ok so id like to thank maggie230173 for being my beta ur the best lol....

ok so im at my daddys house rite now so i wont post but this once cus i wanna see my 7 wk old baby sis who i havnt seen in bout 2 wks lol k so yea lol id like to thank all the pplz who have gave me some ideas ima try to put some in the story lol but idk wut wuld work lol but i got some ideas now i dnt think i have writers block anymore but idk lol now on to thy story...


Chapter 11

MPOV

We were sitting in the dinning room talking. Turns out that the girl I didn't know was Nudge, Fang and Iggy's adopted sister, and that Jamie had grown up with Nudge in an orphanage, so they have been best friends ever since.

"Yo Iggy, can I talk to you?" Fang had come in wearing the clothes he had on yesterday and was carrying bags, and looked ticked… 'Wow he looks hot when he's ticked, I wonder what happened and where he went… wait why isn't Iggy making breakfast? I'm hungry.

"Bout time you got back." Iggy said 'looking' at Fang. I noticed that Fang was watching me as he dragged Iggy out the door.

"So, Max, are you going swimming with us?" Angel turned toward me smiling.

"Um, sorry honey I can't I don't have a swimsuit." Her face fell, then perked back up when Nudge said, "I have one that is a bit big for me but it would fit you."

Angel gave me her bambi eyes. "Please Max? We haven't been swimming in forever, please?"

"Yeah, please Max? I bet you would look cute in a bikini, and I bet Fang would love it. He likes…" Nudge was saying but Jamie covered her mouth.

"Shhh he wouldn't want her to know," She whispered to Nudge.

"He should, it concerns her" Nudge whispered back.

"What concerns me?" I asked curious.

They jumped then turned to look at me. "Nothing," they said at the same time.

Can't they just tell me? I thought about Fang, how his lips felt against mine, how his silky, long, black hair his face when he looks down at me. How his skin felt under my finger tips. How his endless, smooth, emotionless, dark brown eyes seem to look right through me and seem to know everything. How his smile… god his smile…oh how I love his smile…and his laugh how his smile and laugh make- what am I thinking? Ugh, why do I keep thinking about him? I realized every one was giving me bambi eyes waiting for my answer.

"Ugh, Fi-"

"Breakfast is ready" I turned to see Fang and Iggy carrying many plates full of pancakes.

Thirty minutes later

"So, Max, are you going swimming with us?" Ella asked. We were in the dinning room still and the guys had just left to change.

All throughout breakfast neither I nor Fang had talked much. He had sat next to me and everyone was off in there own conversation, Iggy talking about bombs and fire to Gazzy, Ella talking to Jamie about classes, and Angel talking to Nudge about our old houses. So we didn't talk much but I did keep catching Fang watching me from the corner of his eyes. We mostly just sat silent and ate which surprisingly the pancakes were delicious, and Fang was right everything disappeared after the first 10-20 minutes. I looked at Angel and Nudge who were still giving me bambi eyes.

"Ugh, Fine!" I gave in.

"YAY!!!! Now let's go change, I want to see how the bikini looks on you." I was shocked. That's about the least I've ever heard her say. She dragged me out the door and to her room.

FPOV

What is taking them so long? I mean it's been about ten fifteen minutes since they left to- HOLY (enter swear word of your choice here)!!!!!!

Max had just walked out in a bikini….a black bikini….Max, in a bikini…..Max……in a……bikini….wow.

"Fang, haven't you learned that it's impolite to stare?" Max said with a forced laugh.

I realized my mouth was hanging open and quickly shut it, "Well, if you weren't wearing that," I gestured toward the sexy bikini top and what looks like a sheet that was semi covering the bottoms she was in, "I wouldn't be."

"So what you're saying is that when you see a girl in a bikini top and a 'sarong' you have to stare?" she said with a smirk.

"Uh…no…it's just…I…uh…never….uh…seen you in a….um…uh…bikini." I stuttered, face flushing. What's a sarong?

"Well, I'd hope not. Then you'd be considered a stalker." She started to untie and take of the sheet thing to reveal a matching bikini bottoms. "Now move I'm going to jump in," she said as Nudge, Ella, Angel, and Jamie, came running out.

Nudge was wearing her sky blue bikini (what's up with girls and bikinis?), Ella was wearing a white bikini with some band on it, Jamie was wearing a pink bikini, and Angel was in a flower one piece.

"Hey Max….," Nudge gestured for Max to lean down as she stretched to whisper something in her ear. Then she giggled and Max blushed…She looks so cute when she blushes. A splash of water pulled me from my thoughts. I turned to see Max emerge from the water, reaching to pull me in.

MPOV

Where are Nudge, Ella, Angel, and Jamie? They said they were right behind me. I was wearing Nudge's new bikini, the top was black with a strip of white at the bottom and a split in the middle tied, with a bow, at the top to pull the top up and going around to be a thick band in the back and string straps to go around the neck. And the bottoms were black also, with lace around the top of my thigh and on my waist with what Nudge liked to call a 'sarong', which was basically a sheet, tied around my waist, to cover the bottoms some, it was white with semi strips. (A/N I can't describe well so the picture is on my profile) How can girls wear this? I feel so exposed like I'm showing everything I got, I hate this.

I got to the pool and saw Fang, Iggy, and Gazzy all waiting for us. Iggy was in plain blue swim trunks, Gazzy was in black swim trunks with flames on the side, and Fang…God Fang looks good…He was soaking wet, and wearing black (big shocker) swim trunks with two red stripes down each side. I noticed he was staring at me, mouth open, and quickly said, with a forced laugh, "Fang, haven't you learned that it's impolite to stare?"

He shut his mouth, "Well, if you weren't wearing that," he gestured to what I was wearing," I wouldn't be."

"So what you're saying is that when you see a girl in a bikini top and a 'sarong' you have to stare?" I said with a smirk.

"Uh…no…it's just…I…uh…never….uh…seen you in a….um…uh…bikini." he stuttered, face flushing.

"Well, I'd hope not. Then you'd be considered a stalker," I said as I started to untie and take off the 'sarong' thing so I can jump in the pool to swim. "Now move I'm going to jump in," I said as Nudge, Ella, Angel, and Jamie, came running out.

"Hey Max," Nudge said gesturing for me to lean down as she stretch to whisper in my ear, "I think Fang likes the bikini, he keeps staring at you." she giggled and I blushed. I ran and jumped in the pool, then reached and pulled Fang in.


oki so yea theres tht cappie im workin on chappie 12 now lol and in it (WARNING some spoilers for next chappie) I am using 1 of the ideas for a reveiwer.... fang is going to see some stuff, but ignore it, and fang is going to say and do some stuff he might regret lol

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