This is only the first story just think about it as a prequel. The second story is on it's way. I hope you have enjoyed reading my first try in this story. Reading a review always makes me feel like I shouldn't
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You give me my first review. I hope you have enjoyed the story and I hope I didn't disappoint.
Guest one
Thanks for your review
Guest two
I thank you too even if only one word "bad" was all you have to say.
Graves
Thanks you very much I try to make Tom as bad as possible but still keeping him on the good side,or as good our Tom could get,and Lily never seemed to be the kind of person that doesn't have the guts to stand up to anyone that pissed her off. So I
hope she is good the way I wrote her. I hope you enjoyed the story.
Sareen Momo
Thank you for taking time to read and review my story. I was very worried how I was going to make Tom being Tom but with out him murdering his family. And him still be a pure blood obsessed Dark Lord. I hope you enjoyed the end.
Sneak peek from
The Serpents Daughter.
He felt stiff, lol he had stayed in the same position for years. He couldn't hear anything around him. Slowly some memories started coming back to him. Lily with her red hair falling like a liquid silk in her shoulders. Her green eyes bright with
life and sparkling with mischief. The house at Godric's Hollow and a explosion tearing the front door apart. A pain unbelievable tearing his chest at two. And Harriet. We're was he? Why the fuck he couldn't move? And what had happened?