Hello world, it's supermariogirl! Chapter 12 of ENL has begun! Sorry for the long wait, I was watching Pucca a lot. This one is in Mario's POV. Just so you know, I was actually kind of nervous when putting up the last chapter. I don't know why, maybe because of this story being a lot more serious than my others. Well, this is T rated for a reason.
The Disclaimer Song:
I make stories for me and you,
but I own nothing so please don't sue! Dum!
Except:
Eve(Human)-Age 10(Main character for these stories..)
Marylin(Toad)-Age 30(A toad who takes care of Eve)
David(Toad)-Age 33(Marylin's boyfriend. Nickname: Dave.)
Kevin(Ghost)-Age 10(Eve's best friend. They hang out almost every day.)
Shadow(Ghost Cat)-Age 3(In normal years, not cat years)(Eve's favorite pet and loyal companion. She found the cat on the streets when she was about 7.)
Mrs. Manabuni(Human)-Age ? (One of Eve's teachers)
Mr. Toadlerara-(Toad)-Age ? (Another one of Eve's teachers.)
Angelina(Ghost)- Age 14(Kevin's teenage sister.)
Gracie(Ghost)-Age 5(Kevin's little sister.)
Madison(Human)-Age 10(Eve's rival. She's popular and snobby. She act's like she's 16 even thought she's only ten.)
Diana(Toad)-Age 10(Madison's best friend. Being the second most popular, she is just as snobby as her friend.)
Judy(Ghost)-Age 36(Kevin's mom)
Twippie(Gracie's teddy bear)
Stephen(Ghost)- Age 15(Angelina's boyfriend. He is only mentioned a few times in the stories.)
Emily(Human)- Age 9(Eve's new friend.)
John(Human)- Age ?(Emily's dad.)
Queen Luna(Human)- Age 31(Queen of Evershade Valley, Eve's mom)
King Simon(Human)- Age 32(King of Evershade Valley, Eve's dad)
Liz(?)- Age ?(Kevin's unseen cousin who is only mentioned once in the whole story.)
Jason(Boo)- Age ?(He's one of King Boo's most loyal minions... or is he?)
Teri(Human)- Age 22(A nurse who lives in the village.)
Carrie(Boo)- Age 15(Teri's assistant.)
Various Unnamed People
We're back on our way to rescue Eve after that dilemma in Bow's mansion. Bow gave us directions to Treacherous Mansion. All was have to do is go straight for 4 more miles.
"So what time is it right now?" I ask.
"It's about 11:30." Luigi says, looking at his watch. Polterpup and Shadow are still tagging along. Polterpup is wagging his tail and panting as usual. After walking for a while, we finally see Treacherous Mansion.
"There it is." I say. I remember when Luigi came here to rescue me.
"It looks exactly like it did last time I was here." Luigi says. We walk towards the front door, but there's a massive chasm between us and the entrance. The chasm surrounds the mansion and has roaring waterfalls around it.
"How are we gonna get past this chasm?" I ask.
"See that narrow ledge?" Luigi explains. "We just have to walk across it. We have to be careful, though."
"Okay." I reply. "You can go first."
"Alright." he replies. He slowly walks across the narrow ledge, then I do the same. Polterpup and Shadow already made it past the chasm and are waiting at the front door. We make it to the entrance. "Okay, I'm gonna look through the window first and I'll tell you if I see Eve, okay?"
"Okay, just hurry up since it's already 11:45." I say. He looks through the window. After a few moments, he has a worried look on his face. "Well, what's there?"
"Well, I saw a cage with Eve in it, and she was crying." he says. "And King Boo was telling her that she should just give up." Oh no, we have to rescue Eve. This is absolutely terrible!
"Aw, poor Eve." I say. "We're gonna rescue her in no time!" Polterpup barks and Shadow meows in agreement. Before I can say anything else, a boo appears right in front of us.
"Before you turn on that vacuum, I just want you to know that I'm on your side." the boo says. What?
"Huh?" Luigi says.
"I'm betraying King Boo. I secretly work for King Simon and Queen Luna." the boo says.
"And how do we know you're lying to us?" I say.
"Because I helped Eve escape." the boo says. "I'm sick of working for King Boo anyway."
"Okay then, well, what's your name?" Luigi asks.
"My name's Jason. King Boo doesn't know I'm secretly on your side." Jason replies.
"Okay Jason." I say. "We'd better open the door and rescue Eve."
"Alright." Luigi says as he takes the key and opens the door.
When we enter the foyer, we see Eve in the cage, crying.
"Eve!" Luigi exclaims.
"Mario, Luigi!" Eve exclaims, relieved. Before we can do anything else, King Boo appears.
"Well, looks like the Marios did show up." He says. "And just on time, too!" We look at the clock and it's exact 12am.
"You're going down!" I shout.
"We'll see about that." he says. Suddenly, Jason throws a book at King Boo.
"What the? Jason, did you just throw that book at me?!" King Boo says.
"Yes, I did. I'm helping them rescue Eve." he says.
"How dare you betray me!" King Boo replies.
"I was never on your side. I was the one who let Eve escape." Jason replies.
"Well, when I defeat the Marios, you're next!" King Boo says. This will be a rough battle.
And that was chapter 12. So, will they defeat King Boo? Will Eve be safe? Find out next time!
By the way, I came up with a few story ideas for the future. The next story is gonna have a very very VERY obscure character from a Mario game. Well, it's not really a Mario game since you don't play as Mario in this particular game. I'm not gonna say who this character is, but I'll give you a hint: blonde hair, wears pink, but she is NOT Peach, so don't be all like "OOH OOH IT'S GONNA BE PEACH!", because the mystery character isn't Peach. Besides, Peach already made an appearance. Anyways, reviews are good, flames will be dosed with water, I like Pocky, see you next time.
Question of the Day: Who do you think will be the mystery character in the next story?
