August 5, 2011

Especially for Ms. Michaela... :)

A HUGE thank you for patiently waiting. Another HUGE thank you for understanding my situation. It's people like you who really motivate us humble writers here. Much love!

To clear up any confusion, I'm not going to write a new story. :) I'm going to finish Piece of Her Wings, with the original storyline from way back 2004. I only wanted to clean up the 10 chapters first. I want to correct any grammatical or structural mistakes that I'm sure I've made before. I am also going to change the names of some characters, namely Ontrose and Kamion; I admit that I borrowed them from David and Leigh Eddings' books, so I would like to change their names and appearances into something wholly mine. Also, I have to admit that some of the finer points of the story have been lost through the years (I lost my cheat sheet of the storyline, but I remember the general idea of things), so in my rereading the whole 10 chapters, I should pick them up again. If anything will be changed, some minor changes in words or sentences, but the overall flow of the storyline will remain UNCHANGED. :)

This story, Piece of Her Wings UNTOUCHED, will not be updated anymore because this will now just serve as a rough draft. The cleaned-up chapters will be published in a separate story in my profile, still titled Piece of Her Wings, and still having the same storyline. I just kept this old one so I can alert my few readers. But once the clean-up of the 10 chapters is complete, I will delete UNTOUCHED, and upload the last few chapters in the newly submitted title.

I hope this clears up any confusion. Again, I thank you deeply for hanging for the remaining few chapters. I will do my best and hope that what I will write will not disappoint you. :)

Lots of love and chocolate!

Sadame X