I think most of the guest account replies are pretty harsh this time. Sorry but these type of reviews just piss me off and make me not want to write. ESPECIALLY when your complaining about what's going on in the story, about the pairing and about the hook ups and stuff. Fair enough a lot of people get hate for their stories.. but if you like the story and complain about something that's happening.. then what;s the point? ESPEICALLY WHEN IT SAYS IN THE SUMMERY OF THE STORY THERE'S A HOOK UP. I think it was pretty clear from the start that it wasn't going to be a girl/boy couple. It's not like Ross & Ratliff are dating in this story anyway.. THEY'RE NOT. How many times do I have to get it through most of your fucking thick skulls... HOOK UP not RELATIONSHIP there's a very big fucking difference you know. If your a fucking fuck tard and don't know the difference between the both of them... LOOK IT UP.
Jesus fucking Christ it's not hard people.
Guest account replies:
Riaura Fan: Okay listen to me... listen to me closely. I can do what the fuck I want with Riaura/Raura okay. I don't care if it wasn't a good introduction and I don't care if it seemed like Riker forced her. I. DO. NOT. CARE. It's how the story is going to go okay? If you don't like it then tough shit.
questions: Yes, I AM a Riaura shipper... Why? (- ONLY guest review that didn't tick me off congrats girl - or boy-)
Delaney: Look, I'll add Raura if I want okay. I'm not a Raura shipper okay? So it might not seem likely for Raura anyway. (*SPOILER*) In fact, any couple with Ross in doesn't seem likely at the way this story is going.
Guest: You know what, Fuck off. if you don't like the fact Ross and Ratliff hooked up I don't give two shades of shit if you don't like it. Don't like? Don't read.
*Takes a deep breath* Sorry to start on a angry note.. but hey-ho you get people who piss you off. I know I sound like a right bitch when I start off most of my stories but I promise you I am NOT like this in anyway in real life or on Twitter.. seriously. Ask any of the people I tweet on Twitter the most, I'm genuinely a nice person :)
On another note, who saw R5's cover of "Girls" by the 1975! I've never listened to the original song but OH MY GOSH THEIR COVER IS SO GOOD AND CATCHY I JUST /.
Anyway, I'm going to let you all read now! :)
(1) The Script - For The First Time
Chapter 12
For The First time
She's all laid up in bed with a broken heart,
While I'm drinking jack all alone in my local bar,
And we don't know how,
How we got into this mad situation,
Only doing things out of frustration
Trying to make it work but man these times are hard,
She needs me now but I can't seem to find the time,
I've got a new job now on the unemployment line,
And we don't know how,
How we got into this mess
Is it god's test?
Someone help us 'cause we're doing our best (1)
A few weeks had passed, Ross and Ratliff were still hooking up, Riker and Laura were still going behind Ross's back and Maia was trying her best to keep Titus away from Rydel. Yet somehow everything felt like it was perfect, when in fact it was like a ticking time bomb. Only a matter of time before everything exploded and destroyed everything. Because no doubt that was bound to happen, wasn't it?
For a chance - instead of Ross suggesting it - Laura thought it would be a nice idea if her and Ross go out for the night on a date or something like that. Oh how Ross was desperate to make a remark, but he kept it too himself. He could always let it out later right? He sighed as he looked at Laura who was sat across the table from him, she just avoided eye contact with him. Not all the time, just sometimes. Obviously the guilt was eating her alive.
Ross couldn't help but smirk, he covered up the smirk by making it look like a smile "So how's it living with Riker?" Ross asked as he leaned on the table.
Laura's head immediately shot up at those words "What? Why?" Laura asked, getting defensive a little bit. Maybe she just wasn't use to doing stuff like this, maybe that's why she felt like everyone knew and people were watching her.
"Because, I just want to know. I lived with him once. The only reason you live with him is because of Jenny. Am I right?"
Laura nodded with a smile "Yeah of course it is. It's great living with Riker. He's kind, caring and understanding so it's a whole lot easier."
"Oh I bet it is.." Ross said with the grin on his face, which Laura was mistaking for smile. Ross looked at Laura as she played with her hair a little bit when she accidentally uncovered a fresh love bite. Which definitely was not from Ross at all. If they make out, he never goes near her neck. The only time he goes near her neck is when.. yeah. And he is absolutely sure he hasn't done any of that with her lately. For at least 2 or 3 weeks now. The only person he has done it with in the past 2 - 3 weeks is Ell, and only when he caught Riker and Laura together or when Ratliff caught Rydel and Titus.
Goes to prove how much time the four of them spend time with one another.
Instead of confronting Laura and asking about it now, he just decided to leave it. He had to remember that when Laura had the decency to tell him about her little love affair, he got the pleasure of telling her he already knew. He just smiled at Laura before finishing off his drink "Shall we go home now?" Ross asked.
Laura nodded "Sure."
Ross walked Laura all the way to the front of her front door of the apartment she shared with Riker. They talked for a little while outside the apartment, like tomorrow night and how everyone is suppose to be going to Stormie's for dinner. Which is a kind of thing they do either monthly or weekly, lately it's been weekly. But it could change any moment. Ross sighed "Well, I better get going," Ross said "goodnight."
"Goodnight." Laura said, standing on her tip toes and kissing him on the lips "I love you."
Ross just smiled "Back at you," Ross said "bye." he waved, pretending to walk off.
Once the door was shut and locked, Ross walked back to the front door. He got down on his knees and pushed the letter box open to see if anything was going on, by the looks of it Laura was on her way to bed, she was going to go in her room but Riker came out of it from putting Jenny to bed, he kissed Laura in the lips and pulled her into his room. Ross sighed once again, letting the letterbox fall shut.
To Ratliff's he goes.
Ross got to Ratliff's house, he just casually walked through the door as if it was his own home and let the door fall shut on it's own. He sighed and opened out his arms seeing Ratliff sat on the couch "Girlfriends, wonderful aren't they."
"I wouldn't know," Ratliff said looking over the back of the couch to him "I don't have one any more for the time being. Why? What did Laura do now?" Ratliff asked.
"I look through the letter box.. saw what I basically see every time I'm outside the door and looking through the letter box after dropping her home. The thought of them doing whatever they are doing right now just.." Ross shuddered, making a shivering noise.
Ratliff got up off the sofa and walked round the back to where Ross was "Well, just calm down about it. What happened to you having your own fun remember?"
Ross smiled "Oh yeah.. forgot about that." He said, pulling Ratliff closer to him, kissing him on the lips.
Ratliff deepened the kiss as he let his hands go round Ross's neck and Ross's hand just stayed down at Ratliff's waist, clutching onto his shirt tighter as the kiss became more heated and Ross slipped his tongue into his mouth. Ratliff dropped his hands down from his neck down to the rim of Ross's shirt, tugging at it as they made out passionately in the middle of the floor, Ross almost going back onto the sofa. Ross ran his hands through Ratliff's hair softly at first, but it just got rougher and rougher as he got more and more impatient. "Just take it off."
As Ratliff pulled off Ross's shirt, the front door opened up to Ratliff's apartment and both of them just froze in the kiss, whilst Ratliff was in mid way of pulling up his shirt. The pair of them stayed like that for about 3 seconds before pulling away and looking over to the door slowly.
Where they saw Rocky with an unreadable expression on his face.
Ratliff let go of Ross's shirt as he realised he was still pulling it up, well froze pulling it up. Ross took a deep breath and stood up straight, putting his hand on Ratliff's shoulder "Well, I think the um.. snake poison is.. um.. gone now. You can thank me later.. Bye guys!" Ross said going to the door, but Rocky shut it before Ross could leave.
"Snake bite really?" Rocky asked, folding his arms. Ross nodded.
"C'mon Ross, I know I'd try to cover up for us but snake bite is just... stupid." Ratliff said.
Rocky took a deep breath himself "Okay, so.. I'm going to pray like the most religious person in the world right now and how you guys have some kind of explanation to this. Hoping it's not something stupid and it's not what I think it is.."
"I.. I wanna say yes... but I'm gonna have to say no.." Ross said, taking a seat down on the sofa because no doubt Rocky was going to have to want some kind of talk with him and Ratliff.
Rocky looked at Ratliff and moved his head, telling Ratliff to sit down with Ross. Once the pair of them were seated, Rocky went over and stood in front of them. Folding his arms "I want an explanation.. and I want it now."
"Okay," Ross sighed "so.. I'm dating Laura as you all know.. and um... basically I caught her and Riker at it with one another, but they don't know I know they're still going behind my back. So I decided I wanted revenge on them. But before that happened I got it into this ones mind," He said patting Ratliff's back "that it was okay for him to get his revenge on Titus and Rydel because he caught them both kissing in the park."
"But Rydel's got memory loss.. she's going to be gullible to people." Rocky said.
"Tell him that!" Ross said.
"Need I remind you your the one who started this thing off.." Ratliff said, seen as though it looked like Ross was trying to get all the blame on him.
"Right, Ross.. I can understand why you would want to do it," Rocky started "but.. Ratliff.. I don't understand why you would."
"Oh wow.. Seems fair.." Ratliff said sarcastically, sinking into his sofa.
Ross looked from Ratliff to Rocky "Your.. Your not going to tell anybody are you?" Ross asked nervously.
Rocky looked from both of the boys, deciding whether he was going to or not. He could see the fear on their faces, in which they should be feared if Rocky knows something like this as he is unpredictable at keeping secrets. You never know when he could blow it.
"No," Rocky said "I'm not," which started to give Ross and Ratliff hope "cause I think I could have my own fun with this.." Rocky said with a grin.
And at that moment.. Ross and Ratliff realised they were both doomed.
But we both know how,
How we're gonna make it work when it hurts,
When you pick yourself up,
You get kicked to the dirt,
Trying to make it work but,
Man, these times are hard (1)
Short chapter I know cx but in the future there are longer chapters coming! I promise! :)
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