First a thank you to my reviewers:
Dancer96 - Thank you so much.
Lizardmomma - Glad you like it.
soraya - Hmm. I'm not quite sure what you mean. Do you mean that you think I have changed their personalities from what they were when I last had them in an episode. If I have, then I am sorry. I am trying to be consistant. Alanna can be as hot tempered as her power. She takes the few minutes between her and Jani very seriously and tries to be a good big sister to both Jani and Hank. Jani, on the other hand, is more calm and quiet. That's not too say she doesn't occationally speak her mind, especially around her family. It's just that's she's usually the quieter twin. While Alanna is the big sister, Jani is more motherly, not to her sister of course, and not so much to her brother, but she loves kids and is more interested in marriage and a family of her own than her sister is. Hank is the studious one, not my nature, but by shear desperation. He is terrified that though he has whitelighter powers, he has no witch powers which would make him the odd man out, since the only other ones without powers are the three from the other time line . . . though by the end of this chapter, make that two, and Hope who simply hasn't come into them. What scares him the most is the fact that he can't even cast a spell, something he spends most of his free time trying to do, any spell. What gives him the most hope is the fact that in "The Demon of Confusion" he didn't freeze. I attempt to keep them within that mold.
TaintedDarkInuShemeeko - I loved Hope's reaction there, and Wyatt's reaction to it all. That was fun. I'm glad you like how I am making the twins different. As I state above I have very distinct ideas of what I am doing with Paige's three kids, maybe more than any of the other kids.
Again, this took longer to post than I had hoped, but that's what happens when I get caught up in my writing. If I do not update in the next three days, I will not be updating for about a week. Most of my family is going to attend my Grandma's memorial service. I will be bringing my writing with me, so I may get more written, but since this story is two episodes behind, you only have to worry about if you review. I will try and make sure that I post something before I leave if anyone reviews. Enjoy.
Chapter Eleven – The Other Dimension
Darryl was seated at his desk looking at the reports in front of him. The only thing that popped out at him was the fact that not one parent had reported the child missing, not to the police. Two parents had actually had to be notified that their sons were missing. A knock on the door pulled his attention away from the reports. "Enter."
The door opened and a lieutenant poked his head in. "Commander, there is a family here. I don't think it's about the missing kid case, but they asked specifically to see you."
"Send them in," Darryl instructed him. "I'm expecting some people who might have some info on the case."
The lieutenant nodded and pushed the door open all the way. He stepped into the room to let them by.
Prue entered first with Pat behind her.
After them was Alanna and Janice.
Hank entered with a notepad in hand. He was writing, but he stopped as he entered the room and studied Darryl.
Darryl tried not to show the thoughts going through his head as Andy entered behind Hank.
Vicki entered without any notice from anyone. Her eyes grew wide as she looked around the room. She didn't even seem to notice Darryl or the lieutenant.
"Thank you, Lieutenant."
The lieutenant left the room quickly, having other things to work on.
As soon as the door shut behind him, Darryl rose from his seat. He walked over to Andy and pulled him into a hug, patting his back before letting him go. "I can't believe you're standing in front of me."
Andy grinned back at him. "Quite frankly, neither can I. It's good to see you, Darryl, very good to see you."
"So can you guys actually help me with this, or is this just a very nice reunion?" Darryl asked, willing to go with either one.
"Shh!" Vicki demanded. "I need to listen."
Darryl frowned and looked at her.
Andy smiled. "That is my younger daughter, Victoria Penelope Trudeau. She's usually more polite than that."
"Daddy, she's trying to tell me something," Vicki informed him. "Do you want her to tell you instead?"
Andy frowned. "Who's trying to tell you something, Vicki?"
"The girl by the window," Vicki announced. "Don't you see her?"
"No one's there, Vicki," Pat tried telling her.
Vicki glared at her. "That's not very nice. She's there all right." She walked closer to the window and reached out her hand. "It's all right. My sister . . . actually I'm not sure why she said that." Then, her hand hit the wall and she jumped back. "Oh! Oh! Not good."
"Vicki?" Prue looked at her daughter, questioningly. "What's wrong?"
"My hand. . ." Vicki gulped. She blinked and looked straight ahead of her with narrowing eyes. "Mom, I think . . ."
"Do you see a ghost?"
Vicki shook her head. "Remember, I told you I had seen Alanna and Janice in my dreams?"
Prue nodded. "We thought maybe you had a prophetic dream."
"Am I dreaming?"
Prue frowned. "No, Sweetie. You're awake."
Vicki looked at the wall, seeing something no one else saw. "Who are you?"
"Vicki, no one's there," Prue told her softly.
"You're wrong, Mom," Vicki announced. She turned and looked at Darryl. "Her name is Marissa Edison. She says you have a file on her."
Darryl frowned and started flipping through the files. Soon enough he came across one with the right name. "Here she is. Marissa Edison, fifteen. You're saying she's here? What is she, invisible?"
Vicki shook her head. "Actually, she can't see you, only me. She says that this whole building seems empty."
"Then, how did she know about the report?"
"She can see objects and stuff, just not people," Vicki informed him. "She knows people are here, because she's seen stuff moving all over the place." Vicki looked at her parents. "I think I have my powers back. I still don't know what they are, but I think they're back." She pointed at the wall. "I guess none of you can see her, but that girl is there. She's alive. And I think we need to call Aunt Piper.
The next chapter was one hundred percent inspired by WyattChris, a friend on another site who has recently joined this site as Chris' Adorer. I made an offhanded comment in the previous episode about what certain characters were doing in a week and she asked if we were going to be seeing that. So for a little more insight into the mind of my warlock and those around him, the next chapter is called "The Happiest Place on Earth". Can you guess where they are? And can you guess which character is anything but happy . . . and Max doesn't count.
For anyone who wants to read ahead, there are several additional chapters on my sight, but you have to be a member to read the latest episode. For those who really want to read ahead, the entire story can be found along with the entire next episode on Alternate Charmed: All the Possiblities, also a member only site, the one where I have my one shots posted or else The Charmed Sons proboard site. On The Charmed Sons site, there are also several chapters of episode fifteen and you do not have to be a member to read there.
Vicki is right. She has gotten her powers back. If you'd like a little idea of what powers each of the kids has (since I imagine most Charmed fans know the powers of the four sisters), then keep reading.
Pat - Hasn't gotten them back, but it's a fire power.
Vicki - No name yet, but it involves seeing into other time lines and other dementions . . . usually in her sleep.
Melinda - Hasn't gotten any back yet, but she can cast spells, again.
Wyatt - Orbing, teleorbing, telekinesis, the fire thing from IF (though he hasn't actually come into that one), healing, and other powers from the show that I can't recall off the top of my head.
Chris - Orbing, teleorbing, telekinesis, invisibility, elder jingle, and one power he's used by doesn't know about yet.
Ladybug - Levitation, heart orbing . . . or whatever you want to call it
Cilly - Empathy, heart orbing, various as yet unknown abilities with her cupid ring
Hope - Has not come into them yet
Alanna - Pyrokinesis
Janice - Cryokinesis
Hank - All whitelighter powers
What will happen with Pat, Vicki, Melinda, Hope, and Hank's powers will be revealed in time, some sooner than others. Three episodes that directly or indirectly deal with the powers of any of these are "Witch Eater", "Paying the Piper", and "Blood Will Tell". Of course this one deals with Vicki's to at least some degree.
