The Founding of Brokenclan

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Muffins taste nice: thankyou for reviewing! Iagree it was a bit short I'll try to do better.

Chapter 11: step by step

Brokenwings POV

I was so relieved when Robin walked out of Sunnys den free and unharmed, we decided if we were serious about starting a clan we needed to start by finding a place where our clan could live.

We journeyed away from the clans forest following the Thunderpath until we reached a bigger two-leg place with lots of Thunderpaths and tall dens, it was too large to go around so we had to go through.

There was no prey-scent anywhere along the hard paths covered in Twoleg rubbish and slimy water puddles but in this maze of dens and more Twolegs than either of us had ever seen we found someone who could join us on our journey and be the first apprentice of Brokenclan.

As we walked through the streets I put my tail on
Robins shoulder ears perked upwards listening because I thought I could hear the meowing of a kit coming from the alley we were passing.

" Robin, I think theres a kit down here" I whispered slowly limping down the alley trying to figure out where the kit was, Robin followed eyeing the torn plastic bags and muck with suspicion.

" Why would a kit be here?" I paused the meows were coming from behind a black plastic bag which from the smell contained more Twoleg rubbish I slowly crept forward I didn't want to startle the kit into running away.

The kit was trapped with its tail pinned under one of the black bags, it was had a white underbelly and paws and black everywhere else, the kit turned and looked straight at me and I froze, I understood how I had managed to sneak up on it when I saw its clouded blue eyes. This kit was blind.

" Its rude to stare you know!" the kit spat at us the voice was that of a she-kit, a very annoyed and angry she-kit,

" I know I'm sorry" I meowed quietly " my name is Brokenwing and behind me is Robin would you like us to free you?" I asked the kit seemed to think over our offer before nodding.

As soon as I nosed the bag off the she-kits tail she bolted but not knowing that Robin was standing between her and freedom she plowed right into his legs, Robin picked up the protesting kit by the scruff and looked at me waiting for me to do something.

" please listen to us, we'll let you go if you decide what we are offering isn't for you but first what is your name?" the she-kit stopped protesting and looked at me like I had bees in my brain.

" My name is Bat don't you know anything?" I closed my eyes and held my breath if I was going to do this I had to be patient and try in explain this in a way that Bat would understand,

" Robin and I are going to find a place to live with lots of other cats, a place with lots of prey and clean water and nice places to sleep, we'll all take turns hunting and patrolling our borders and there might be other kits for you to play with, but the most special thing about our group is that most of the cats will be like you and me" Bat tipped her head to the side.

" So all the cats will be blind too?" I let out a purr I liked Bat she was strong-willed and stubborn but she was clever once we figured out how to train her she would be a good addition to our clan.

" No I'm not blind I have a twisted back leg, all the cats in our group which we will call Brokenclan will have something that makes life a bit harder so maybe some of them will be blind but others might be deaf or mute or they might be missing a few body parts, but we'll make a way so we can all hunt and patrol and fight off intruders would you like to be our first member?" Bat surprised Robin by turning as much as she could and licking him on the nose, he almost dropped her.

" I'd love to join! Do we have to have a funny name like yours?" Robin and I start walking out of the alley while I think of how best to answer.

" eventually we will all have names like mine but first we have to find a place for our camp and find more cats" as we walk through Twoleg place for the first time I actually think we can do this.