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Sunpaw's p.o.v.

How dare she? His own sister. Anger flared in his belly. Willowpaw had accused him of not fighting at all. Sunpaw went to take a nap.


He found himself in StarClan again. Cinderpelt was walking towards him. Sunpaw rushed to meet her. They touched noses. Then Cinderpelt told him, "There will be four, born in the midst of thunder, the apple, the willow, the sun and the feather". Sunpaw's mind was whirling. It sounded like a prophecy. Then Sunpaw gasped. Cinderpelt was fading away. Sunpaw woke scrambling in his nest. Feathepaw stood over him with a paw planted on his chest, ready to shake him again. Then when, she noticed he was awake, she started purring. Her beutiful amber eyes gazed into his, as Featherpaw asked, "I woke you up so we could go hunting together", she mewed, do you want to?, she added shyly. Wait, why was Featherpaw in the apprentices den instead of the medicine den? "I asked Willowpaw if I could leave this morning and she said yes, but only if I take it easy", Featherpaw mewed. "I'll take care of you," Sunpaw meowed instantly. "Great", Featherpaw purred. They headed out of camp, their pelts brushing and their whiskers touching occasionally. They broke away when Featherpaw saw a rabbit. Featherpaw positioned herself upwind of the rabbit and Sunpaw downwind. The rabbit's ears twitched as it smelled Featherpaw and then ran straight into Sunpaw's claws. Sunpaw pounced but missed by a mouse-lenght. Sunpaw gave chase with Featherpaw but the rabbit them and it went on WindClan's territory where a creamy white tom caught it. The WindClan warrior sneered at them. Sunpaw and Featherpaw backed away into the trees. Sunpaw just realized that Featherpaw was faster than him but the pale ginger tabby tom wondered why he had been so muse-brained not to notice that because Featherpaw was slender. They hunted until sunset. Sunpaw had caught another rabbit to make up for the one he had lost and a mouse and two voles. Featherpaw's speed had caught her a speedy water vole, a blackbird, two mice and a squirrel. When she had caught the squirrel, she had climbed a tree and Sunpaw noticed she felt very comfortable in trees. When they reached camp, Seedpelt came rushing over to them, Rosepool, Blossompaw and Echosong on their tail. Blossompaw's eyes filled with envy and awe when she saw how much they had caught. "Echosong made me spend the whole day checking the elders for ticks and cleaning their bedding while you two where hunting", Blossompaw's tail flicked pointedly to Ehosong. Echosong gave her apprentice a light clout on her head. "We were just going hunting", Blossompaw squeaked. Blossompaw sounded like it was her first day hunting. Sunpaw watched mentor and apprentice head throught the thorn tunnel. Sunpaw turned his attention to his mentor and the deputy. Seedpelt's eyes were filled with pride and annoyance and same as Rosepool's. "You caught a lot of prey" Rosepool sounded impressed. Sunpaw and Featherpaw nodded. As they walked into camp, he felt the stares of everyone in camp scorching his pelt. They dropped their prey on the pile and three shapes raced towards them. Dawnpaw was fully recovered from the battle and her shoulder looked like it never even had something wrong with it. "Take it easy", Skyleaf called from the entrance to the medicine den. She was watching the cream furred she-cat carefully. "Our assesment's today!", Pinepaw gasped, clearly out of breath. Sweetpaw glanced towards the fresh-kill pile. "That is, if you've left us any prey", Sweetpaw purred. Lilycloud, Rabbitleap and Berrywhisker were heading towards them. Berrywhisker and Lilycloud still bore unhealed scractches even if the battle was 3 sunrises ago. "Are you three ready for your assesments?", Berrywhisker asked but he looked uncertainly at Dawnpaw. "I'm fine", Dawnpaw snapped. "Then let's go", Lilycloud meowed. Sweetpaw, Pinepaw and Dawnpaw waved their tails in farewell as they followed their mentors out the thorn tunnel. "Let's follow them", meowed Sunpaw as they left. Sweetpaw was a good friend of theirs and Sunpaw knew that even Featherpaw was worried that Sweetpaw might not pass the assesment. Featherpaw nodded relunctualy. They raced in the dirt-place tunnel and followed Sweetpaw as she went to pass her hunting assesment. Sunpaw tried to sniff Sweetpaw's scent but with no luck. " Sunpaw", Sunpaw raced towards Featherpaw. "It looks as if Lilycloud sent Sweetpaw to the abandoned twoleg nest to hunt", Sunpaw meowed. Featherpaw nodded warmly, clearly approving of the place Sweetpaw chose to hunt. As they neared the twoleg nest, Sunpaw smelled rabbit and saw a pair of tortoiseshell and white ears poking out from near the rabbit. Sunpaw signaled to Featherpaw to stay back, who had started to creep up on the rabbit. Featherpaw backed away puzzled, but then she saw Sweetpaw and nodded. Sunpaw noticed some pale gray fur poking out from behind some bracken. Lilycloud was watching too! Sunpaw prayed to StarClan that Sweetpaw would make this catch and quickly because Lilycloud nose was twitching. Featherpaw and Sunpaw jerked, startled as Sweetpaw let out a screech and dashed towards the rabbit. She jumped on it and killed it with a swift bite to the neck. Sunpaw noticed that Lilycloud was heading towards them and nudged Featherpaw. She had spotted Lilycloud too. They both turned and ran towards camp. Sunpaw bumped into a massive gray tom. Sunpaw recognized Seedpelt at once and annoyance was snapping in his gaze.