I'm kind of wondering if my story is boring or just way to complicated or confusing? Someone tell me? I need some helpful criticism so plz review lol. Yeah! Naruto is on cartoon network here in America now that gives me more insight on how the characters act.

Thank you everyone who reviewed.


Save the last dance.

Sakura's day was going great she had found the perfect dress and tomorrow night she would be with Sasuke. She couldn't help but smile at the thought about her and Sasuke going together. She thought of what happened this whole week and how much drama everyone but she had gone through. Tenten got Neji. Ino and Shikamaru were figuring out were they stood with each other. Hinata being blackmailed and going to the dance with Kiba which now would end cause she would explain everything to him tonight and knowing Naruto he would forgive her and give her another chance. Now Sakura had to think of what was between her and Sasuke now. She remembered how when they were younger he would ignore her in public but when they were on a mission it was always him to save her. Yeah Naruto had his fair share of saving her to but Sasuke wasn't the type to help weak people. The thought made her cringe about the fact she had to admit she was pretty weak but she had been improving a little. With the help of Lee of course. She looked down 'damn it now I'm upset…. So much for a good mood' She went back to Sasuke. After a few years he didn't ignore her… as much. She had stopped her chasing only to come back still wanting to be with him secretly. She wasn't going to act like her 12 year old self. She was 16 and the word love had many meanings for her now. Sakura thought maybe she needed to just sit down and talk to Sasuke and figure out if they were still just friends and comrades... or maybe.. Just maybe something more. It was confusing her that she, Sakura, the girl who knew everything about love couldn't figure out if the guy she loved actually had feeling for her. When she heard Ino gasp every thing she had thought dropped when she looked at what Ino had gasped at. There walking towards them was Sasuke… with Yumi holding his hand. But what caught her off guard the most was the fact that He had a smirk on his face like he was actually kind of happy. He turned to look forward and saw Sakura there totally shocked. He waved slightly and kept walking past them.

'Sorry Sakura... it's for the better' Sasuke thought

'No... .' was all she could think. She wasn't going to cry and for once she couldn't. She picked up her bag that she had dropped from shock.

"Come on you guys lets go we still have to go meet up with Naruto real quick." She said with a smile. They girls looked at each other there looks were the same 'How can she act like nothing happened?' Sakura was actually not sure herself. On the outside she was the same. But on the inside there was nothing. She wasn't numb….she was dead. She couldn't feel, she couldn't think, and she couldn't see, but she could talk but it seemed like it wasn't even her. (A.n. I'm feeling a little dark… so sorry if I'm being over dramatic with it))

They went at Naruto's favorite ramen place after getting there the girls ate and everyone else left except Naruto, Hinata, and Sakura.

"So what did you guys want to talk about" He asked nervously. He didn't like the silence that was around them and he felt like he needed to get what they wanted to talk about out.

"Well I wanted too…." She was cut of when Sasuke came over and sat down by Naruto. Naruto scratched his head.

"So sorry forgot to mention Sasuke was coming." Naruto said oblivious on what happened earlier. Sakura turned around to her ramen and started eating with a blank look. Hinata gave a worried look to her friend while Naruto was confused on Sakura's weird behavior while Sasuke sat there looking cool and sexy. Something he was very good at.

((An I seriously couldn't resist putting that in here))

Hinata whispered something to Sakura and she nodded. Sakura got up and laid some money on the counter.

"Come on Sasuke-KUN lets go for a walk" she said with a fake cheeriness. Her actions said one thing but her eyes said another or at least that's what it looked like to Naruto. Sasuke got up and followed her. After they were out of sight he turned to Hinata.

"What's with those to?" he asked worriedly. Hinata looked away

"Ill tells you after I'm finished what I have to say... ok?" She said trying to stay calm and not Sutter. "Naruto, the reason I couldn't go to the dance with u was cause…. Cause Kiba blackmailed me." She was quiet for a little bit taking a few breathes cause she was close to losing her confidence. Naruto looked at her dumb founded.

"What? How? On what? And why? He said basically shaking her to death.

"Na..ru..to" she said in between shakes. He stopped and muttered a sorry.

"Ok… It was a few summers ago…"


To Sakura and Sasuke. ((A.n. I no u hate me for skipping that but yeah but this a sasusaku story.

They had headed to the park and Sakura felt like she was having dajavoo. They passed the tree were he had pushed her up against and she tried not to blush. They were quiet. Neither wanted to talk to each other it was way to awkward. Sakura couldn't take it any longer and sat down in some shade under some random tree. Sasuke followed suit but put a few feet between them.

"So you and Yumi a couple?" the question was bugging her and she had to know. He was quiet as if trying to figure it out himself.

"Yeah." He said stotically.

"Oh" she looked down how she wanted to cry but she couldn't. "So I guess me and you aren't going to the dance anymore…" she replied looking the opposite direction from him.

"Uhuh" He said looking at the grass as if it was fascinating. She was quiet for a awhile. This bugged her. 'Why is it that when ever I feel like I'm getting a chance with you, you always seemed to disappoint me? why the hell am I thinking only about me? What about Lee? Wow he must feel like crap.' She got up. Sasuke looked at her. She looked mad.

"What about Lee? That was his girlfriend you had no right stealing her from him." He smirked at her and for once she really wanted to wipe that smirk off his face.

"Why should I care? She wanted me more… shows you how much she cared about him... Probably did him a favor." He looked away and hide is grimace. 'Was that really me... I'm more of a bastard then I thought.' He sighed. He really hated himself. He looked at her she seemed to be looking at something else. He knew he probably get an insult for that but so far things were going to plan. And he… he was happy. 'Yeah right!' something in him yelled. 'How can I be happy if all I'm doing is hurting her… why am I doing this anymore? I just can't… this is stupid... UGH! I hate emotions so much!' He stood up and turned away from her.

"You know now you can have Lee that's who you really wanted to go to the dance with anyways." He started to walk away. 'If I'm going t hurt her at least I can point her to someone who won't.'

She watched him leave

"But Sasuke…. I wanted to be with you." she whispered.

Finally after he was gone did she cry. She let everything else out every emotion she had been since this morning.

((I was going to stop here but I haven't updated in awhile here's more))


Hinata and Naruto.

She had told him everything and he had been shocked. Course when his brain did start to turn again his mind was on kicking this guy's ass! He was so pissed. Then after a second of Hinata calming him down and saying she didn't know where he was now did his anger go to the next guy, Kiba. He had gotten up paid his bill and started to Kiba's house. Hinata ran after him to stop him.

"NARUTO!" He stopped at her calling his name. She went in front of him "Naruto, I...I need to do this for myself. I need to tell Kiba that I'm not going with him but going with the person I...Lo...Love…" She was blushing 'Well I guess its time to tell him' she thought. This caught Naruto's attention.

"Who do you love?" he was scarred. He liked her a lot and if it wasn't him he thought he would die.

"You… I love you Naruto." She was blushing madly now and Naruto was in a state of shock. The just like that he had his trademark foxy grin on. He pulled her into his arms and got close to her years.

"I love you too." He whispered. She was in heaven and the happiest girl in the world.

"Naruto... I want you to come with me... for support."

"I wouldn't let you go alone anyways." He said grabbing her hand. She started walking towards Kiba's house when she felt a tug and looked back a blushing Naruto. She had to look at him closer. Yep he's blushing alright.

"Hinata… I really love you and... I don't want to …but I was wondering… ummm how can I say this?" He said scratching the back of his head. He didn't know how to ask her. She looked at him confused.

"Naruto?" She asked.

"Aw heck with it." He pulled her closer and gentle kissed her. He pulled back. Hinata's face was now red as can be. He smiled 'Ha Sasuke- basterd now you cant say I didn't do that dare and any ways I probably would of done it anyways even you hadn't dared me' He thought. They started walk to Kiba's house again.

"Hey Hinata? What was up with sakura and sasuke today?" Hinata sighed.

"We saw him with Yumi today and she acts like shes fine but we now its affecting her."

"Wait YUMI... you mean lee's yumi?" He said Hinata nodded

"Correction now.. Sasuke's Yumi." The rest of the way to Kiba's house was quiet.


Ok here I updated I wrote some ill update I promise in a couple of days and we finally get to go to the dance

Angelgurl.