Hay guys!

What an ending for chapter 11 yesterday. I hope you really liked it.

So anyway I don't know why some people keep wanting foursome or fivesomes but sadly I will not do one in this story unless I change my mind.

So as I said in chapter 1 I said this story was based on Hall of Fame by The Script and it is but it has gone a whole new direction now.

I just read that the guy who plays Finn in Glee died! I actually loved that show but I can never have idea's to get stories for it.

Anyway this chapter is completely Fabian based and is in his Point of View. Not completely but it is his point of view for the most of it.

Without anymore delays lets start this chapter.


I was started to wake up. My head was in so much pain, the last thing I remember was running towards Jerome in Brighton then blank. Hang on where am I?

I don't remember this place it is really dark and it is really messy. What's that smell?

I look at my feet that have been chained to the floor and my hands are tied up. I then look next to me and a boy was there.

"Hay where am I?" I ask him and I could see the fear in his eyes.

"You're in hell." he answered quietly.

"What do you mean?" I ask now getting scared.

"I've been here for nine years now. I forgotten so much like the feel of grass under my feet. I have seen so much down here." he was crying.

"Who are you?" I asked him.

"My name is Jerome, Jerome Clarke." He answered.

"No you're not I am dating Jerome Clarke." I explained to him.

"No he isn't he was a child that was here called Micheal Grey, they rescued me after my Parents where arrested. I was cared for, well for a little while anyway. Then I found out what they did here." he was so scared.

"What's that smell?" I asked him I was so confused.

"Look over there." he pointed to the other side of the room and what was there made me understand why he called this place hell.

Hanging from the wall where dead bodies that where still bleeding out blood. I wanted to throw up and then a I heard a door and foot steps.

A girl came into the room with blonde hair she was rather pretty. She looked at the boy.

"Jerome are you alright?" she seemed to care. The boy was now looking happy.

"This is Amber. She is the only kind person around here." the boy was pleased.

"So if you're the kind one why haven't you tried to rescue him yet?" I ask, it was more like a fact if she was nice she would of tried to free him.

"They kill anyone who tries to rescue people from down here." she pointed at the wall with the bodies. Then she pointed to the corner.

A huge pile of bones where there. I ended up throwing up this time.

"One of them was from nine years ago. A boy called Alfie Lewis is there." She answered. I was now really confused.

"No I am dating Jerome and my friend Joy is dating Alfie." I was sure I was right.

"No you're not, you're dating Micheal Gray and your friend is dating a boy called Oliver Field." she looked up stairs. "I got to go honey, I'll see you later." she kissed the boy on his head. She ran upstairs.

"What ever you do don't look at her in the eye?" the boy insisted.

"Who Amber?" I asked.

"No Trudy!" he whispered loudly.

"Someone said my name?" just then a women appeared with black hair who looked about forty maybe fifty.

"Why am I here?" I asked her with venom in my voice.

"You need to ask the boss for that." she laughs in an evil way.

"Hello Fabian." I know that voice and all I wanted to do was run I could see his face.

"Brian." My voice was cracking and I just wanted to break down.

"Well now you know why." he said as he walked up to me and held my head in place. He kissed me and all I wanted to do was kill him. He started touching my groin and chest. "I am going to keep you down here for our special time. I always liked you Fabian, your cute little eyes your lips your body's build." He tried to kiss me again but I spat in his face. "Your never getting out of here alive so your going to have to come round soon." he walked out and Trudy followed him out.

In shock I blacked out.

Alfie and Jerome in a coffee shop...

Nobody's point of view.

"So you think the girl took our bait?" Alfie asked.

"I don't think she knows a thing Oliver." Jerome chuckled to Oliver.

"Your so bad Micheal." Oliver smiled in an evil way.

Micheal looked at Oliver and gave him a kiss and was touching him under the table.

"Nobody is none the wiser." Micheal kissed his lover again.

"How much longer do I have to fuck that girl?" Oliver asked with venom in his voice.

"Untill we get the word from Brian. We have stuck to the plan already, get Rutter to full in love with me, the fake phone call from the police we even put the invitation for the restaurant in his room. We wait untill he tells us to kill her off. Do you understand honey?" Micheal asked and got Oliver to realise in his underwear without touching his bare skin.

"Yeah, I am just shocked that Eddie didn't even notice it was you." Oliver said.

"Well he did leave not long after Jerome came in the picture and me and Jerome where really similar." the two chuckle as the left the shop back for the hotel.

Joy and Mick...

"Hay Joy you alright?" Mick asked as she sat on the edge of her bed.

"Mick, have you told Fabian's mum yet?" Joy was flooding with tears as she looked at all the bags that Fabian had got.

"Yeah. She's on her way here now." he rubbed her back in soft circles.

"I smell a Brian shaped rat." Joy said as she lent into Mick as she cried her eyes out. "It's weird." she said into his shoulder.

"What is?" Mick understanding her and looked into her eyes and not even questioning the Brian thing.

"Jerome and Alfie haven't really been that upset. After all Jerome was dating him and Alfie knew him well and they don't seem that sad." she explained.

"Jerome has suffered a lot worse but your right I 've seen them around and they seem fine and not like they just witnessed somebody being kidnapped." Mick agreed.

"Stay with me for a little while more?" Joy asked.

"I'm not going anywhere soon." Mick let Joy cry into his shirt as he tried to stay strong for her.


Well I know nobody was expecting that.

So who knew that it was 'Alfie' and 'Jerome' who have been the bad guys all this time. I know a lot of you thought that Jerome and Fabian had the same dad but no.

As the genre said it is a romance/crime and so far there wasn't much crime in this so I thought I would add a little.

Right I have said I wasn't planning to end it soon however I am now planning to finish the story soon. I don't know when but by middle of August end of July I am thinking to finish it. I am really proud of this story an I really hope you have had as much fun reading as I have had writing it.

So recommendation this week is a little show I love at the moment called Criminal Minds! Best show ever that is crime!

Now the question? that isn't about the chapter but more with what you want to see happen.

What do you want to happen to Fabian in the next chapter?

Please review and PM! I love to hear what others feel about my stories.