Disclaimer: I don't own Peter Petrelli, Milo Ventimiglia, or Heroes, which is probably a good thing cuz I'd end up ruining it.
I don't know if this is good enough, no seriously I have no idea what I'm doing except that I would be interested in something like this. I'd like to thank everyone who's read this story, plz review, I'm not feeling very confident about continuing this story at the moment, and I sorta don't wanna stop. I'd also like to thank everyone who has reviewed, and if you haven't already, check out my other Heroes story, Trust Me .
Feel free to point out the way you want this story to go and the stuff you want to know. I will try to fit in as much as I can.
Now…..On to Heroes goodness of the Charlie and Nathan, you finally get to meet Rachel, Isaac, and a new OC Kane. (Plans might change cuz I can't control my brain) *don't hurt me...ducks?*
Character Profiles (For the sake of this story)
Peter (Petrelli) Price: currently 8 and a half (as he'll remind you). 6 and a half in this current flashback. He has the power of empathy, to absorb the powers of others' through the power of emotions. About 4 foot tall, with big brown eyes, and an adorable mop of brown hair. Doesn't know a thing about his parentage, he graduated high school at the age of 8 and hasn't decided if he wants to go to college as of right now. He loves music, dance, art, and sports, because these are the times he gets to be a kid and just let go.
Nathan Petrelli: 34 years old, (if there are flashbacks, just count back), He just discovered that he can fly and that he has a son, Peter out there somewhere, who he thinks is alive. He also had two other kids, Simon (13) and Claire (11), he is married to Heidi. He is on a mission to find his son and is running for New York senator. (looks same as in the show)
Mohinder Suresh: 34 years old (looks the same as in the show), he is sort of an uncle to Peter, can be the friend or the disciplinarian. In the flashback, he is 32. He is a geneticist, same as in the show.
Simon Petrelli: Peter's big brother, even though he doesn't know it yet, he is 13 years old (5 years older than Peter), he is about "5'6", and had curly, dark brown, hair. He is in the eighth grade, captain of the basketball team and school president.
Claire Petrelli: Peter's big sister, even though she doesn't know yet, she is 11(3 years older than Peter), about 5 feet flat. She is in the sixth grade and a cheerleader.
Heidi Petrelli: She is Nathan's wife and the mother of Simon and Claire, she is a very empathetic person, and the accident never happened, so she can walk. She is also 34 and looks the same as in the show.
Isaac Mendez: he is currently 10 and a half year old (a little more than 2 years older than Peter). He is like Peter's big brother, very protective of him and loves the little guy to death, he also has a power which is yet unrevealed. He looks the same as in the show only tinier and (adorabler) more adorable. He is very smart, but his interests lie in art, he is also in the 9th grade. He is about "4'10". He thinks his parents abandoned him, but that is not true.
Rachel Macentire: She is Peter's age to the t, born on the same day and at the same exact time, they are inseparable and best friends. She also has a power that is unrevealed. She has wavy brownish blonde hair and is very smart, but is just in the 9th grade while Peter has graduated, and she is barely an inch shorter than Peter (a fact he doesn't mind rubbing in at all).
Charlie Macentire: Yes, he is related to Rachel, although he is aware that she is his granddaughter, because as far as he knew he didn't have any kids. He considers Meredith and Peter family and believes that they are both dead. He is an old man of about 60. He is about "5'11", with a huge gray beard.
Angela and Arthur Petrelli: Nathan's parents, they are very powerful and rich, they both have powers, but in this fic they actually care about family. They are pretty awesome parents, they are Arthur, 51, and Angela, 50.
Claude Raines: (I don't know why, but I loved this guy) He is like the hesitant mentor (like Dr. Cox and J.D.) and the gruff uncle that Peter's never had.
Meredith Gordon: May or may not be alive ('m not telling), if she is alive she is 34 years old, just like Nathan and Heidi. Looks the same as in the show.
Kane Murdock: He's ten years old, with blonde hair, is about "4'10", and can draw the future, Met Peter when he was visiting Isaac and Rachel at their spot, under the oak tree.
Majority of this story will take place in New York and Texas
More characters may be added.
Peter….Price??
Chapter 12: St. Mary's Orphanage
Previously with Nathan and Charlie:
Nathan finally caught on and inquired, "So, how far to the nearest orphanage?"
In fifteen minutes flat, Nathan and Charlie were at the front door of St. Mary's Orphanage, the orphanage that was nearest to Meredith's apartment building.
"You ready?" Asked Charlie, seeing how nervous Nathan was.
Taking a deep breath, Nathan replied, "As ready as I'll ever be," with that he unbuckled him seatbelt and was out the car. Once Charlie was out too, he said, "Let's go." As they walked towards the big, metal door, Nathan tried to absorb everything at once, this…this could be where his son, Peter, had grown up. As they walked through the open doors, Nathan's eyes absorbed everything, from the see-saw, jungle gym, playing equipment, to the lake, trees, and the kids playing around, he got the feeling that none of them were Peter.
Before they knew it, they were at the front counter, where the kids were first brought in, when they were found, and checked out ,when they were adopted. Seeing that there was a woman at the register, Nathan called out, "Maam, excuse me, maam."
Hearing him, she looked him over and smiled, asking, "Yes, how can I help you, Mr…?"
"Petrelli," Nathan informed her, then continued, "How long have you been working here?"
She looked confused at his question, but answered anyway, "two years, why?"
Nathan then requested, "Could you please find someone who's been working here for at least eight years?" Seeing her look of confusion, he explained, "I'm looking for someone."
She nodded, as if she understood, which seeing her job, she probably did, and went to get someone. She was back five minutes later with a nun, who she introduced, "Mr. Petrelli, this…this is Sister Martha, she's been working here for over ten years, and I think she can help you." Looking at her nametag for the first time, Nathan said, "Thank you, Samantha." She smiled when he acknowledged her name and said, "You're welcome, I hope you find your kid," understanding that he didn't understand how she knew, she clarified, "You have the look of a concerned parent."
Not really understanding, but nodding anyway, Nathan turned his attention to Sister Martha, when she inquired, "What can I help you with?"
When Charlie nodded at him, Nathan asked, "I'm looking for my son, Sister. His name is Peter, I don't know what his last name would be, but when he was brought in, which was probably about eight years ago, he was wearing a T-shirt with the name Peter on it."
"Peter?" The Nun asked, as if double checking.
Charlie, finally making his presence known, said, "Yeah Peter, he would have soft black hair, and a very angelic face, when he came in he was about half a year old?"
"Peter, I can't believe it, he always said that if he was supposed to meet his birth parents, it would happen on its own. His parents would find him." She looked shocked, happy, and proud.
"So you…you know him? He's here?" Nathan asked hopefully.
She turned to him and smiled, "Know him? Yes I know him, by the way his last name is Price. But as for if he's here, he was, but he's not anymore." Her face took on a more somber look.
Her somber expression scaring him, Nathan asked, "What do you mean by that, was he adopted?" She turned to him and said, "Oh people tried to adopt him so many times, but that's a story for another day. Come, I'll take you to the people that know Peter better than anyone. Who knows, maybe they'll actually tell you what happened."
Nathan was confused, what did that mean, he shoved back his thoughts as Sister Martha stopped in front of a door and knocked. He looked more closely at the door and realized that it was decorated with four names, which read Isaac, Rachel, Peter, this was his son's room, and Kane. When three voices called out and said, "Come in!" She walked in and motioned for them to follow and said, "Isaac, Rachel, Kane, these are…," she looked at them questioningly, and Nathan answered, "I'm Nathan Petrelli and this," he pointed to Charlie, "Is Charlie Macentire."
Charlie looked curious as Isaac, the boy with the wavy black hair, said, "Hey Rach, that's like your last name."
"Shut up, Isaac." This came from the blonde haired girl, who seemed annoyed.
"Children," said Sister Martha, effectively shutting them up, "Mr. Petrelli is Peter's dad, he'd like to know where Peter is, and even though you keep denying it, everyone here knows that you guys know where Peter is."
"How do you know he's Peter's dad? What proof is there?" This came from Isaac, who was apparently very protective of Peter.
"Isaac," this was once again from Sister Martha, but before she could continue Nathan interrupted, "its okay, I'm glad someone was watching out for him when I couldn't. Can I talk to them alone?"
She looked hesitant, but then nodded and left. Nathan looked at Charlie, who raised his hands and walked out, as if to say, Have at it.
Nathan looked at the kids in the room, from Isaac, who was still glaring at him suspiciously, to Rachel, who was studying him curiously, as if trying to find similarities between him and Peter, then finally to Kane, who looked thoughtful, then started looking for something, and then pulled out a sketchbook.
Nathan then studied the room, trying to find some way to make it into the kids' good graces and find something that would get them to open up. He thought, 'Jackpot,' as he saw the Superman comics that sat on the windowsill. He then said, "Kids, wanna see something cool?" Seeing their interested looks, he closed his eyes and concentrated, hearing their gasps and a whispered, "He can float Rach, just like Peter," from Isaac, as he hovered for about thirty seconds.
Lowering himself back to the ground, curious, he asked, "Peter can fly?"
…TBC…
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Next Chapter, Nathan learns of Peter's whereabouts. …So what do you think about the character profile, good enough descriptions?
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