!IMPORTANT AUTHOR'S NOTE!
Alright, yes yes this is much later than promised I know. Forgive me but I had a rough time with my life and a lot happened that put me off righting. You have to love families right? You can always count on someone to make a crisis much worse and prove just how much your dislike of them is justified. Anyway the first two chapters have been updated and as I promised I will put descriptions down for each one that I've changed.
Chapter 1: The title has now been changed and the grammar fixed. I've taken some things out and not really added too much so it should read much like it did the first time, just a little more pleasant to the eyes.
Chapter 2: Also a title change (one that I'm still not happy with), and a plot change. Instead of Jacques being like he was I'm making him a bit colder around the edges. He's not really interested in Flannery anymore and really doesn't care much about her at all except for carrying out wifely duties and when she's made him mad. Will he still probably be abusive? Yes, but I feel like he has more of a reason now and that his character is a little more developed this way. No, I still am trying to keep Flannery from becoming a Sue but I feel like I've made that part of the story I'm just not sure how big of a part it has anymore.
Last time I told everyone I had 3 chapters done, I do, but I'm unsatisfied with it so you won't see it for awhile. Also if I haven't already I think I might move this to the Hunchback of Notre Section in the movies just because I feel it will fit better.
Please do let me know if it looks like it has improved any. That will help me know if I'm helping the story or destroying it. Thank you to everyone who has read and hopefully you get another one of these soon letting you know more chapters have been updated.
~Sinedra
