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"You are both so useless, it is an embarrassment to our village for you both to act this way." Gara said in an icy tone, "We can continue gathering information on Longwo tomorrow. If she is not in fact a ninja then how is she so skilled? We should be careful."

"Yes, Gara." Both of them said in unison again

Well I know know what they think of me. Now It is time to spy on Orochimaru.

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I jumped from roof top to roof top, it was absolutely pitch black, but what makes it really strange is the silence, there is no noise. No drunken ninjas celebrating another day alive no babe crying for their mother. There is defiantly something strange going on. As soon as I came into this village I noticed that something was strange. Other than everything covered in sand. I may not be able to tell the hokage a bought the chunin exams but I might be able to find something else, so that I won't just be hanging around doing nothing.

I jump down to the ground and go into an ally way. I look up just in time to see a scouting ninja jump over me. He looked on high alert. No something is defiantly up. I jump from the ally way on to a roof. It may be risky, I would defiantly have a higher risk of being seen, but on the other hand it might be worth it. I might be able to find a pattern in something.

I retied my hair with some of the black weighted bandages, and started to run up to one of the watch towers near the center of town. I made sure to keep to the shadow. And god knows I have had more than a lifetime of practice to do that. When I got to the base I went to the side where the moon made the shadow and put some chakra in my feet as I started to scale the wall. As I got to the top I casted a small genjutsu that made the guards fall asleep. Don't want to wake up the whole city.

I leaned agents one of the poles and closed my eyes. I focused on every beating heart in this city. Then I cut it down to the people that are moving more than in the confines of a room. There! I have 25 ninjas running in a distinct pattern of checkpoints. Strange they all seem to be in a circle around a small house. I focus on the heart beats in that house, none. That cannot be right. Wait. Wow I feel really stupid. I stared to focus under the surface.

"Yup, underground layer." I whispered to my self

If Orochmaru is somewhere you have to have an experimentation Lab. There are not as many people there as I thought. Though some or most are probably already dead. Though right now might not be the best time to infiltrate. I might want to cheek the records in Orochimarus 'office'. As soon as I scale down the tower. I took off the genjutsu.

As soon as I scale down the tower. I took off the genjutsu that I had placed on the guards, they won't remember a thing. And I ran towards the Kazekagues office. I'm not sure whether there would be more surveillance here or at Orochimaurs layer. Most likely there but I had better be safe than sorry.

I didn't take me long to get to the building, the only bad thing was that it looked like every other building just taller. Or maybe that is just me mushing everything together in the dark. Either way I jump up to a random window and crouch vertically on the wall. This chakra control is a lot easier than I thought. I close my eyes and make a few hand signs when I open my eyes there is an exact clone of me made of sand staring back at me. We nod to each other and my clone goes towards the window.

First thing that I know from experience is that you do not want to go in to an enemy base first. You always want a scout of some sort. This is even better though because I can see what my clone sees. After a few seconds in there the clone decides that it's safe no traps or any kind of surveillance. I hide all of my presence I cover up my chakra and even stop my heart. The heart beat is not necessary at all in fact at times it is a real nuisance. It is just a type of camouflage. I mean let's say you are meeting a new person and they shake your hand and you are ice cold. Especially if you are staying in a warm place, it is also something that can make you feel a little closer to the humans.

I go into the room keeping close to the wall. If any one comes in I want to be able to hide as fast as I can. And if someone does catch me, I think it would be better for them to fight my clone first, right. This way I can see how they fight maybe even pick up a few things. I wait by the wall as I make another clone. Then they we all look over the room. It is filled with files. My lucky day this must be one of the record keeping rooms. It doesn't take long for my clones to find something. One brings it over to me. I really do not need to read it though because I know what they know. The file contains info on certain areas that are not to be developed or sold. There is also a bunch of buildings that the Kazekague had bought. All of this has happened over the areas where the underground base is.

Now the only thing to do is get to the Kazekague or Orochimarus room to see if there is any other stuff I might be able to find. I let my clones dissolve into sand and fly towards the door they open it and scavenge the halls. I walk after them. This cannot be right. This is probably the most important building in Suna and there is no protection.

Maybe there will be an ambush? Ooooh that would be existing. The Kazekagues office is just a bit down the hall. As I get to the door I realize something. If Orochimaru and I get into a large scale fight we could destroy this village. No that won't happen I won't let the story line be disturbed.

I open the Kazekages door. Unlocked. There is defiantly going to be an ambush. As I step inside the room I bring together one of my sand clones next to me. The other I have form instantly where I am as I move extremely fast to the edge of the room and let the darkness take me into the wall. This should make them think, at least I hope, that I just brought one clone back and I myself am standing there. But just to be safe I slowly bring the clone that is meant to be the real me to the wall and have her blend in.

Then the other clone starts to walk around the room looking through the piles of paper on the desk and through the desk drawers. Nothing of what I am looking for here, but of course what would I expect. The info I need just lying there in front of me. Both my clones give a slight laugh. I have small checklist that I should go through before I start checking manually. First on the list, genjutsu. "Relies." I whisper as I make a sign with one hand. Nope. Nothing. Ok next on the list, I summon some sand and have it cover every inch of the room. I look up down all around. Nope nothing. Ok next, I have my clone gather some chakra in her feet and summon some wind there. She quietly floats up to the roof of this place, and lightly knocks. She waits for a reaction somewhere, no, solid. she trys a few feet to her left and knocks, also solid. she try's a few feetforward and knocks. "Bingo" clone #1, and #2 whisper.

Clone #1 pulls a kuni from her pouch and presses into the roof. It slices through easily. But as the kuni goes a little further in it grazes something. A wire? She slowly comes down, and in a perfectlystraight line goes towards the edge of the room and knocks. Hollow. She slowly sticks her kuni in and feels for another wire. Wow really? Ok this is a bit annoying.

I have clone #1sent a short pulse of chakra threw the kuni into the wire. I close my eyes as I feel the chakra flow threw the wire. It slows down at a few points, probably areas that I would have stopped to slow me down. But finally it stops right at the foot of the Kazekagues desk. Clone #1 cuts a square size hole into that spot.. In there is a small lever. Clone #1 pushes it down. and a trap door in the roof opens right where I thought it was. As my clone walks over to the trap I can hear three approaching heart beats all of their chakra is masked. I think they might be trying to sneak up on me. Ok so here comes the ambush.

As clone #1 goes to retrieve the papers. They have now entered the building. Clone #1 looks through the papers. The three people just enter the building. Clone #1 looks through thepapers. I watch as her eyes widen.

"No this... this can't be." all three of us whisper. At that exact moment two guards and the Kazekage comes in. Clone #1 gives a great big smile, and I make the papers explode into fire.

"How nice to see you gentlemen." clone #1 says

"Who the hell are you?" one of the ninjas asked, slowly pulling out a shuriken.

"Oh I'm nobody." clone #1 says as she gently pores the ashes to the ground.

"Attack." the Kazekage says. The two ninja immediately jump into the air. And they both slice through the clone one threw the top and the other threw he middle. They jump away and stand protectively in front of the Kazekage, as clone #1 crumbles into sand, and slowly the second clone comes out.

Unknown's pov.

I was pulled from my lab at this hour for this? Someone sneaking in? This whole Kazekage thing is really taking the time away from my experiments, and it is so close to the time when I plan to infiltrate the Leaf village. It does not take us long to reach the building. If there was anyone here I would have felt them. Unless it is someone very good, I really do not need any distractions, but an occasional torture session might be nice.

As we reach the room I can feel both the ninja that are with me tense up and I could tell why. There in front of me was th woman hat ha come into Suna with the Suna siblings. She was beautiful hen and even more so now, but what is she holding? I take a quick glance around the room and see the levers and the trap door, just in time to see the papers catch fire in her hands. How she made no hand signs? And to top it off those papers were not mine. But they could have held something use full. It is sad to let such beauty die, but I really have no time for this.

"How nice to see you gentlemen." she said with a smile

"Who the hell are you?" one of my ninjas asked, slowly pulling out a shuriken. the other was getting reay to attack as well.

"Oh I'm nobody." she says as she gently pores the ashes to the ground she stares at them for a few seconds as if she is trying to understand something.

"Attack" I said. I feel the pressure in the two ninja go after they attack the woman. She does nothing, she has accepted death, is an exceptional ninja or, I think as I watch the woman start to crumble, is a clone. My eyes narrow as the real one half way comes out of the wall, no, not the wall the darkness. It seems as if it is attached to her, no as if she is the darkness. I have never seen any this like this before. I get ready to both attack and defend myself. The woman gracefully brings her arm up. I want her.

The woman flips her wrist up and the sand that was on the floor suddenly fly's into the air and into the mouths of the two ninja I brought. What is she doing? Suddenly the two ninja double over. Ah I see they can't breath.

"What a smart trick putting the sand into their lungs, so they won't be able to breath." I say as the woman fully comes out of the darkness. "I am only curios as to why you didn't attack me?" I say I watch her star at the ninja dying at her feet. There is something in her eyes, but what is it? Pity? No. Happiness? No. Ah. I think I see it now. It is like the reawakening of something.

"You know." she said gently moving the head of one of the dead bodies from side to side. "I always thought that suffocation was the least good way for someone to die. Well that and old age. You see." she said pushing the head so hard to the side that all the mussels were ripped off and the head was only connected to the body by a few strands of clothing, and blood was pooling around her feet. "Well or starters there is never any blood." with a small smile playing on her lips, but also there is something strange a bought her eyes. "And it's silent" she whispers. "Maybe it's just me but I guess that I have grown to love to screams." she said looking up into the air. Oh I have got to have her. She would be perfect in my little collection. "Oh I'm sorry back to your question of why I didn't kill you. Well you see I have plans for you." she says, what?! Does she even realize who I am talking to! "Oh yes I know very well to whom I am addressing Oochimaru. Oh and don't worry I have no intention of getting in the way of any of your 'projects'. Oh yes I know all a bought you. Your history were you grew up, who your friends were, what happened in the leaf village, all a bought you 'revenge'. Everything you are doing now. And even what you are planning to do in the future."

"Who the hell are you!?" I ask this can't be how could she possibly know anything a bought me?! Not only is everything a bought me top secret to every one everywhere, but even the Akatski don't know everything a bought me.

"Your bluffing." I say

"Really now, what gave you the idea that I could possibly care? No, I am just giving you information. I couldn't careless what you do with it." she says with a shrug. Who the hell is this person?

"Now, believe what you want, but I am in control here and here and I would advise agents testing that. And you know, as a little present I will help with the cleanup." at that second all the blood was now in the air. Then it all formed itself into a sphere and flew into her hands. "Finally, now if you do not mind I will be taking my leave." she said with a curt nod and walked right around me.

I tried to bring up my hand to make a hand sign I won't let this one get away with dis respecting me. But before I could do anything a kuni made of.. of blood? I look up to see, "A twin?!" I growl.

"No." she said gesturing with her head to look at the other. The other waved to me with a small smile on her face. Then she crumbled. "Just a clone." she said as the sphere of blood floated over to her. "Now what did I say a bought me not wanting to interfere. Tisk tisk isk, now look at what you made me do." I looked down to my hand in time to see the blood kuni gild into the sphere of blood, and saw a hole in my hand. "God dam bitch!" I spit at her.

"Oh don't fuss you are such a child I am sure Kankuro can fix that up for you in a pinch. Oh and also before I forget do not disturb me while I am here or anywhere else for that matter; you don't bother me and I won't bother you." she says

"How dare you!" I yell just as I say that she throws back her head and laughs. She is talking to me as if I am some kind of child. When she calms down she shakes her head, and walks down the hall.

"I am not afraid of you!" I yell after her

She turns back around and slightly tilts her head to the side, "Good, that just means you will be more fun to kill." she says and just then the lights flicker and she is gone.

Back to Sara's Pov.

I squat in a small ally way as I slowly drink, It may not be fresh but it's human. I think I lost myself a bit in there, but those papers disturbed me. They were defiantly not Orochimarus and I don't think they were the Kazekages ether. But either way how could something like that end up here? It had on it info on the birthing of possible immortals. No one would have been able to decipher them but still the fact that they exist in this world is not good. And by not good I mean rrrreeeeeeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaaall lllllllly not good.

"Ah that was refreshing." I say as I stand up. I jump onto the near rest roof and start heading back. As I am jumping from roof to roof I smell more fresh blood. "What could be going on now?" I follow the blood to a small balcony and when I look inside my heart breaks.

I see a bought 4 dead ninja on the ground, torn in horrible ways but what hurts me is to see well the elephant in the room. There is a large sphere of sand in the middle of t room. I am just guessing this is Garas room and there was another assassination attempt. The poor boy, even with his father dead there is still this contempt that the people willingly try to assassinate him. I lightly step into the room. Trying not to disturbed anything and gently put my hand on the sand sphere.

"I do not wish to harm him." I say trying to put all the feelings of kindness and love that I can into my hand. "Please. I want to help him." Slowly the sand pulls me in, but it is not threatening. All of a sudden I hear screaming, but it is pitch black I can't see Gara. I reach out and as soon as I feel him I pull him into an embrace. He isn't asleep the jinchuuriki is just giving him really bad fits of daydreams. I rock him back and forth and whisper "everything is ok, every thin is ok." But he keeps screaming. Then I shake him "WAKE UP GARA"

He gives one final scream then jolts up. "Who is there?" Gara yells I can feel tears roll down his face. "shh, it's ok I am not going to hurt you, you're safe." I whisper as I rock him back and forth and rub his back. I feel him relax into my arms.

"no I can't sleep" Gara barely whispers, "Please help." I hear a woman's voice whisper I the air

So as I rock him back and forth I put my forehead to his. And immediately I am in front of the jinchuuriki. There is sand everywhere and I look into the jinchuuriki eyes.

"You are a strange human to be here." the jinchuuriki says

"Well who said I am human." I say tilting my head to the side

"True you do not smell human, you smell of death." the jinchuuriki says

"Yes, I would expect that, you have a very keen nose jinchuuriki." I say with a slight nod

"Now why have you come here?!" the jinchuuriki yells

"Now really, no need to yell. I am just here to tell you to let the boy sleep for a bit." I said shrugging and bringing my hands up.

At that the monster starts to laugh. "You do know that when that boy sleeps I can come out to play. So why not!"

"Oh come now do not take me or a fool he will sleep in his own form and without the night mares." I say

" Oh will he now," the jinchuuriki's said as lowers his eyes "and what gives you the authority to tell me what to do."

"Well I you don't I could just kill the boy. I also know if the boy dies so do you." I say

"Ah that's no fun,… I won't change, but there is nothing I can do a bought the dreams." the jinchuuriki says

"Deal." I say

"Deal." the jinchuuriki says, "Hay! Just out of curiosity what would you do if I said no?!"

As I started to disappear I let my black chakra leak out and surround some of me and made my eyes red. "Well" I said with a small smile, "You can't exactly escape intense torture, now can you." right before I totally disappeared I saw the jinchuuriki give me a smile.

I slowly woke up to see the nothing it was still pitch black. Gara was still wake but barely. "Everything is fine go to sleep."

"No…I can't… he…" gara barely whispered.

"This was a song that was taught to me a long time a go it holds magic in its words. Do not be scared I will protect you. (now start song on side)

Now let the day Just slip away So the dark night may watch over you Velvet blue, silent true It embraces your heart and your soul Nocturne
Never cry, never sigh You don't have to wonder why Always be, always see Come and dream the night with me Nocturne
Have no fear When the night draws near And fills you with dreams and desire Like a child asleep So warm, so deep You will find me there waiting for you Nocturne
We will fly, claim the sky We don't have to wonder why Always be, always see Come and dream the night with me Nocturne
Though darkness lay It will give way When the dark night delivers the day Nocturne"

The next morning…

I woke up to see the bodies all around me. Then I remembered what happened last night with Orochimaru and Gara. "Oh Gara!" I said I looked to my side, and there was Gara sleeping soundly. The sand had collapsed as a bed around us and Gara ad snuggled into me. "Aaaaawwww, how adorable!" I whisper too afraid to wake him up. I look around the room, now how am I supposed to get rid of these bodies? Then I feel Gara move a little. I look down at him to see him staring up at me.

"Did you sleep well?" I ask, Gara nodded

"Do you feel an better?" I ask, Gara nodded again

"Would you like to sleep some more?" Gara snuggled into me and nodded. I wrapped my arms around him and hummed Nocturne as he ell asleep in my arms again.

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