.