Hi everyone! Gamer's Fantasy back again with another chapter! And once again, it's time to look at the two more reviews of the day! First up!
Review by Rina: "La verdad no esta mal... solo que ochira... no se... no acaba de encajar con la historia.
No te desanimes y animo"
Translation: "The truth is not bad ... just ... not ... ochira not really fit with the story.
Do not get discouraged and encourage."
Ochira: What?! How dare this 'Rina' speak ill about me!
Hush Ochira, it's just an opinion. Thank you for your opinion, though. It is greatly appreciated and I would try my best to fit Ochira into the story. And I guess it's natural for Ochira not to fit with the story since he is not even from this world. And it's also weird since I added Maplestory into the story.
Second review by chapter 1 . 8h ago
No offense, I love stories that start over from the beginning, wether simple AU or time travel, time travel is always appreciated. I question why all the Straw-hats need to be killed. Besides that I actually like this, and so I shall favorite this in hopes that there will be more, Keep up the good work."
Thank you for the opinion! I also love time travel fanfiction stories as well! It's a pity that few people have made such a story that was actually successful. Some of my favourite authors are people like TheVictor and Repiece. And, as for why I chose to have all the Straw-hats to be killed, it shall be shown at a later date!
Ochira: You just have no idea on why.
I'm going to ignore that comment. So, Ochira would kind of be like Xenon, he would not remember everything in the anime and he is a hybrid as well, only that he couldn't equip warrior armor. And it also matches well with the camouflage ability since Xenon also had a skill called "Camouflage" if I'm not wrong which allows him to equip different classes' equipment. For now, Ochira's level should be between 10-15, showing how weak the Buggy Pirates are!
Anyways, onwards!
*Ochira's POV*
I saw the dagger coming towards Zoro, and suddenly I knew what to do. "Phantom!" I thought in my head.
"Good job kiddo, here you go."
And in a flash, my right hand had a cane and a deck of cards on the other and I felt a hat on my head. I felt myself being more agile and faster. Just as the dagger was about to hit Zoro, I threw a card.
Let me explain. Back in my world, I was the lousiest shooter in the world. When I tried archery, the arrow would miss the target. Even the board. But here, I knew I had Phantom's accuracy and just threw it. Miraculously a piece of card was able to even send the dagger flying elsewhere. "Who was that?!" Buggy shouted in frustration. I just replied smugly, "It's me, pal. Or was your eyes also shot off?"
Suddenly I was the centre of attention. Normally I would feel nervous but this time, I just felt as per usual. "You! You're going to die a flashy death!" Buggy yelled as he threw a bunch of knives at me. God knows where he got those from, but I needed to think fast. I barely dodged it as another array of knives came at me. I thought frantically, "Dang it! I wouldn't be able to keep up with this, even with Phantom's boost! If only I could be hard to see!"
Suddenly, I heard Buggy exclaim in surprised. "Where did that brat go?!" Buggy shouted as he looked around. I was confused as to why they are unable to see me. When I looked at myself, I gasped inwardly. I was brown! Okay, so I can camouflage myself. That must be my devil fruit ability. Okay, let's turn the tide of this battle! I thought as my equipment disappeared and out came a familiar box. I silently thanked the Mechanic Instructor as he said,
"No problem!"
As I threw it on the ground and thought of being visible, a miracle formed before my eyes.
*Luffy's POV*
I was surprised when the person who threw the card was actually Ochira! But at least he managed to save Zoro from being back-stabbed, literally. But I could only watch in horror as Buggy threw numerous knives at Ochira. But somehow, he managed to dodge them and disappeared from sight. At first I panicked but after I calmed myself down, I activated my colors of observation, or observation haki, and realised that Ochira was still there. The presence is fainter than normal people, but it's there all right. As I looked closer, I could see an almost invisible outline of Ochira which unless someone knew, they wouldn't be able to find him easily. And as I watched, Ochira's weapons disappeared and he appeared again. I thought that perhaps he reached his limit of his ability, but as I looked, he threw a box that was not originally on his hand and the box began unfolding. I thought, "Maybe he is using a smoke bomb to escape?" But as I watched, the box grew bigger and 'unfolded' into a giant robot! Sparkles came off me in waves as I thought, "Franky would love it!" and Ochira jumped on top of it and said, "Mech: Prototype!" .
Back to reality, Buggy was looking pretty damn intimidated while the pirate clowns, or clown pirates, whatever, were gasping in shock, but Zoro and Nami looked amazed. And,… I couldn't describe it! It is too awesome to! The.. the robot formed a drill with its hands, and drilled towards the pirates and knocked through them. Buggy was shocked while Ochira smirked, "ME-07 Drillhands". And finally, Ochira yelled as his robot aimed at Buggy, "Flame Launcher!" as he shot a burst of flame at Buggy. While Buggy ran around like a madman, yelling, "HOT! HOT! I'M ON FIRE!" I was reminded of Franky and his 'Fresh Fire'. "Soon we will all meet again!" He thought cheerfully. Zoro took Nami's hand and ran off while Ochira's awesome robot carried my cage and sped off into the distance.
*Some time later*
*Ochira's POV*
I finally reached the pet shop and dumped Luffy's cage onto the ground. I jumped off the Mech and it automatically closed back into a tiny box. I thought to Checky,
"Wow, this thing is really convenient! How did you do it, Checky?"
"Not a problem at all, normally we have our Mechs behind us, but since you're the chosen one, I made a state-of-the-art kind for you, that is heavy in full form and not heavier than a marble when in its box mode!"
"You're a genius!"
And as I watched, the hilarious part came. Luffy taunted the dog and managed to make Chou Chou bite him. Then, Nami tossed the key to the cage to Luffy, and Luffy, while trying to get it, somehow managed to let the dog swallow the key whole. While Luffy is strangling Chou Chou, I thought back to just now when I used my devil fruit ability. Something was wrong. Luffy couldn't have seen me, even Zoro and Nami couldn't see me, but Luffy's eyes was fixated on me. Unless it's by instincts,… I guess I'll have to investigate on this at a later time. Zoro went off somewhere to sleep while I thought about what would happen next.
"Hmm, the mayor, what was his name, Poodle? Bodo? Whatever, then the lion boy would come as well. Ah, here he comes!"
"What are you doing to poor Chou Chou?!" The mayor exclaimed angrily and explained to everyone about how the pet shop is Chou Chou's treasure from its master and the story. Soon, the lion boy, Mohji, was it, came by and smashed Luffy's cage into a pulp. Even though I desperately wanted to help Luffy fight him although Luffy could handle it by himself, Nami came and pulled me away. "He would be able to take Mohji on, I hope." She said as she dragged me into an alley.
Well, I guess that settles it for this chapter. I might put some romance between Ochira and Nami, but that should be all.
Ochira: Well, I didn't get to use Gatling Gun, but I guess that's okay, as long you put it in next chapter.
I will do what I want without you interfering!
Ochira: HEY!
Well, anyways, Ochira and Luffy doesn't know each other very well. Ochira does not know that Luffy came from the future and Luffy doesn't know that Ochira knew everything about him and his life. Ochira would probably watch the anime until the Dressrosa Ark, or something. But that is another story for another chapter! For now, Gamer's Fantasy, signing off!
Ochira: Good bye!
