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In last chap you read Daya met Abhijeet but his talks confused him & Daya demanded for Cigarettes & Sameer get shocked on his demand. Let's see what happens next…
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Anurag entered in room & found Abhijeet was looking tense & confuse , he shook his head in disappointment & moved towards him, Abhijeet looked him & without lossing any single minute fired his queries on him…
Abhijeet (confuse)—Chachu…ye Daya ko kya ho gaya hai, kaisi ajeeb si baate kar raha thaa vo…mujhe tou kuch samajh mai nahi aa raha …vo tou mujhse naraj thaa , tou phir mujhse milne kyu aaya…. aur mujhse normally baate kar raha thaa , jaise kuch hua hee nahi …najane kya kya bol raha thaa…..exam nahi dunga..kabhi disturb nahi karunga…kahi chala jaunga…..Chachu vo bahut weird behave kar raha thaa…..
Anurag grabbed his palm & tried to make him relax…
Anurag—Abhijeet…relax baccha….ek sath itne sare questions…..tum tou Daya ko jante ho, abhi vo tumse naraj hai , issiliye aise baate kar raha hoga….sab kuch theek hai beta, vo thume lekar bhi thoda tense hai….jab se thumari aur uski ye so called dushmani start hui hai na, tab se hee , vo thoda ajeeb sa behave karne laga hai…
Abhijeet (shocked)—Chachu , aapne kabhi bataya nahi aur school mai tou vo bilkul normal behave karta thaa…
Anurag (tease)—tou school mai tou , tum bhi normal hee rahte thee…..dekho Abhijeet tumne Daya ko majboor kiya hai , vo sab karne ke liye…tum se ladne ke liye , competition karne ke liye…but scah tou yahi hai ki , inn sab mai usne apna Bhai , kahi kho diya hai ..…..vo apne dil ki baat kisse share karta….tum tou jante ho , Daya apni har ek baat tum se share karta thaa…uski har choti badi , sab baate vo thume batata thaa…..
Abhijeet (dreaming tone)—mai sunna bhi nahi chahta thaa, tou bhi batata thaa , jab tak bol nahi deta thaa , uska khana hazam nahi hota thaa….Abhi ye , Abhi vo….sara din uska chatter box chalta hee rahta thaa….chup rahna tou Janab ne sikha hee nahi thaa….
Anurag—aur agar uska , vahi sahara uss se cheen liya jaye , tou vo kya feel karega , bolo…..?
( Abhijeet looked him with teary eyes)…thumare samne strong banne ke chaakar mai usne apni sari baate dil mai daba lii…vo kahta bhi tou kiss se, koi sunne wala jo nahi thaa uske pass….uska Bhai, jo uski har ek baat ka rajdaar thaa….uske man mai bahut kuch bhar gaya hai Abhijeet…aur usne vo sab , apne dil mai hee chupa liya hai….kahe bhi tou kis se , kya koi uske Abhi ki jagah le sakta hai…..
Abhijeet(teary)—aap tou thee na Chachu aur Mom aur Sameer bhi….vo usse sab batata hai….
Anurag (keenly looked him) —thume yakeen hai….(Abhijeet lowered his head ) kya Daya ne pahle humse , koi baat share ki hai….shyad nahi, bass vahi , jo sirf humse related ho aur baaki baato ka kya…uska chatter box sunne ke liya , tou koi nahi hai naa, aur na vo kisi aur se kahega….kya tumne ab usse, pahle ki tarah bolte dekha hai Abhijeet…..kya ab bhi vo pahle ki tarah zidd karta hai , ya kush hota hai…..aur Jaha tak Sameer ki baat hai , vo uska sabse accha dost ho sakta hai , lekin kya vo kabhi bhi thumari jagah le sakta hai…vo baate , jo Daya sirf tumse kahta thaa , kya kabhi Sameer ke sath share karega….( Anurag took a deep sigh) kabhi nahi…sabki ek khass jagah hoti hai Abhijeet, jo kabhi koi nahi le sakta ….tum hee batao , kya thumare dil mai , Daya ki jagah , koi aur le sakta hai…ya koi uss jagah tak pahuch bhi sakta hai…bolo….?
Abhijeet hugged him & start crying in low tone….
Abhijeet(crying)—Chachu, Daya mujhse bahut naraj hai na…..theek hai naraj hai magar , vo kah raha thaa , humse dur chala jayega…..usne aisa kyu kaha Chachu….kyu….kya maine usse badal diya hai Chachu, mujhe laga vo aayega , gussa karega but vo tou bilkil hee badal gaya hai Chachu…..bilkul badal gaya hai….
Anurag slowly patted his back…
Anurag (softly)—Abhijeet , vo bass thumara wait kar raha hai beta ….ab uska Abhi bhi tou badal gaya hai naa…..jab usse uska vahi purana Abhi vapas mil jayega na , tou vo bhi , pahle jaisa chatter box ban jayega…..(both of them smiled…) par uske liyae thume bhi pahle jaisa banna hoga na….tumne socha , thumare door jane se , vo thumare bina rahna sikh jayega , independent ban jayega….ye sach hai ki vo thumare bina rahna sikh gaya hai , independent bhi ban gaya hai ,magar kya ye vahi Daya hai…..humara Daya …kya tumne , aisa hee Daya chaha thaa….sach kahu tou , ab mai bhi usse samjh nahi pata…shyad uss par dhyaan hee nahi de paa raha….ek baar tum theek ho jao , phir dekhna sab kuch apne aap theek ho jayega….bass Daya ko avoid mat karo, usse realize karao , ki uska BHAI , abhi bhi uske sath hai…..
Abhijeet still in hug & said in teary tone- Mai tou hamesha uske sath hu Chachu…..bass mujhe , vo mera pahle jaisa Nanha Daya vapas chahye…
Anurag (caressing his hair)—thumara vo Daya kahi nahi gaya hai Abhijeet, vo yahi hai , lotkar tou thume uske pass jana hai…..(Abhijeet nodded in hug) jante ho , mai bhi bilkul Daya jaisa thaa , apni har baat Aarav Bhaiya se share karta thaa…ek dum Chatter box…(Abhijeet smiled)…..mujhe mere har kadam par bass, Bhaiya hee chahye thee…mai un par puri tarah dependent thaa, samajh lo unke bina , mai apnii life ke bare mai , soch bhi nahi sakta thaa…aur phir ek din vo hum sab ko akela chodkar chale gaye…..meri jindgi tou ekdum khalli ho gai thee par maine kya jeena chod diya….nahi Abhijeet, mai jiya apne parivar ke liye , apne Bhai ke adhure sapne pure karne ke liye …mai bhi independent bana , life ki problems ko face kiya….har responsibility ko pura karne ki , koshisk ki hai aur kar raha hu…magar kya mai kush hu…..nahi Abhijeet, mai kush nahi hu…(Abhijeet grabbed him more tightly)…mai apni life mai aage badha , naam , paisa sab earn kiya …lenin mai phir bhi kush nahi hu Beta….aisa nahi, ki agar Bhaiya aaj hote , tou mai ye sab nahi kar pata…ye sab tab bhi hota , bass farak sirf itna hota , ki mai tab kush hota…..hamare apne hamari kamzori nahi hote Abhijeet , balki vo hamari takat (power) hote hai….aaj agar Bhaiy hote , unka support, unka pyar mere liye sab kuch hota , meri takat hota….mai jee raha hu Abhijeet , ek successful business hu , lekin mai andar se khokla hu chukka hu….(Anurag start crying ) ek machine ki tarah , sab kuch kar raha hu , magar kush nahi hu….meri kushi mera pariwar hai , tum ho aur aaj ek baar , phir se mai vahi khalipan feel kar raha hu, jo maine apne dil mai kahi ,dafan kar diya thaa….kya tum chahte ho, Daya bhi meri tarah , ek khali zindgi jiye….bilkul ek machine ki tarah , jisme koi emotions nahi hote..
Abhijeet(crying)—nahi Chachu…mai asa kabhi nahi dunga…
Anurag—tou kya , thumare dur jane se Daya kush rahega…..ha vo independent banega , life mai success bhi hasil karega par shyad vo hamara Daya nahi hoga…tumne usse khud se nafrrat karne ke liye majboor tou kar diya hai par kya usse khud ko yaad karne se rok paoge….vo thume yaad karega Abhijeet , chahe pyar se ya nafrrat se magar tum uss se uska Bhai tou cheen hee loge na…jiske kandhe par sar rakhkar , vo ro tou sakta thaa , tum tou uss se , uske rone ka hak bhi cheen lena chahte ho Abhijeet, phir tou shyad vo jee hee na paye Beta…jee hee naa paye….
Abhijeet (crying with voice)- l am sorry Chachu….l am really sorry…mai Daya ko khone nahi dunga Chachu…mai usse sorry bol dunga….
Anurag(lovingly)—usse thumare sorry ki nahi , thumari zarrorat hai Abhijeet….tum uski kamjori nahi , takat(power) ho beta aur ab uss se , uski ye takat khone mat dena….
Abhijeet (crying)—kabhi nahi Chachu …kabhi bhi nahi….
Abhijeet grabbed his Chachu more tightly & closed his eyes, Anurag felt sad for him…soon Abhijeet's grip became looser & Anurag felt him, loosing his sense, he got separate from him & found him, in semi conscious state….
Anurag (tense)—Abhijeet….Abhijeet….
But Abhijeet gave no response , he saw nurse & told her …
Anurag (to nurse)—Sister , plz call Dr Deepak…
Nurse nodded & moved out…
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Sameer (shocked)—tum chahte kya ho Daya….?...nahi aaj tum bata hee do…..aise ulti seedi demand karte ho… ho kya gaya hai thume….?...ek taraf thumare Bhai , Hospital mai hai aur yaha, inn janab ko Cigarette pini hai…..wah ...aur kuch ho tou, vo bhi bata do….
Daya—ho gaya tera….yaar puri baat tou suntan nahi hai aur apna lecture start kar deta hai...
Sameer - puri baat sunkar hee bola hai, abhi tune hee tou kaha, jo sab karte hai vahi karna hai….ab maine tou sab logo ko cigarette pite hee dekha hai , ab iska koi naya use bhi hai ,tou vo tum mujhe bhi bata do…meri bhi knowledge increase ho jayegi…
Daya—Sameer tu bhi na…are yaar ek drama karna hai bass….
Sameer (tease) —ohh….to hamare handsome Mr Daya ab Cigarette ka advertisement karenge….tujhe modeling ka shok kab se ho gaya…..
Daya(angry)—dekh Sameer dimaag mat kharab kar , jo bol raha hu bass vo kr…I need cigarette aur tum mujhe vo lakar doge ….
Sameer—are mai kyu lakar dunga , thume chahye tum purchase karo…
Daya (irritated) —are Maharaj , mai purchase karne ke liye nahi kah raha hu….tu samajhta kyu nahi hai yaar….dekh tere Dad cigarettes pite hai na…tou bass unka ek cigarette ka packet , mujhe de dena….mai baad mai vapas kar dunga, bass 1 ya 2 cigarette ki he jarurat padegi…..
Sameer—pata nahi tere dimaag mai kya chalta rahta hai…..chal kab lani hai bol…
Daya(smiled)—kal morning mai…aur sun jaldi aana….
Sameer—theek hai….vaise Daya tu karna kya chahta hai…..?
Daya—bass ye samajh le , kuch khoya hua ,vapas pana chahta hu…
Sameer (suspicious)—tu kahi Abhijeet ki baat tou nahi kar raha…?
Daya (smiled) —o… wow…you are so smart…
Sameer—but yaar , meri kuch samagh nahi aa raha….
Daya—tu morning mai aaja , sab kuch samajha duna , abhi rakhta hu….bye..
Sameer (smiled)- ok.. take care…
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Daya sat in car & moved towards home….
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Deepak came inside the room & found Anurag in tension, he looked Abhijeet & without wasting any time start his work…Anurag was so much tense & looking Abhijeet with teary eyes…soon Deepak ordered something to nurse ..after completing his task he looked at Anurag, who was looking at Abhijeet In tension…..
Deepak (slowly)— he is ok Anurag….
Anurag (worried)—ye achanak se behosh kaise ho gaya…?
Deepak—weakness hai aur shyad roya bhi hai…( Anurag lowered his head)…uske liye itna exertion abhi theek nahi hai…..usse kush rahna chahye na ki , iss tarah rona chahye…..
Anurag (looked him)—l know Deepak….but l hope ki, ab sab kuch theek ho jayega….
Deepak—aisa ho tou accha hai…..vaise mujhe tumse, kuch baat karni thee….
Anurag (serious) —mai janta hu tum kya kahna chahte ho….mai tumse pahle bhi kah chukka hu , meri liye iss time , Abhijeet se important kuch nahi hai , aur uske liye tumne jo decision liya hai, I am agree with that…..
Deepak (serious) —tou phir hum jald hee session start kar denge…..tum Abhijeet ko bata dena ,taki vo khud ko prepare kar sake…..it's very important & you know that…
Anurag (tense)—tou kya tum kal se hee….
Deepak—kal mai Abhijeet ko discharge de raha hu & we'll start this session from day after tomorrow…we don't have much time Anurag….hame jaldi karni hogi , varna kahi sab kuch haath se nikal na jaye…..
Anurag (tense)—kya Abhijeet…..l mean , vo abhi baccha hai Deepak aur vo ye sab kaise …?
Mujhe bahut dar lag raha hai yaar, hum bade bhi gabra jate hai aur phir uski tou age hee kya hai…kabhi kabhi sochta hu, maine jis Abhijeet ko itne nazo se pala hai , jisse kabhi , jara si bhi takleef nahi hone di , aaj ussi ko itna dard sahna pad raha hai aur mai kuch bhi nahi kar paa raha hu , kuch bhi nahi….
Deepak (kept his hand on his shoulder) —sab theek ho jayega Anurag….be brave, aage Abhijeet ko tum sabke , support ki bahut zarrorat padegi…bahut jyada , issliye khud ko strong rakho….
Anurag controlled his emotions & asked…
Anurag— Bhabi kaha hai…
Deepak—vo ghar se ,Neelam Bhabi ka phone aaya thaa , bass unhi se baat kar rahi thee…..
Anurag nodded & both of them came out from room where Abhijeet was sleeping with medicine effect….
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Daya was on passenger seat & Ramesh was driving the car , at signal Ramesh stopped car & waiting for green signal suddenly an old woman , who was in torn saari , bare foot & looking lost , came on car's window, she was constantly looking at Daya , Daya felt something odd & open the window but that old woman was still looking him & didn't say anything , Daya thought that she was a beggar, he took out , 50 Rs note from his pocket & when he forward his hand to give that money, old lady grabbed his hand tightly & started murmuring something….
Old lady— kho jayega…kho jayega vo…..nahi bachega…nahi bachega, tadap tadap kar mar jayega….mar jayega ….(and she start laughing) ha ha ha ha ha ha….
Daya felt scare & tried to make his hand free , Ramesh came out from car …
Ramesh-are kaun ho tum….jao yaha se….maine kaha jao….
That old lady jerked his hand & moved out with laughing , Ramesh turned to Daya , who was looking scared & seeing that lady…Ramesh came close & jerked him..
Ramesh (tense)—Daya baba…aap theek tou hai na…?...Daya baba..
Daya jerked & looked at Ramesh , who was looking him with concern…
Daya—ha…ha mai theek hu…..
Same time signal turned green & Ramesh again sat in car & drive towards home…..Daya was thinking about that lady & her words were echoing in his ears….
Soon they came home , Daya moved out from car, he was still thinking about that lady…
Ramesh (concern) —kya hua Daya baba….aap theek tou hai na…?...
Daya—ha mai theek hu Ramesh…tum car park kar do..
Ramesh nodded & moved…
Daya (thinking)—ye mai kya soch raha hu….kon thee wo lady….? ( tried to console himself) tu bhi na Daya…vo koi pagal lady hogi, dekhne se bhi , pagal hee lag rahi thee….pagal log aise hee hote hai , kuch bhi bolte hai…..(Daya smiled to feel relax) mai bhi naa…najane ..kya kya sochne lagta hu…..vo jo kuch bhi kah rahi thee , uss se mujhe kya…seriously Daya , tera dimaag kuch jyada hee chalne laga hai…..
He jerked his head & entered in house, Neelam looked him…
Neelam (smiled)—are Daya , tou mulakat ho gayi apnr Bhai se…jyada gussa tou nahi kiya uss par….
Daya—Mom , aap bhi ussi ki side le rahi hai…..
Neelam—mai kisi ki side nahi le rahi hu , mai tou bass , aise hee kah rahi hu….accha chalo tum fresh ho jao , mai dinner lagati hu….
Neelam went & Daya sat on couch, he was feeling restless …
Daya—pata nahi kaisa ajeeb sa feel ho raha hai….(suddenly his eye caught a photo frame & he looked that picture with love)….hamesha aise hee haste rahna Abhi….
Neelam came & found him seeing that picture with smile…
Neelam—kya baat hai Beta…ye akele akele kyu smile kar rahe ho, mujhe bhi tou pata chale, ki mera Nanha sa Daya, kis baat par muskura raha hai….
Daya (smiled) —Mom..aap bhi na….mai tou bass ,vo apni aur Abhi ki , photo dekhkar hass raha hu…yaad hai , jab Dad ye photo le rahe thee , apke ladle Abhi ne, piche se mere do sing(horns) bana diye thee aur baad mai mujh par kitna hass raha thaa….
Neelam (smiled)—acche se yaad hai aur ye bhi , ki uske baad tum ne pure 3 hours tak, uss se baat nahi ki thee ….jo uss time thumare liye, impossible thaa….
Daya smiled & lowered his head….Neelam moved forward to pick that photo frame but suddenly that frame fell down with voice & glass pieces scattered all over the floor…Daya looked that broken frame with shock & some words started echoing in his mind…..
kho jayega…kho jayega vo…..nahi bachega…nahi bachega, tadap tadap kar mar jayega…. mar jayega….
Daya (shout)—Nahi…
Neelam looked him & got tense, she moved close to him & grabbed him with his shoulder….
Neelam( tense)—Daya ..kya hua Beta….tum theek tou ho naa…?...
Daya (worried)—Mom …Mom, vo Abhi…vo theek hai naa….usse kuch hua tou nahi….
Neelam—nahi Beta, Abhijeet theek hai, tum abhi vahi se tou aa rahe ho…tumne dekha hai na , vo theek hai Daya…
Daya (worried)—Mom , mujhe bahut tension ho rahi….aap Dad ko call kariye na plz….mujh Abhi se Baat karni hai….plz Mom..
Neelam tried to relax him…
Neelam—theek hai….theek hai , mai abhi call karti hu ok…..lekin Beta tum bewajah tense ho rahe ho , Abhijeet bilkul theek hai , uske sath thumare Dad hai , Badi Maa hai...….sab kuch theek hai Daya….dekho mai abhi thumare Dad ko call karti hu….ok…
Daya nodded & Neelam dialed Anurag's number but he was not picking up the call, Neelam looked Daya , who was looking scared…..
Daya (tense)—kya hua Mom…Dad ka phone nahi lag raha kya…?...
Neelam —Daya , thumare Dad shyad busy hai Beta , vo abhi phone nahi utha rahe …
Daya (worried)—Abhi…..
Neelam again dialed his number but same response, now she was also worried for both of her sons...
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