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S.P.O.V
I'm extremely hungry and I miss my family. All I remember is waking up in this castle type place and a person leaving and locking the doors. I picked up the note the person left and I once again and read it. "Dear Blondie, You are too much of a threat to me. I love puck and I couldn't just let you steal him. You will probably die within a month of starvation (a bit too long if you ask me). But I gave you food; I'm so nice I made you a PB&J sandwich, cereal, and a cup of water. Hate you, cherry.
It wasn't so nice to give me that food because I'm allergic to peanuts and I'm lactose and tolerant. So all I did was have pieces of breath that didn't have the peanut butter and then I to a gulp of water a day. And so far I've been here a week and 6 days. I know for sure I lost a lot of weight. I'm pretty sure that it is one of the family members because school didn't know. So the only people that has potential to do this are red and . But they both love me so it is probably magic.
R.P.O.V
I ran downstairs to show granny the ring. And Puck was walking behind me. " granny I was wearing the crazy 4 you ring and I feel like I did something well… crazy and I don't remember what" I said in a rush. "Who did you fall for?" she asked me. I pointed towards puck. "Well this ring makes you forget what you did when you had this ring on. So did you tell puck you liked him?" She asked.
"Yeah she did and I told her I only liked her as a sister. She told me she grew up so we could be together forever and I told her I only love Sabrina then she left. The next day (which is today) Sabrina was gone. And then she came up to me and her ring fell and she blacked out and when she woke up she was really confused. Then she put the ring back on and I realized what ring she had on but before I could take it off she rubbed the ring on me and some of the love stuff came onto me and we kissed for like 2 seconds. But then the ring fell off and we blacked out and I fell on her. When I woke up both of out eyes was closed and we thought we were kissing other people but when we opened our eyes we well um … realized that we were wrong." He explained.
" well red, puck I think red might have did something crazy just because you told her you didn't like her." Granny said. All of a sudden I got a massive headache and I saw pictures. One was me putting a plastic bag over Sabrina another was me putting her in a castle and another was me writing her a note. I was screaming because all the pain it brought me. They probably thought I was losing it. Then the pain left and I was okay again. "Lucinda lane … the … big castle… the 14th cell… get Sabrina NOW … the ring made me do it… I'm not crazy anymore… destroy that ring… and get SABRINA …. LIKE NOW!" I stuttered and yelled the last part. I then noticed I didn't have to because I soon as I said get Sabrina, puck ran out.
P.P.O.V
I ran out of there and flew to the castle across town. I was afraid that Sabrina would be hurt but happy that she still loved me. I reached there in a matter of minutes and opened the door by turning into a rhino and knocking my head into the door. The door flung open the door and ran to the 14th cell. And saw Sabrina lying by the cage. Her face was pale, her eyes looked tired, her lips were chapped and she looked like she lost 5 pounds. But still I never saw someone look that beautiful. Whoa that was a major sappy moment. The cell door was already open so I ran threw and picked up Sabrina and flew out this place.
Before I went back home I picked up some Chinese food; honey chicken w. pork fried rice which happened to be her favorite. When I walked through the door with her everybody looked cheerful and happy. I sat Sabrina down in a chair and gave her the food. And I never saw anyone eat food that hungrily and fast before. When she was done she quickly fell asleep. "I'm really sorry Puck" red apologized. "It's ok rosy. Plus it wasn't your fault it was the rings fault" I said. Where was that evil ring? I looked around to see granny with the ring on her finger.
"Ha ha ha … your soooo funny and soooo strong too" granny said in a really girly voice while twirling her hair. She kissed him on the cheek and then walked away but not before she blew him another kiss towards him. was smiling and blushing. It looks like Sabrina is going to have another grandpa.
Okay that's it. That's my story. It was a pretty boring ending. But still that's it. I'm going to try to put on the links for the older Daphne and Red, red's outfit and the love ring.
