Here's a longer chapter I'm trying to put a new plot into the story. hope you enjoy:)


"JOHN!"

"PAUL!"

"RINGO!"

"GEORGE!"

I latched on to Tony's right arm, as Sarah did the same to his left. Tony himself was trying to stay in place in the middle of these crazy fans. They pushed and pulled each other, even a couple fights broke out all to see John, Paul, George, and Ringo. I'd always known that the fans loved them, but this was berserk. I looked around the crowd taking in the sight of crying girls, fighting girls, and even girls almost fainting. The crowd pushed and pulled us, suddenly the crowd tore Tony from me causing me to almost on a fan behind me.

"Ey! watch it!"

"I'm sorry." I said to girl who had just yelled at me, she wiped off dust on her arm and glared at me. Her light brown eyes looked at me, she fixed her almost blonde hair, and adjusted her shirt that was a bit to tight on her. "Yue should be." she said with anger in her voice, I rolled my eyes at her. I said I was sorry what else does she want from me? "Whot?" she said at me sounding annoyed, I stared at her. "Nothing." I said I didn't want to start anything, she laughed at me "Whot a fucken lair yue are." I looked at her feeling angry, "Fine you wanna know. That's was bitchy of you I said sorry and someone pushed me into you. It wasn't my fault." I said almost yelling, I had just met this girl and I hated her.

"Yur callin' meh a boitch?" she said giving me major attitude, I shook my head and tried to walk away "I don't have time for this." I said starting to look for Tony and Sarah, she turned me back to her and spoke "So now yue don't have time for meh? Whot am I not good enough for yue?"

So much for not starting anything, I thought.

"Ugh, no it's just that I have to find my friends." I tried to explain to her, she still looked offended but she seemed to misunderstand everything I said so there was nothing I could do about that. She backed away, "Well I'm in the same boat as ya I can't find me friend neither." she said with less anger in her voice, I was starting to think she was naturally mad.

"Right, sucks doesn't?" I said to her well looking again for Tony or Sarah, I sighed finding nothing.

"It does, these people are crazay!" she said crossing her arms, then added "I had to punch some girl because she thought she push meh to the see the band, I don't let anyone walk all over meh!"

I laughed, "I've noticed," she gave me a look "in a good way though." I said to her making her look turn into a smile.

"Lauren!" I looked at Sarah running towards me, I smiled at Sarah. "We lost you! I'm glad we found you though!" she said sounding happing. "Looks like yue found yur friend."
the girl said to me. Sarah look at her, "Hi, I'm Sarah are you Lauren's friend." the girl laughed then looked at me.

"We've only juss met, but we could be friend she hasn't managed to piss meh off completely. I'm Kelly." she said to Sarah then smiled at me.

"Come on then let's get to our seats!" Sarah said pulling us to our seats, soon The Beatles came on and started to play. I had my eyes fixed on Paul the whole time and a few things he winked at me. Sarah and Kelly sang a lot to most of the songs, while Tony and I danced since we didn't know all the words to the songs like Kelly and Sarah. After the concert was over I said goodbye to Kelly giving her my phone number, then we went back stage to met up with the boys.

"Great job guys!" I said walking into the dressing room, I stopped at Paul and gave him a hug. Sarah looked for John but he was no where to be found, she looked disappointed but I could tell she was trying her best not to show it. "Where's John?" she asked trying not to sound interested, George answered her "No idea."

Time went by fast as an hour passed, I talked about meeting Kelly and the screaming fans, George told us about how he had got lost on one song but blamed it on Ringo, Paul talked about the people who work here made them hurry. Ringo went back to what George was saying and they started fighting over who's fault it was until they both decided that it was Paul's fault and that would be the end of it. Paul stood up to fight with this but I just kissed him to shut him up, and Tony started talking about he almost crushed by the fans and how he never wanted to go to a concert but Sarah hit him in the head and told him that was a huge lie.

"Where is John?" Sarah suddenly said standing up ready to start looking for him, she straighten her dress and walked over to another door that lead to another room.

Everyone watched her open the door to the room.

Everyone watched saw John kissing some girl.

Everyone watched Sarah face grow from shocked to hurt to heartbroken.

Everyone watched Sarah run away in tears.

And me? I ran after her, only stopping to slap John in the face and tell him to fuck off.


Review! tell me your thoughts, and yes there probably is a lot of mistakes but I will correct later.

btw can you guess my favorite Beatle? :D