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Who Am I?

Rin's POV

"She'll be ok, I promise," Haru whispered into my ear, reassuringly. "She's strong, she can make it."

I had just heard about what had happened to Tohru. I couldn't believe it, either. Someone as nice as her, being taken advantage over once again. I would never forgive that man. I couldn't

take it, doing nothing, only laying in Haru's arms for comfort. Didn't Tohru need comfort more than I did? I stood up from the couch, Haru just staring at me, pleading that I didn't do anything

reckless.

"Haru, I can't!" I cried. "I can't just sit here and imagine what is happening to Tohru. I've got to go look for her!" I dashed out of the room, Haru hot on my heels. He grabbed my arm.

"Well, if you're going, then I'm going, too." I looked at him surprised. He wanted to go too? I gave him a true smile. "I'm glad, Haru, thank you."

Meanwhile, the two men approached Tohru. They undid the chains, and tied her hands. They didn't need to do that, though, considering that she was too weak to even try to escape. She

was barely concious, because she had way too many blows to the head. She was mostly in a dream world, far far away, where no one could touch her, no one could harm her. It was just

herself. Herself, and her agonizing pain on that one question. Who am I?

A young, fragile, bruised child awoke, chained to a tree like a dog. She reached to her neck and pulled, desparately, as if doing that would make it let go. She tried crying for help, but found

she had no voice. She let out a sob, that sounded like a gasp. Her throat was dry. She tried to stand, but was unsuccessful. She looked around, and saw that there was a little creek just

nearby. She crawled over, and reached it. Thank goodness the chain was long enough to allow that. She reached her hands in and cupped some water in her hands and drank deeply. It

tasted horrible, like polluted, disgusting waste. She crawled back, the taste in her mouth still present. At least it wasn't dry anymore. In a little bit, she had begun to feel sick to her stomach.

She vomited in the bushes nearby, and cried some more. She was frightened, very frightened. Who was she, and how did she get here?

Kyo was getting frantic. It had been about 48 hours since her disappearance. The police were on the case, and all the Sohmas were all searching for her, including Hana and Uo. He was so

frantic, that he began to pray. That was definitely not something he would normally do. He was desparate, so he was going to try all he could to bring her back. Dear God, please, please bring

her back to me! He continued his search.


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