Alright, this is probably going to be the last time that I update this story. As you know, theblindwriter95 offered to complete the story for me after I had conflicting ideas about it. However, as many of you had pointed out to me in private messages, it seemed hypocritical for me to criticize the author for a single scene and whatnot. The reason as to why I was offended by that one scene was because of the implication of prison rape. While you could argue that the story was already dead on arrival when I first made it a few months ago (or maybe a year and a half), but one line that I was trying hard to not cross was rape. Rape, other than murder, is one of the most vile actions anyone could commit on a person as it robs them of their innocence, traumatizes them, as well as a few other issues. While the story was about the girls trying to find the person who killed their brother, I initially was going to leave it vague as to why the murderer killed Lincoln. It could be theorized that he or she was a pedophile (or Cristina in disguise), but I didn't want to make the story feel even more dark than it was already.
To me, Rita getting raped or molested by that lesbian inmate was the final straw for me. I mean, they get sent to prison for a few years, but I wasn't going to have it to where Rita was les chow. Besides that, I also drew the line with Lynn getting disowned. I apologize if it seemed as though I was making Lynn suffer because I hated her. While I find her the worst character in the show, that wasn't the intention; one of the working ideas was Lynn probably taking out the killer herself so that it could be her ultimate redemption. And no, no one else was going to die. But other than that, I do appreciate theblindwriter95 for volunteering to take the story, and I am truly sorry for sounding cold when I was reviewing one of the most recent chapter. This is AustinDR signing out.
