The sequel to this story has been adopted by a newbie (their words, not mine) writer, !
Check it out here: Suite Life in Amestris
As this is a starting writer, please go easy with critiques. This was my first story and it's not even the best in all aspects of accuracy in language and characters either, hell I'm tempted to rewrite some chapters, but I'm too lazy to do that so deal with it! Please use constructive criticism instead of destructive flames!
I know a lot of people enjoyed (or seemed to enjoy) this, so hopefully will be able to create something even more enjoyable for you guys to read :)