Hello everyone! Here's another chapter for this week :D Good thing I had some free time to spare. o3o Just to make you all happy |3
Chapter 10:
End of Silence
Yin was able to sit right back up on the cold floor. She looked around, but her vision was blurred out and wasn't able to identify where she's is right now. A few seconds passed and she was able to walk around and able to see clearly. She was in a confined room made out of steel. She doesn't know if she was still in Susie's home or in a different place, but she keeps thinking in her head, "Why is he doing this to me…? Why am I being tortured this way?" She sat near a corner and began to pray for either Juan or Yang, or both, to save her. Though, she's more concerned about Susie and being controlled by Yuck inner darkness. She began thinking of ways of setting her free from Yuck's so-called spell. She had no ideas this time. She just sat on the floor and waited for her death soon.
Meanwhile, Yuck began to check on Susie is building structures upon structures made out of ice. She kept doing this until Yuck arrived to praise her work.
E Yuck: Very well done, Susan. I knew you would be able to make such marvelous buildings like these. I'm quite impressed.
Susie: Thank you…
E Yuck: You're very welcome. Now continue on.
As he began to walk away, Susie walked to catch up to him and poked his shoulder. He turned around, confused and wondered why she stopped what she was doing.
E Yuck: What is it?
Susie: Why did you pick me?
E Yuck: What do you mean?
Susie: Me, to do your bidding. Making these huge structures for you. Why are you nice to me, but mean to Yin? Am I special?
E Yuck: Hehehe, oh, you're very quite special, darling. Knowing that my good-self is in love with the enemy of ours, there's no chance he'll be able to escape and stop me from taking over this world.
Susie: You didn't answer my question…
E Yuck: Oh, yes, your question. You probably don't know it, or you won't be able to for right now, but if I use you, then someone that is in deep love with you will come running here to try and save you. I could use this to my advantage and ambush him and also Yin's brother, because you know what they say, brother and sister always look out for each other.
Susie: I understand. But what about Yin? Are you in love with her?
E Yuck: I am not in love with her. My good-self is. It only makes someone weaker.
Susie: But love is always strong within a person. It might not be strong if they're not together, but it's strong for them to keep hope that one day the two will be together and enjoy life together. Love doesn't make a person weak. It's as strong as can-
E Yuck: Enough of your crap!
He slaps Susie across her cheek and she fell to the ground, holding her cheek where she got slapped. She began to feel tears streaming down and just stayed on the ground looking at Yuck, terrified and afraid to move. Yuck walked away with anger and not wanting to hear such lies coming from her or anyone else. Susie stood up and continued to do her job. Though, a white mist flew out of her body and went somewhere deep in the forest and to two strangers following a trail.
As the mist came closer to them, it turned to be Yang and Juan running to rescues both Yin and Susie and stop Yuck and get him back to normal. Though, they were stopped by the white mist that seemed thicker and was turning into a form of a person.
Yang: What the heck? What is this witch-craft?
Juan: I… really don't know.
The mist formed person turned to Susie, but glowing like she was angel sent from heaven, but without the angle wings and the halo above an angel's head. Juan, shocked and wanting to cry, yelled her name and ran to her to give her a hug, but she ran right through her and fell on the snowy ground. Puzzled, he got up and had a confused expression on his face.
Juan: Susie…?
Susie: Juan, this isn't really me in person. I turned into a spirit which I escaped my body and to tell you what's happening.
Yang: So you're Susie?
Susie: Yes, but in spirit form. Not physically, though.
Juan: So… the real you is still being takened hostage by Yuck?
Susie: Controlled by Yuck. He put some type of spell on me and I'm now forced to do whatever he says, but luckily I can hear what he says, but only within my mind. But I did see what he did to Yin… it was horrible to watch.
Yang: What did he do to her? Tell me! Tell me so I can have a reason to strangle that bastard!
Susie: *sighs* He thrown her to walls, the ceiling, the floor. Like a doll being thrown every which-way… she was hurt so much that I didn't think she noticed me in the room with her, but in spirit.
Yang: …so… is she… okay…?
Susie: She's fine. Injured and probably bruised up, but she's okay.
Yang: Oh, thank god…
Susie: Juan. You missed me, haven't you?
Juan: *blushed a little* Yes… I have…
Susie: …I missed you too. Very much. If you and Yang save me and Yin and get Yuck back to normal, I can tell you a secret of mine, okay?
Juan: *eyes widened* Uh, okay then.
Susie: Good. *smiles*
Juan didn't know what she was talking about, but he smiled a bit just to play along. Susie began to tell both of them of where she and Yin are being held. Then, she began to discuss a plan on how to get them out and get Yuck back to normal. They all agreed and began to run through the forest and towards the "secret" base. Not knowing what will happen, they hope that they'll get there on time before Yuck prepares to kill Yin and take over the world in the process.
End of chapter 10 :3 Also, the title of this chapter is from a band's album. RED End of Silence. My favorite band and also their albums are awesome! ;w; And I'm listening to one of their songs right now X3 Anyways, this is the time of what's going on with Susie (Mind controlled, of course) and also with demented Yuck o3o Comments time! 8D
AviTaRi / Being someone's ragdoll is no fun times. I wasn't a ragdoll for someone so I can't say if it was horrible or not o3o;; Though I think it is... O3O;;;;; I try not to care about the misspellings. I just want to write this and make people happy that I'm making these for them :3 And Susie is in chapter 10, which is probably finished and I'm writing this. -3-
Butterfly with the Mask / I think you should go for it :3 I'll probably read it, if I have the time to because I never read anything on this site unless I'm REALLY bored and have nothing better to do ^^; But if you're confident enough to make a story based on Yuck's POV, then go for it. You'll probably make mistakes, but it's always better to learn from them and improve to make it better. You write what your heart tells you and I'm sure that it'll be great ;3 And I like doing things that involve romance and drama... but with a twist 3
Thank you for the people that commented X3 I really appreciate it! 83 Next chapter will be up next Saturday! :D So be prepared for the next one! IF it's not up on Saturday... then wait for it to be done at 5:00 in the morning |D (My timezone. I don't know what time you are all on o3o) R&R please and thank you! ;3
