Thanks to GemYin who now checks through this story.

I don't own the Sarah Jane Adventures.


It was a normal afternoon for the gang. They were sitting in the attic, talking to the alien computer they were friends with. Clyde and Penny were sitting next to each other, playing a new game on their phones. Luke and Maria were talking to Mr Smith as he told them about the wonders of the universe. Sarah Jane was out, doing the weekly shop. Penny and Luke normally went with her but they had managed to convince her to let them escape the torture that week.
"You got anything interesting for us, Mr Smith?" Clyde said, putting his phone away.

"You're just annoyed that Penny keeps winning." Maria laughed.

Soon though, all the teenagers were pining for Mr Smith to give them something else to do. They all turned to the computer, asking him to do all manner of scans.

"Hurry up, Mr Smith." Penny moaned.

"Perhaps, seeing as you are all so bored, you wouldn't mind going and welcoming an alien ship that is landing on Earth." Mr Smith said.

"What type of ship?" Penny inquired.

"A Riso merchant ship."

A smile grew across Penny's face as she found that the species they would be dealing with were not dangerous. In fact, the Riso were a peace keeping group of aliens who enjoyed trading in fine sauces.

"Come on, lets go."

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Ava White crept out of her house and closed the door. She was shaking. Something really bad had happened and it had happened again. There were screaming and sobbing sounds echoing from inside the house as Ava crept down the street. All she wanted to do was get away. She would go to somewhere where she could be alone, completely alone, and not have to deal with anyone. As she walked down the street, totally absorbed in her own fear and horror, she collided with someone. She fell over and looked up. A boy her age, roughly fourteen, was standing there. The boy helped Ava to her feet and smiled.

"I'm sorry." the boy said.

Suddenly the boy's friends, two girls and one boy, called her over.

"Clyde, can you please get your butt in gear?" one of the girls called.

"We need to go and find that ship." the other boy called.

Clyde smiled slightly and looked back at Ava.

"I'm sorry, again, just..."

Then Clyde brushed round Ava and continued to walk down the street. Ava turned and looked at the group. As soon as Clyde had met up with them, they broke into a jog. Ava wondered slightly what they meant by ship. They were too far from the river to be after a normal ship and... Ava decided to investigate. She closed her eyes and, when she opened the again, began to walk forwards. However no one would be able to see Ava walk after the group because Ava had turned invisible.

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Clyde, Luke and Maria stared at the ship. It was made out of dirty pale metal and covered the basketball court it had landed in. The ship has landed in the centre of a park that wasn't used lots so no one was around to see it. It was a pity they weren't, the ship looked magnificent. Penny smiled at it.

"The Riso are well known for their love of nature, food and parties. They invent lots but scrap everything they do if it doesn't look good." Penny said, beginning to walk towards the ship. "Riso's grow to about a metre in height but travel around on small hover disks that mean they can navigate places for your taller alien normally."

The ramp that lead up to the ship began to descend and, if it was even possible, Penny's smile widened.

"You have not tasted chips until they've have Riso sauce on them." Penny said.

Then two figures moved out of the doorway. They were taller than a man and they stalked forwards, getting closer and clearer.

"Get back." Penny said. "Those aren't Riso."

The others looked at her as they stared at the snarling figures. They had large teeth over hanging from their jaws and their noses were scrunched up. They gnashed their jaws and sniffed the air. They were dressed in tatty clothes that looked like a cross between chain mail and cloth. More appeared in the doorway.

"Get out of here!" Penny shouted and the group began to run.

However the creatures didn't follow them and the teenagers noticed. They dived behind some of the fencing the basketball court and watched as the aliens continued to sniff the air.

"What are they doing?" Maria whispered.

"I don't know." Penny said. "I don't recognise the species."

"But you're sure they're not Riso." Clyde asked.

Luke looked at his sister.

"They must be space pirates or something." Penny said.

"Do you really get space pirates?"

"Yeah."

Suddenly there was a barbaric roar. The teenagers all glanced at each other and then fell back.

"We need to get out of here." Clyde said, sounding very worried.

"No." Luke protested.

"We need to get onto that ship."

They looked at Penny as if she was insane. She began to explain that there was a chance that the Riso were inside the space ship and that she had to save them.

"Stay here." Penny said as she moved towards the ship.

A hand landed on her shoulder. Penny turned and looked at Clyde.

"No chance. I'm coming with you." Clyde informed her and the two crept towards the ship.

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A few metres away, Ava watched the gang. She was terrified but, as she saw Penny and Clyde edging towards the spaceship, she knew that something was very wrong. She could easily creep in. She moved closer and made her way past the creatures, joining the two others inside.

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"So what do you think those creatures are?" Clyde whispered as they walked through the ship.

It seemed completely empty. All the creatures seemed to have already left. That meant there were only six aliens they had to deal with.

"Trouble. If they are pirates then us going onto their ship might as well be letting them kidnap us."

Clyde smiled at Penny as if he couldn't quite comprehend what she had done but also had predicted it from her.

"And you knew this before hand."

"So did you. You won't have agreed to it if you didn't suspect it would be dangerous."

Penny looked back at Clyde and smirked. He blushed and looked away, realising that Penny could read him like a book.

"What exactly are we looking for?" a voice asked.

Clyde and Penny both searched around. The voice had been female, sounding young and human but there was no one there.

"Hello?" Penny called out silently.

Suddenly Penny's phone rang. She answered it and told Clyde to keep looking.

"Bro, what's wrong?" Penny asked.

"The creatures are going back in. They look like their hunting something."

Penny looked at Clyde and hung up the phone, pulling him into hiding. He looked at her.

"The creatures are coming back. We need to get out of here." Penny smiled.

The creatures came in growling, they scanned the area and Penny pulled out her phone, taking a picture of the creatures. The phone made a tiny noise as she took the picture. At the noise the creatures stopped growling. Clyde looked at Penny as she slipped her phone away with a proud smile.

"There's someone here." one of the creatures growled.

Penny and Clyde looked at each other.

"We really need to get out of here." Clyde whispered.

Suddenly the creatures turned to them and pulled them out of hiding. The creatures were extremely strong and it took only one to restrain each teenager.

"Who are you?" one of the creature's snarled as the others sniffed the teenagers.

"We are the Earth representatives of the Shadow Proclamation. We are investigating interplanetary ship hijacking and we are under the impression that this Riso merchant ship has been hijacked." Penny said, throwing out all of the space policing jargon she knew.

"Are you members of the Riso?" Clyde inquired, putting on the most professional voice he could.

He knew that Luke and Maria must have realised that something was up. They would probably be on their way to help them. All they needed to do was stall the creatures.
"We are the Wiquo." one of the creatures announced. "We are hunting down a Kwokirian child."

The leader of the creatures turned to Clyde and sniffed him where he had walked into the girl before.

"And if you want your friend to live, I suggest you hand yourself in Kwokirian."

The Wiquo holding Penny threw her to the ground and pulled off one of his gloves, reaching towards her. Whatever the Wiquo intended for Penny, it clearly wasn't going to be good for her. Clyde wasn't sure what was happening. He guessed he had been mistaken for an alien and that the creatures had identified Penny as human and therefore decided she was vulnerable. Clyde wasn't sure what to do. It horrified him. Penny was like a sister to him and, as the hand moved closer to Penny, Clyde snapped.

"I'm human! I'm stupidly human. Just leave her alone!"

Penny was trying to get up but it wasn't working. She couldn't move. Suddenly Penny felt hands pull her up. She stood up and looked around.

"You need to run." a voice whispered in her ear.

"Penny?" Clyde gasped.

Suddenly a girl appeared behind Penny. The girl had long blonde-white hair and had piercing blue eyes. She looked at Clyde with a frown.

"Run!" the girl shouted, looking at Penny.

The two teenagers looked at the girl who had suddenly appeared. Clyde looked at the creatures and began to struggle wildly as they closed in on Penny and the girl. The girl grabbed Penny's hand and then Clyde's. She ran forwards and pulled Penny and Clyde with her. She ran straight towards the creatures and then straight through them. The two teenaged alien busters were pulled with her.

"Grab them!" one of the Wiquo ordered.

The three teenagers ran out.

"We need to get out of here." Penny said.

"But... She has powers like..." Clyde stammered.

The girl blushed and moved away. Penny and Clyde moved towards Maria and Luke.

"We need to leave, right now. Take this girl back to the attic." Penny instructed.

"She has powers like Superman!" Clyde exclaimed.

They heard the creatures coming and the group ran, pretty much for their lives.

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Ava watched as the teenagers ran into the house. She wasn't sure what to do. The house looked completely normal. Clyde opened the door.

"Who are you people?" Ava asked, slowly backing away.

"Luke, do introductions." Clyde ordered as Penny opened the door.
"And get her in the house." Penny said, running inside.

"The girl who just ran up the stairs is my sister, Penny. The boy who's at the door is Clyde. The other girl is Maria and I'm Luke. It's really nice to meet you."

Ava blushed a bit. She was rather shy.

"I'm Ava, Ava white." she said slowly.

"Ava, we need to go inside because there's a group of aliens after you and..."

Maria looked at Luke as he had a very pleasant and long winded conversation while they were being hunted by aliens.

"We need to go inside." Maria said.

"Yes." Luke said, heading inside.

"Come on, Ava."

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"Mr Smith, give me everything you have on the Wiquo." Penny ordered as she raced into the attic.

"You're becoming more like your mother everyday." Mr Smith remarked but began to look up the alien species.

"And we'll need to scan the girl."

"Her name is Ava." Luke said, appeared in the doorway with Clyde and Maria.

Ava brushed past the group and looked at the alien computer.

"That's an alien computer." Ava gasped, suddenly wanting to sit down.

"You're freaking out over that? You were just on a spaceship." Clyde exclaimed.

"Culture shock." Penny said.

"The Wiquo are an alien race from Kwiro. They are a dangerous beastly race known for their extremely powerful senses, brutality towards other species and ability to draw a person's life energy from them with one touch, leaving behind a shell."

"Okay, why would they be after Ava?"

"The Wiquo share their planet with the Kwokirians. The Kwokirians are a powerful race with strong abilities. They have a strong life force and are hunted by the Wiquo for food. This has caused the Kwokirians to decrease in number rapidly."

"But I'm human!" Ava exclaimed. "I'm not a Kwokirian."

"How do you know? Have you ever seen any proof that shows you're not a Kwokirian?"
"You can turn invisible. I'm pretty sure that makes you a Kwokirian." Clyde pointed out.

"We could scan her." Luke said slowly.

Penny lead Ava over to the centre of the attic. Mr Smith began to scan Ava. She was nervous at the scan but everyone assured her nothing bad would happen.

"What is that thing?" Ava said when Mr Smith began to analyse the scan.

"It's an alien computer called Mr Smith." Maria explained. "He's like our version of a search engine only he knows more and talks to us."

"Scan complete." Mr Smith said. "Ava is a Kwokirian."

Ava's jaw dropped. She sunk back as the other teenagers began to make a plan, thinking over every detail. They were trying to analyse weaknesses, ways of keeping Ava away from the Kwokirians.

"How could she have got here?" Luke asked.

"I will contact the ship the Wiquo arrived in and access their data stores." Mr Smith said.

Ava heard a knock at the door and tried to make contact with the others but they were too busy planning.

"A Kwokirian ship was being hunted by them fourteen years ago. They came close to Earth and later escaped."

"Could they have dropped Ava off on Earth?" Clyde asked as he and Penny paced the room.

"Is it possible for us to contact the ship?"

"There's someone at the door." Ava tried but she was too quiet.

Ava sighed and decided to go and get the door herself. She couldn't take all of the alien stuff that the others were debating.

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Ava opened the door and gasped. She slammed it and pressed herself against it.
"Help!"

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The teenagers all turned to the door, hearing the call.
"Where's Ava gone?" Maria asked.

Suddenly Ava screamed again. The teenagers began to run down the stairs and saw the front door was ripped off it's hinges. There was a noise coming from the lounge and Clyde edged the door open. He could see four Wiquo standing in the lounge, surrounding Ava.

"Oi!" Clyde shouted, hitting the door and making a lot of noise.

The Wiquo turned and looked at him. Ava used it as a chance to run past the creatures. She ran so fast she was going at super speed. The Wiquo had no time to react.

"Out, now!" Luke ordered, racing to the door.

Penny and Clyde joined him just as a group of two Wiquo moved from the kitchen. They blocked off Maria and Ava.

"Don't let them touch you!" Penny shouted, pulling Clyde back as one of the Wiquo turned to him.

She looked at Luke and then nodded towards the stairs, getting Maria and Ava to run up them. Then the other three teenagers backed out of the door and locked it.

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Maria and Ava ran into the attic. Maria raced towards a chair and began to move it in front of the door.

"We need to think of a way out of here." Maria said. "Mr Smith, have you managed to contact the Kwokirian space ship? Because that would be really useful right now."

"I have contacted them alerting them to the situation."

"I'm not an alien." Ava protested.

It was mostly in denial. She knew full well that she was an alien by that point but part of her didn't want to be. It answered so many questions. Ava had never known her parents. She has never even once met them. It told her who she was, why she had her powers and just made her whole life have some sort of sense.

"Mr Smith, there is going to be a set of aliens, have you got defence programs or something?"

"Only Penelope and Sarah Jane have access to my defence systems." Mr Smith answered.

"Well that is stupid." Ava muttered.

"Okay, Mr Smith close up. We don't want the Wiquo to have access to you." Maria said.

She wished her friends were there but she knew it was only down to her. She had to get her and Ava out without letting the Wiquo touch them.

"Open the window." Ava said, suddenly taking control.

"What?"

"Open the window."

"We're not jumping!" Maria gasped.

"No. Clyde said I had powers like Superman. What can Superman do?"

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Penny, Luke and Clyde ducked into the garden. They couldn't lead the Wiquo out to the street so they had decided to keep them in the grounds. Penny looked at Luke and at his bare sleeves. She knew that if Luke got attacked by the Wiquo he had a lot of exposed skin for them to touch. Clyde was wearing a jacket and she was wearing a long sleeve top.

"You two keep watch." Penny said.

"What are you doing?" Luke asked, still looking out.

Penny slid open the window, pulling it wide, her eyes were fixed on Luke's jacket that was over the edge of the sofa.

"Mum always leaves it on the catch in case I need to break in." Penny said.

Luke turned to his sister and grabbed her arm. Officially he was older than her. He was the older sibling and he was meant to protect her. Luke tried to tell his sister to not do it.

"What if there's a Wiquo in there?" Luke asked.

Penny frowned and glanced around her lounge. Her arm was half in. She was pretty much sitting on the window sill.

"I'll get out quickly." Penny assured him. "I'll just get your jacket and..."

Penny gasped. A Wiquo's hand was clamped around her arm.

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Maria looked at Ava as if she was insane.

"You can fly!" Maria gasped. "There is no way you can fly."

Maria had seen aliens who could fly. In fact the first aliens she had seen had been able to fly. It just wasn't easy to comprehend that a girl her age, who looked human, could fly.

"I can fly and I can carry you." Ava reasoned. "We need to get out of here."

Suddenly there was a thud against the door.

"What if someone sees us?" Maria asked, opening the window.

"I'll turn invisible."

There was another thud.

'Sarah Jane is going to kill me.' Maria thought as the door began to splinter.

She grabbed onto Ava and smiled as her feet lifted off the floor.

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Luke and Penny had both frozen as the Wiquo held Penny's arm. Clyde turned and looked at the Wiquo in horror.

"What are you up to?" the Wiquo asked.

Penny grimaced at the creature's breath and noticed Clyde's reflection in the glass. He was moving towards something. Penny knew something was happening and had to distract him.

"I'm getting my brother's jacket. Do you think you could let me get it?" Penny asked, shifting around so she could leap back as soon as she could escape.

Clyde closed his hand around a gardening tool and hit the Wiquo in the arm, pulling Penny back at the same time. She fell back and pressed the window against the arm of the creature.

"How can we fight something we can't even touch?"

"I have no idea." Luke said.

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Maria enjoyed the feeling of flying. It was amazing. She felt so free, as if she could forget all her cares. She had been into space but this was different. It was new, exciting. She could feel the wind through her hair and the air just seemed cleaner as she was carried through the air. She felt completely alone and at peace despite the fact she was holding onto Ava.

"I don't believe this." Maria gasped.

"I didn't when I first managed it." Ava murmured.

She scanned the ground below as they circled the house.

"There's your friends." Ava said, pointing down.

"Ava, soon you could be with your family." Maria pointed out.

"I'm... I've never really had a family before." Ava admitted, beginning to lower herself down.

Maria turned to Ava. She had never had a big family. Now she felt like she had siblings with the gang and a second mum in Sarah Jane.

"Speaking of families, I think I might need to rescue mine."

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Luke, Penny and Clyde barly noticed when Maria and Ava landed. They were invisible and the group only realised they were there when Maria began to talk.

"Um... Where are you?" Luke asked.

"I'm here." Maria said as Ava turned her visible. "What is the plan?"

"The plan is to get Ava to her space ship. Mr Smith called me. The ship is on it's way to Earth. We just need to get her down to the park and draw the Wiquo there as well. The Kwokirians have the technology to capture them and they'll..." Luke trailed off, not exactly sure how to phrase what he was about to say.

"They'll take you with them." Penny said. "It's your choice but... They could be your family and..."

Ava looked down at the ground, trying to work out what to do. She turned to the others. She hadn't known them for more than two hours and yet she... She felt attached to them. She wasn't attached to the planet. She didn't like most of it. She guessed she would miss some things but those things would soon be replaced by a family.

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Penny was on the phone to Mr Smith. He was their link between the gang and the aliens. Ava had super sped them to the park and Luke had worked on the space ship, putting it out of action in case the creatures attempted to flee.

"Okay, the Kwokirian ship is in Earth's atmosphere." Penny announced. "ETA ten minutes."

"That fast?" Clyde exclaimed, walking over to Penny.

"Well it is only a scout ship." Penny said.

"Penny, if your..." Clyde began, beginning to get the courage to ask Penny out.

"If I'm what?" Penny asked, moving closer.

She wanted Clyde to ask her out. She did. She wouldn't do it. She would never live it down if Clyde turned her down.

"If you're injured, then you could sit out. I know that Wiquo grabbed you and..." Clyde trailed off.

He wanted to kick himself. He couldn't believe he had messed up so badly.

Why can't I just ask her?

"I'm fine." Penny said, hiding her disappointment.

She began to walk away. She knew she couldn't let it distract her but there was a certain part of her that really liked Clyde. She had known him for a long while. She hadn't really talked to him before, just known him from school and other things but she loved the fact that she could share her more adventurous life style with him. Other than Luke, Clyde probably knew her better than any other boy in the whole world. Suddenly Penny felt a hand in hers. She turned and looked at Clyde.

"Penny Smith, do you want to go out with me?" Clyde asked. "I'm not joking. I mean, we could grab a pizza or go and watch a film but it would just be us. How about that?"

A smile crossed Penny's lips. She turned to look at Luke, Maria and Ava who were working on the plan. She nodded silently before getting her thoughts together.

"Yeah, I'd... I'd like that. I mean... As friends."

"I was kinda hoping a bit more than friends." Clyde said.

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The Wiquo could smell the teenagers. They were following the scent. The human teenagers had caused them too much trouble already. Not only did they stink of horrible greasy fast food and sweat and other things that the Wiquo counted themselves lucky for not having on their planets, they also were problematic. They got in the way. The only upside was that human life forces were actually quite tasty.

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Ava noted that Penny and Clyde were holding hands as they began to put the plan into action. They knew they couldn't trick the Wiquo by hiding, nor could they fight them in the normal sense. In fact they only had one other option. They were going to face them, stall them until the Kowkirian ship got there and dealt with them.

The six Wiquo faced the five teenagers.

"Where's Sarah Jane when you need her?" Clyde asked in whispered tones.

Penny smiled, squeezing his hand. Luke noticed with horror that Clyde and Penny were holding hands at that point. He knew that was what couples did and he didn't really like the idea of it. He liked Clyde, he liked Penny and he knew they liked each other but there was just something that made Luke find it a bit pointless. It was just a public way of showing that two people were in love and love wasn't meant to be about the outward show of things. It was meant to be personal. He guessed he was just looking at it with the sort of view the Bane had programmed him to look at it.

Maria moved forwards, getting between Ava and the creatures.

"Welcome to Earth." Penny said, joining her best friend. "Now leave."

"Why are you even here?" Maria asked.

"Cause they're lazy." Clyde answered. "Think about it, there are probably loads of different meals out there but they chose to come to Earth full of slow moving humans and one Kwokirian because they can't be bothered to catch something bigger."

"No kidding." Penny said.

Luke moved forwards.

"It's just a pity that the only humans they've met on this planet have been us. We're not the best welcoming committee for evil life force consuming aliens."

"You are not wrong there, bro."

Suddenly Penny's phone rung. She turned away and backed up so she could answer it.

"Anyway what sort of name is Wiquo. It's a stupid name for a bunch of aliens. You could be the Destroyers or something really cool like that. I think calling you the Destroyers would be good or something suited to your abilities. You've got great noses, you could be the Sniffers."

"Not the best noses in the galaxy though." Luke pointed out. "Those are the Slitheen and you know how that turned out for them."

"They were vinegared." Maria said.

It sounded threatening to the Wiquo who had no idea what vinegar was. They mistook it for some sort of gun and backed off a step. Penny walked back around Ava, giving her her phone and an instruction as she went.

"Sorry, just Mr Smith telling me where our back up is." Penny said.

"So you were stalling to allow your back up to get here." one of the Wiquo said. "How sweet. A foolish tactic once you let your enemy find out about it."

The Wiquo began to move forwards.

"You were going to find out about it sooner or later." Penny said, making a signal back to Ava.

Ava raised the phone and said a two word command down the phone to Mr Smith to relay to the ship.

"Especially since it's already here."

An alien scout ship appeared in the sky. It was grey and round and hovering in the air above them. Maria laughed at the sight of it. Luke marvelled at how technical it all was and Clyde just couldn't help but smile at the proud grin that was covering Penny's face.

"Say hello Ava's family." Penny smirked.

The Wiquo looked at the teenagers. They knew they had failed. They knew they had been captured but they were going to have one more meal. They were going to kill the children even if it cost them their lives. They sped forwards, racing towards the group. Ava felt tempted to run but Maria told her to hold her ground. They all stood there.

Just as a beam of burning white light hit the ground in front of them. As the Wiquo ran into it, they began to disappear.

"What was that?" Ava asked as the beam was shut off and the Wiquo had completely vanished.

"Teleport." Penny said.

Luke, Clyde and Maria felt a bit sick. They had fought Kudlak and taken a trip in his teleporter. It wasn't pleasant.

"What will happen to them?" Ava asked, moving to the space that the Wiquo had been a few seconds before.

"They'll be locked up." Luke said.

"Should have them sent to Volag-Noc. No wait, that's in the future. Stupid Doctor for telling me that." Penny muttered, wondering back.

Suddenly the beam was switched back on. Everyone jumped. Two adults landed on the floor and smiled at Ava. One of them was a tall and beautiful woman. The other was a man with stubble over his chin. Both were dressed in grey jumpsuits.

"Peliora!" the woman shouted, pulling Ava into a hug. "It's been so long."

"Who are you?" Ava asked.

The man smiled, picking up Ava.

"We're your parents. We're so sorry we left you on Earth but the Wiquo... They after us. It was the only way to keep you safe."

"It's okay." Ava said with tears swelling up in her eyes.
She was just so happy.

"Do you think I could go with you?" Ava asked. "Go back to your planet."

"Of course, Peliora." the man said, kissing Ava's forehead.

"Is Peliora my name?"

"Yes." her mother said.

She turned to the gang who were watching the scene with smiles on their faces.

"Thank you for saving her." the mother said before the beam reappeared and they were gone.

The teenagers all turned to each other then looked at the spaceship they would have to somehow hide.

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They had emptied the spacecraft of everything that could be used as a weapon and were getting ready to hand it over to UNIT. Of course there was still a small matter that they had to resolve. When Sarah Jane came back to find the teenagers, she was told the story about what had happened with Ava or, as she was no known, Peliora. What really got Sarah Jane's attention was the way that Luke kept looking at Clyde and Penny. When Penny left to walk Clyde and Maria out, Sarah Jane turned to Luke.

"What is bothering you, Luke?" Sarah Jane asked.

"Do people change when they start dating someone?" Luke asked.

"Some people do, some people don't. Why are you asking?"

"Because Clyde asked out Penny today and she said yes and..."

"Penelope Florana Smith, get back in this attic right now!" Sarah Jane shouted.


I hope you enjoyed that, now two things.

Penny's middle name is a bit of trivia. Sarah Jane and the Third Doctor went to a planet called Florana in the year 5968 where they saved an emperor from being posioned and therefore help a peace treaty be signed. I thought it was rather fitting for Penny's middle name to be one of the planets Sarah Jane visited with the Doctor.

Another thing: the next chapter will be my take on 'Whatever happened to Sarah Jane'. It's going to be changed to fit this time line and reveal more about the characters. If you don't like it, I apologise in advance but I thought it would help with the characters a bit more.