A bit of Dan inner monologue now :) Hope you like it :D

Breathe Dan... Yes, that's it, remember how to fucking breathe? Pain... no! Don't focus on the pain, focus on yourself, who you are, focus on Phil. How he lovingly kisses you, how his hugs warm you to the bone. Yes... right, calm, stay calm and AHHHH. Jesus Christ, I did not need that huge amount of pain in my rib cage just then thank you! Calm Dan, breathe, I need to breathe steadily... in, and out, in, and out. Right, plan, I need a plan. Get up?... Nope! That's definitely NOT going to happen. Call out? No, bad idea. I don't want some creepy gangsters finding me out here! Pass out? Probably not a good idea either. Great, I'm getting nowhere with this. Wait, is that people over there? Oh my God yes, people. What are other people doing out here in the pouring rain? But to be honest I don't really care, I just need their help. Okay... why can't I call out to them? It's like my voice keeps getting stuck in my throat. No no no no no, I need them, they may be my only chance right now. What now? Get up? I could try... Shit! Okay, getting up was not a good idea. I feel like... why can't I focus on anything, am I swaying? What is happening? Darkness? Why am I seeing darkness?

The last thing I felt was my voice letting out a strangled cry before I fell to the floor and my mind clouded.