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Hello Readers! Sorry about the reviews being in a separate chapter. Fanfiction wasn't letting me upload the chapter with the reviews on it... Probably something to do with the word could or something? I don't know but I stilled wanted to respond to the review I got since the last chapter was posted. Sorry for in inconvenience. Here are the reviews!
Reviews:
Sbrown963: Thanks for your input! I really appreciate it. Thank you for reviewing.
bored411: Thanks for the review. I'm excited to write Nine and Twelve into the story. One of the two will be popping up a couple chapters time, so not long to wait! Hope you enjoyed this chapter!
KittyCatKate: Thanks! And thank you for leaving your opinion and your concern. It's much appreciated. Many thanks for the review!
SeleneAlice: Sorry for the wait. I hope you like what I'm planning for Nine and Twelve! Their chapters will be a bit sparse though as I'm only using one season for each therefore less episodes to work with. Thanks for the review!
LilactheDryad: Wow, okay. I'll try and answer all your questions the best I can, but if I didn't answer one it's because I don't quite understand what you mean. Unfortunately the Doctor doesn't save the paramedics in The Lazarus Experiment. He arrives too late just like he did in the show. I'm glad you enjoyed the way I wrote Curse of the Black Spot! I think you were referring to my plan for Lucy and the general plot line, but yes I do have a plan. It might take a while to play out sometimes it might not seem like I do have a plan, but I assure you I do. Yes Lucy did know who Sarah Jane was, but that didn't necessarily mean that her and Rose wouldn't fight. I thought it was important to the plot line and also their characters relationship to keep the fighting in there. Plus I really enjoyed those scenes... Lucy's second heart doesn't exactly hurt. It's just a new feeling to her, which I'm sure you can imagine would be a very strange sensation suddenly having a second heart beating in your chest. I wasn't quite sure how to go about it so tried to portray it as an ache. Sorry if it didn't seem realistic. And as to when that chapter took place, it was the same night where they bumped into Sarah Jane in the school. In the show it just skips ahead to the next morning and I always wondered what they might have done that night. I thought it was logical for them to all star at Sarah's place as they arrived at the school the next morning in her car. Sorry if some things weren't very clear. I'm still getting the hang of writing this. Hopefully things will be clearer in the future.
Alix Winchester: Thanks for the review! I hope you enjoyed this chapter, and sorry for the wait. I felt a little bad writing Lucy leaving without saying bye to the Doctor but... You're awesome too! Everyone is awesome.
Sorry again for the long wait on the last chapter.
Until Next time!
- Hunter of Artemis
