Okay, sorry, this may look weird because it's in notepad and MS Word isn't working for some reason.

Anyways. I meant to post this a long time ago.

Kay. I don't seem to plan out my fanfictions as I do my original stories. My guess is it's because I write as fast as I can, then I post.

I completely forgot about Charlie's death. And that Victoria was out there.

So, after I finished the last chapter, I realized these things. And quite a few other things with it. So I had originally thought of making a sequel.

But then I read Eclipse. And my thoughts for fanfiction before it went out the window. Because my ideas seem pathetic to hers.

I won't spoil anything if you guys haven't read it. Only that, if you don't hate Jacob before this book, chances are, you will hate him. I've been anti Jacob since New Moon. I'm completely anti Jacob now. Like, I want him to DIE. -rant-

Kay. I'm rambling now. Basically, no, I am not writing a sequel to this like I had originally planned. And I'm sorry you all had to suffer through my scatter brained writing.

This is the last thing I want to say, but it's the longest. To my reviewers, and even to my readers who did not ever review. It's a complaint. And I'm sorry for that. I should be happy that I get reviews, no? But I'm not. Because almost all of them are UPDATEUPDATEUPDATETHISISSOGOODICANTWAITUPDATE!, or some form of that. It may only be annoying to me. You see, I post on here for one reason, and one reason only. To get critiques on my writing. Not the idea, though I do appreciate hearing it's a good idea. I want critiques on my style, and how I convey the ideas, and, since it's fanfiction, how well I'm capturing the characters. Because, yes, I felt great for awhile, reading UPDATE IT'S SO GOOOOOD!, even though I wanted actual criticism. And then I started reading some other Twilight fanfiction on here. I'll be rude because you have no idea which stories I'm talking about. They sucked. I'm not even kidding. Grammar mistakes, spelling mistakes, punctuation mistakes, which bugs me to no end, and I struggled to read it. The characters were poorly captured. The ideas were decisions Bella made, even though she would NEVER make those decisions. And there were pointless bits of fluff. Not good fluff, like description. Just three pointless paragraphs.

Feel free to comment and say "U R SO MEEN, IM SUR U CLDNT DU NY BTTR, THY HAV FLLNGS 2!!!!!!!!!!!!!!". I really don't care, 'kay? 'Kay.

But seriously. If I do post any more fanfiction, please make an effort to comment on the writing itself. I don't care how mean and brutally honest you are. I can take it. I have no feelings, so you can't hurt them. I am not perfect. I am about as far from it as you can be. But I would like to get a lot close. I am set on being an author. And that's never going to happen if I don't get constructive criticism, because I never let anyone read my original works, because, I know, it's stupid, but I'm saving them to get published. No one's reading them until they're finished, unless it's a publisher, and I'm sure exactly how the story is going.

This was a lot longer than I intended. I'm sure some of you are going "...SO MANY WORDS!111!!1!!11!!one!!11!11!!". Get over it. I needed to rant about that.

I may not post anymore fanfiction. Maybe, if I have an idea, I'll post it somewhere else, along with here. But that's not the point. I have no other ideas. Eclipse left me idea-less, except for my theory for what happens next. Which, actually, isn't as exciting as my theories were for Eclipse (which I got extremely close on). But I don't want to type out those theories because, like I said, the ones I had for Eclipse were much more exciting, so that oppurtunity is gone. Besides, I'm sure there's already thousands of stories for people's versions of the next book. And I don't want to add to all the crap out there. Yes. I'm in a bad mood. So I'm going to insult other works if I want. Not like I'm specifying or anything.

And I'm not posting my original works on fictionpress. So this rant is pointless except one thing: I know other authors that feel the same way as me. I know six personally that are extremely good writers, but could always need help, and I'm sure there are others. I hope this inspired you to be intelligable in your reviews and to help those people improve.

Okay. Rant over.

:: A note for Fate ::

Yes. I believe I still have a chapter that needs to be posted. I've been working on my original works and can't bring myself to type up that last chapter. I may take it down if I don't see the need to finish it. Sorry. I hated both of these stories. I know I can do better. Original works are better for me. I enjoyed writing both of these stories up to a point, and then I realized they sounded like a five year old wrote them.

Long, boring, ranty author's note is officially over now

Again. If anyone still has this alerted to actually see this, feel free to flame me. Build a bonfire if you wish. I don't care. I have no feelings. You can't hurt them. Kay? Kay.