Authors note: Whew I put this off for a while got caught up with finals and another fic I was working on and again Gundam00,Code geass second season is dubbed, and Finally my favorite Negima season 2 is also dubbed YEAHHH!!!!!!..... sooo uh yeah back to buisness here
I DonkeyKong75m in no way shape or form own the manga that is Negima that belongs to Ken Akamatsu
and I do not own Zach Okoshi either he belongs to My friend Triblade of Chaos
just as another note "Means talkin"
'means thinkin'
So Now I present unto you
A Retelling of Negima Episode 11
Explainations and an Ermine
Right then so where were we......Right Chachamaru had Negi in a choke hold and Chase and Asuna were trying desperatly to catch up while on the other end two other figures had given chase to the vampire as well.
Cue Opening theme: Twister-the world ends with you
Negi was desperatly trying to stuggle free of the robots grip but unfortunatly that wasn't going to be happening any time soon. "Still Evangeline-san why me?"
The shrimpy vampire looked back at the stuggling boy and aproached him "Do you know how long I have been awaiting this day?" she continued forward "The day at long last I could relinquish this damn curse your father the thousand master placed on me!"
"What curse?" Of couse Negi was not going to know, which obviously did not occur to Eva who ran up and grabbed him by the throat. "The curse that put me in this pathetic body and trapped me in this academy!!!!!"
"For fifteen freakin years I have been studying with these ditzy junior high school girls, and you know what it can get on a persons neves after a while!" Eva burst out. "In order to free myself from this curse it is neccasry to counsume a large amount of blood from the thousand masters decendent. and guess who the lucky reletive is!"
Negis eyes went wide with shock and fear as the vampire got behind him. "AH!!! Somebody help me!!!!!!" Negi could only shout as Eva's fangs peirced his neck.
The Red head Asuna and the Ten year old Chase. were bolting up the dormitory stairs to the roof as fast as possible. there was no need for words as they both knew Negi was in over his head. They arrived at the top. "Hey I hear Negi!" Chase whispered while trying to catch his breath. "Really sounds like he's talking with somebody." Asuna could hear them to but couldn't make out exactly what was being said.
With the exception of one thing...
"AH!!! Somebody help me!!!!!!"
Asuna became horrified as her mind ran wild about what was happening to Negi with out hesitation she bolted out side onto the roof with Chase following right behind her.
Chase saw Eva biting Negi and an over whelming urge to beat the ten yearold vampire took over "Hey you!" Eva stopped and looked up "Huh?" Chase raised his wand "Saggica magica III Series Lumis!" He launched the bolts directly at the vampire. Eva forgot about Negi for a second "Right I forgot about the other Brat." She raised her barrier and deflected the magic.
"Gah! No way!"
"Forget it Boya your just to weak."
But both the vampire and the robot had zero time to react as Asuna imeidatly followed up "Thats Right we're talking to you Suck fests!" She landed a round house that made even Chuck Norris jealous, As she sent both of them skidding across the roof.
Dumb founded Eva picked herself up "What in the world how?" She saw Asuna "Oh it figures Asuna the full time trouble maker."
"Huh? Wait Your both from our class Evangeline and Chachamaru."
"What!?" Chase looked up at mention of Chachamaru "Cha ca um er Chachaaaaa...."
"Chachamaru." The gynoid corrected the boy
"Thanks-What are you doing with a Vampire!?" Chase wanted to know.
"I apologize Llendar-san but she is my master." At this point Eva was quite pissed "Grrr you Little brats." Eva lunged forward with her hand extended which had transformed in to a sinister Claw "Dark Claw!" She chared right at Chase.
"AHHH!" Suddenly the attack was stoped by a teen with silver heair and blue eyes. "Hey you hands of my little brothers!"
Chase got out of his portecive stance and looked up "Mister Zach!" Zach looked back while sheathing his twin blades. "Hey Chase how you doing."
Eva Growled "Why you!" She was about to strike again when the sound of a Gun shot rang out from the back of the building the source was a figure wearing a trench coat. "Hey Zach don't be dropping your guard."
"hmmm there seem to be some things we weren't counting on." Eva observed "I'd watch my back if I were any of you next time you won't be so lucky...Chachamaru!" both the vampire and the robot lept from the roof.
"Hey wait Chachamaru......why." Chase ran to the edge of the building.
"Whoa how did they do that were 8 stories up." Asuna noticed.
"Okay mind telling me what the hell is going in here who are you guys!" Asuna got right up in Zachs face. "Um well....er." He stumbled for words. "Hey aren't you guys forgetting something?" The person on the high end of the building pointed to the truamatzed negi still standing but about ready to cry.
"Oh my god Negi." Both Zach and Asuna immidiatly rushed over to him "Uwa... that was so scary Asuna." "Ho man look at this yout bleeding out the neck hangon a sec" Zach took out a hankie and started wiping up the blood. Negi then pratically broke down crying in the two teens arms. "there there its okay now Negi." Asuna comforted.
the guy on the roof sighed "Man hey good thing you guys weren't hurt but listen you should probably get the kids back home I promise me and Zach will explain everying tomorrow." he turned to Zach "Lets go Zach."
"Uh yes Rigel." those two also did a dramatic leap off of the building. "Man how do they do that?" Asuna wondered she looked at the exasuted wizard in her arms. "It's ok Negi everythings fine now we should porbably head back Konoka is probably wondering were we are."
"Gah your right Akira-san must be worried sick by now." It suddenly struck Chase
the three proceeded to get off of the roof with Asuna Carrying Negi unaware that Eva was still watching perched on Chachamaru as the robot hovered in front of the moon "Hmmm I wasn't counting on The hired new term security guards to ctach on to us oh well doesn't matter we will just have to alter our plan a bit."
Of course Akira was worried It was almost midnight and Chase hadn't come back, Yuna had already gone to bed but Akira decided to sit up and wait. Finallly the door to the dorm room opened and a very exasusted Chase walked in.
Akira immediatly rushed up to him "Chase-san where were you I was worried I thought something had happened to you." Chase looked up apolegeticly "I'm sorry Akira-san Negi and I got busy with something at library island and well....I had never been there before...and I figured that since I was with Negi." Akria smiled. "Its okay you don't have to explain just let us know if your going to be late next time."
"I will but boy I am tired." Chase let out a yawn.
"Well I'm not surprised for you it's past your bedtime."
"Gee thanks mom...." Chase said sarcasticly as he headed for the bathroom. The two chuckled at the comment. "I'm glad your ok Chase-san good night."
Chase procceded to exit the bathroom changed into his pajamas, He slid into his futon and stashed Excalibur and wand under the couch when Akria wasn't looking "Good night Akira-san."
The next morning did not go any smoother than the previous night for Asuna. After finally settling Negi down she had to get back up in a few short hours to do her paper route only to find that Negi did not want to face class, which then resulted in the Red head yanking Negi out of bed via wedgie, getting him dressed, and hauling him over her shoulder like a fireman. With Negi Rebelling all the way in fear that Evangeline would come out of nowhere and suck him dry. To which Asuna had replied ."No way Killing a teacher on school grounds they would get detention for sure."
"I'm SO Not ready for this." Negi was still whining as he was being dragged in by Asuna and Konoka. "Good morning everyone." Asuna spoke cheerfully
"Hiya Negi-kun." Makie had finally returned to class. Negi finally composed him self "So Sasaki-san your feeling better?"
"Yep Tho I don't remember anything about it." She replied. Chase Akira and Yuna had arrived and were taking there seats. Negi looked around the room to make sure everyone was there...except "Huh Evangeline isn't here."
"My Mistress is coming to school but she is ditching your class in protest." Chachamaru's popped in behind Negi causing him to jump five feet into the air.
"Shall I get her sensei?" The robot asked. "No no its fine....." Negi let out a sigh 'Oh man Chachamaru Evangelines partner as if the reguluar cut ups weren't enough.' He took his position at the front desk. 'Man the new semester is only one day old and already this maybe by mid terms it will be the apocolyopse' He slumped down at the Desk as he looked at the class of girls and one boy 'Hmm I wonder if my fated parter is one of these girls.' Eva's words echoed in his mind "So in other words since you find your self with out a partner you are clearly at my mercy."
Chase however was not so worried about partner hunting as he was with Chacha...what ever her name was. He kept shooting glances back at the girl/Robot, she seemed like such a nice person when they met, so why would she be hanging out with a creep like Eva....."Um Exucse me Chase-san?"
"Huh?" The boy snapped out of the daze to see the face of Ako Izumi looking his way her book up against her face so she wouldn't be detected. "Your Negi's friend right?" She whispered.
"Um yeah why?" Chase whispered back
"Doesn't Sensei seem a little off today It's like he is in a daze." Chase looked at the boy teacher. "Yeah your right."
'Boy with what happend last night I'm not surprised'
"Um Sensei I'm finished reading the passage." Ako called out to the teacher.
"Ah yes thankyou Izumi-san...." Negi paused for a moment then said something completely left feild. "Say Ako-san can I ask you a personal question. A boy whose several years younger than you would you want some one like that as your partner?"
it was so quiet you could hear a pin drop then it hit.
"WHAT!? But sensei this is I-I-i mean Iv'e been dumped and er.." Ako was freaking out
"Whoa where did that come from!?" Chase did a double take at that sudden question.
"Oh I see well then Miyazaki-san how about you?" Now the spot light was on a redder than a tomato Nodoka. "EHHHH? Well I Um er." She looked over to Haruna and Yue for support who were both whispering "Cmon say its ok" "nows your Chance."
'Oh man what gotten into you Negi just what ever you do please don't call on me' Chase thought to himself while sweating bullets.
"Um O-" "NEGI SENSEI!"
"Yes Iincho-san?"
"IT'S SUPER OKAY WITH ME!" Ayaka had drowned out poor Nodoka but was in turned shoved off by Kazumi. "Listen here sensei about all the girls in this class are complete ditzes you might have a better shot with a girl around twenty!"
Thankfully the bell sounded sparring Negi "Oh well I guess then class dissmissed." Negi still in a daze drifted out of the room but not with out smacking his head on the door on the way out.
"Geez Negi." Asuna and Chase followed out shortly after him.
"Say Asuna you know whats wrong with Negi?" Sakurako stopped her. Asuna sighed "I don't know all I know is that if he doesn't find a partner something bad might happen." Bad thing to say to a class that likes to pounce on rumors as the class immediatly eruppted. But lets move our foucus to outside of the class where Chase Negi and Asuna were leaving the building.
"Seriously Negi whats gotten into you?"
"Yeah I mean Eva did attack you and all but your still here." Chase and Asuna both asked the teacher.
"It's just you don't know how scary that was up there..." Negi whined.
How ever the three were stopped by a voice when they passed by the fountain.
"Oi Negi-bouzu Chase-Kun!"
"Hey good to see you guys again."
They looked over to see both figures from the previous night sitting/standing on the fountain, Zach Okoshi and Rigel Promethious.
Up on the roof Eva Let out a lazy yawn. "Hmmm how boring I suppose its better than sitting through that brats class all day." She sensed something odd. "Something has came throught the magic barrier and passed into our world." She stood up and walked off "Oh well better check it out....Stupid Curse."
Spongebob narrator: 20 minutes later.
Negis group had now expaned to five with Zach and Rigel Joining them.
"Ok once more to make sure I got this Zach." Asuna spoke up pointing to the siver haired teen "You are close friends with Negi and Chase and know that they are mages because you are one as well, and you came here because you were working with Rigel right?"
Zach Nodded "Yep you pretty much got it."
"And you." Asuna turned to the guy who looked like he should belong in a detective drama "You are hired by the school dean himself at the beginning of a new term to help with paranormal security, and when your not doing that you are a demon hunter and Zach is your partner?"
Rigel tipped his hat and grinned "Yeah I know its a lot to take in and if it weren't for that thing with Evageline there wouldn't be this information overload."
"Bottom Line is we are on your side just since our buisness is magic related we arent allowed to be known, But since Asuna has found out no thanks to Negi-bouzu." Zach shot a glare at Negi.
"I'm sorry Zach Nee-san." Negi bowed apologetically but then snapped back up "But I'm Happy that your going to be here for a while."
"Same here Mister Zach." Chase said cheerfully. The group procceded to the dorm lounge "You know your just worring way to much Negi."
"But Asuna-san you don't know how scary she can be...." Negi whined.
"What Negi-bouzu It's not like she is just going to grab you out of no where." Zach supported
"And you have Me and Zach to help you now right Zach......Uh Zach?"
"Hey what happened to Negi too." Rigel Asuna and Chase had just noticed that they were two people short.
"Aw Crap! The kid was Right!" the quintet now turned trio procceded to hunt down the missing members from the clutches of Eva.
As it was the two had not been kidnapped by Eva but that did not mean that fate was going to play nice with them.
Before Zach could Reply to his friends statment every thing went black "Of cou-What the?" He felt himself being lifted into the air. "Hey what the Hell is going on here!" He felt intense motion as if he was being carried off "Hey Rigel-san, Negi, Chase?!" There came the sound of doors opening. "Hey is anybody ou-HEY WATCH-AHHHHHH!" The silvered hair bishe found himself being stripped naked and thrown someplace where there was water for he landed with a splash.
Negi had undergone a similar treatment and when he had surfaced from the watter he noticed two things. One he was in the girls bath, and two he was alone. "Um hello? Chase? Zach nee-san? Promethios-san? Asuna-san?" No response...exept for.
"HELLO NEGI SENSEI AND CHASE KUN WELCOME TO 3-a's CHEERING UP PARTY!"
"Whoa." was the only word that could escape negi's mouth after spinning around to face the source of the cheer. For when he spun around he saw the 3-a class all in bikinis and a party banner saying "Class 3-a cheering up party."
"Whats all this?"
Ayaka waded up to the boy "We all noticed that you were feeing down." Sakurako spoke up enthusiastically "So we decided to throw you a Party!" Fuka also poped out of the water "And we figured Case would want to come along as well." Negi smiled wide "Well thank you I really apreciate it." Akaka slid up to him and poured Negi a drink. "SO about this partner thing...Keep in mind I have looks status and a kind hear-OOOOPH." Ayaka was kicked over by Fuka "Pretty sneaky Iincho puttin the moves on like that!"
Immediatly a riot borke out and the whole Class rushed Negi
"Oh Pick me Negi!"
"I wanna be your princess!"
"NO Pick me!"
"Say where's Chase?" the girls suddenly stopped at Yuna's deduction. Yuna looked at Akira "Hey I thought you brought him Akira?" Akira looked back at them "I did I grabed him next to negi."
Just then Zach surfaced "Gah Stupid bag, stupid hair, Gotta find my clothes, Say Negi you in here?" He turned arund and almost had a nose bleed. "Um...who the heck are you girls and Negi.."
as for the Girls side well...they just couldn't stop staring. Looking at the facts if a 16 year old naked Guy with long silver hair dripping wet suddenly poped out of the water how would you react.
Then almost immediatly the class erupted in possibly the loudest fan girl scream in history. "EEEEEEEEEE!" It was apparent that some of the girls namley Yuna, Kazumi, Ayaka,and surprisingly Setsuna also had nose bleeds
"OMIGOD HE'S SO HAWT!"
"WOW WHO ARE YOU!?"
"ARE YOU SINGLE"
"HEY HE KNOWS NEGI COULD HE BE A PRINCE TOO?"
"Holy Crap what the HELL!?" Zach could only stand there as half of the class Rushed Zach armed with wash cloths and sponges.
"I GET HIS BACK!" Kazumi screamed
"WELL THEN I GET THIS HOTTIES FRONT!" Yuna screamed lustfully
Zach Paled "Oh Man Gotta get out of here with Negi now!" But it was to late the wave of females glomped him "GAH NO HA HA HAH STOP I'm tickleish!" Zach was thinking to himself 'aw man why does this always happen to me...'
The other half of the class procceed to do the same with Negi.
"Wow Negi sensei is so cute and squshy." Makie squeeled with delight.
"Hey lets dunk him and see if he'll grow bigger." Sakurako screamed.
Chisame the only normal person in the class turned her head away from the scene "Um Guys I think we have a serious case of Sexual harrassment going on here."
"Hey Negi!"
"Zach?"
"Mister Zach, Negi where are you?"
Asuna,Chase and Rigel were looking all about and around the dormitory for their missing commrades. As they were checking the roof an all to familiar voice stopped them in their tracks.
"Sounds like you three are having fun now?"
the trio stopped dead as they looked to see "Its you! Evangeline and Cha Cha ch...um."
"Chachamaru." She corrected Chase again
"Thank you." the boy replied.
Rigel Reached for his gun "Alright! Tell me what you did with Zach."
"And Negi as well!" Asuna also got into a fighting stance.
Eva sneered "Take it easy you two we haven't done anything with your precious Negi or that siver haired idiot, Hmph it's not like we could do anything to the boya now."
"What are you talking about." Asuna eased up
Rigel smirked "Right I get it."
"Get What?" Chase asked confused.
"Well since your demon hunting friend gets it why doesn't he explain." Eva pointed at the blue haired Rigel.
"Right you can't do anything with Negi until the next full moon." Rigel explained
"Huh Why is that?" Asuna and Chase asked in unison
Eva spoke "Because our powers run on a Lunar cycle see." She pulled back her lips to show that she didn't have any fangs. "Even if we did grab the boya we couldn't do anything."
Eva then looked at Asuna and smirked as she spoke. "But seeing as your notorious for hating kids its surprisng to see you show such concern....Maybe sleeping in the same bed pulled at your heartstrings?"
Asuna turned beet red. "Wha? Th-thats got nothing to do with it!"
"I'm warning you Mcdowell if you try anything funny against Negi your messing with the wrong person." Chase growled much to the surprise of Eva
Eva shrugged "Oh well its not like you five can stop us anyway." Eva walked back into the dorm Chachamaru bowed farewell politly to the three and quickly followed.
"Um Chase-kun is something wrong?" Rigel asked seeing as Chase seemed to do a 180 in personality. "Huh no nothing." they then heared something coming from the bathing side of the dorm.
"Eeeek!" "um um I swear I'm not doing that!"
Rigel immediatly reconized the voice. "I know those socially akward screams from anywhere thats gotta be Zach." The three procceded to about half way when Asuna reminded them that it was a girls bath and so from there Asuna rushed onwards to the bath.
Back at the baths:
"Enough with the touching Negi-kun." Ako was annoyed
"I swear I'm not doing it."
Negi and Zach had their backs to the wall as they had been acused of what would be considered inapropriate conduct.
"Hey white hair-san how are you doing it?" Sakurako asked
"I'm not doing anything and it's Zach Zach Okoshi not White hair-san!"
then Makie felt herself being touched inaproriatly.
"Gah! Thats it enough with the naughty touching you two!" She punged her haind into the water and grabbed sometihng.
"What the heck it's long and furry and..." The pink baka noticed what she had grabbed had ears and a tail as well. "EEEEEK THERS A MOUSE IN THE POOL!" The entire 3-a spazzed out and the bath became just short of chaos. People were screaming and running and mysteriously losing their swim suits, it was at this time that Zach grabbed Negi "Cmon lets get out of here." "Right behind you Zach nee-san!" Negi followed. As if the chaos wasn't bad enough guess who came running in but Asuna screaming at the top of her lungs. "Hey what the hell's happening!"
A small black figure emegred from the water and darted in front of asuna it then lunged at her. "Look out Asuna!" a nude Makie screamed.
Asuna was on it she swung the tub she was carrying at the creature and kocked it out of the bath but not before it completly undid the top of her uniform exposing her bra. "What the hell was that?" The entire class grew silent as Asuna turned around to see both Negi and Zach in nothing but towels and the rest of the class nude. "WHA?! You Guys brought Negi and this guy down so you could get stark naked for them!?"
Zach took offense to being called some guy "Hey look I was a victim here I don't even know what the heck is going on." For a moment Asuna seemed to understand....that was until Zach's towel slipped. "Huh?" He looked up at a bright Red Ausna.
WHAM!
"OW OW OW easy Rigel." Zach was hurting
"Hold still that was a nasty Lump Asuna Gave you." Rigel was trying to treat it
After the whole chaos in the baths Zach and Negi were fully clothed again and had rejoined with Rigel and Chase in the dorm hallways.
Asuna sighed "Another day another instance of semi perversion." Negi was trying to defend the cause "But Asuna it was just a cheering up party."
"Yeah I bet it was." Asuna shot back.
suddenly a voice came out of no where. "Whats up Aniki you seem down." the five looked around for the source of the voice
"Down here." Negi looked down to see a snow white ermine with a black tipped and a bandaid on its fore head tail clutching a bikini top in its mouth.
Immediatly Negi and Chase Brightened up "Chamo-Kun its you." Chase grabed the ermine. Zach sighed "Figures now what happened in the bath makes sense."
Negi grinned "Boy You really did a number on those girls."
Asuna reeled back in Shock "A talking Ermine Figures."
And with that episode 11 is now complete I hope you all enjoy and I duly apologize for its lateness.
Please RnR It helps me to be honest this chapter was a bit of a hassle to write it I know it was a bit of information over load introducing Tri's and My OC's on top of Chamos entrance but I think I did pretty well
till next time stay tuned for episode 12 Chase is the enemy!?
DK75m OUT!