Disclaimer: i do not own Beyblade and i do NOT make money from it

Copyright: This story and all my other stories are copyrighted as well as my characters and stories and movies (except real movies) that are mentioned in my stories, finally the names of my stories are also copyright and if i discover a name or story name and fictional movie i have created action will be taken...so there.

Beywriter: I've decided to let the team help me in the beginning to introduce the chapter and round it off.

Tyson: at least we don't have to wear those suits for this bit.

Max: You can't wear yours since you spilt the food down the front, lucky the first part doesn't have us so it can be cleaned.

Ray: Tyson get of Max's throat

Kenny: While the others are prying Tyson's hands from around Max's neck, I'm gonna press play on the DVD Player so you can view the next chapter and everything should be fine at the end, oh and there's swearing in this chapter.

Beyblade: The Revolution Continues

The fight goes on, so does the sad

The rain pattered on the window, Lee was watching the rain when the door to the Hotel room opened, Mariah was soaking wet came through the door, shivering slightly.

"I told you to take a coat or Umbrella" he said going up to hug her sister.

"now get changed before you get a cold"

Each morning Mariah went to the monument with a bunch of flowers.

She looks at it, the Stone Brakers in there launch poses.

She kisses her palm and puts it to the Stone Ray's cheek, stays there for ten minutes and goes back.

Mariah locks the door and pulls matches out of her dresser and lights the candles, between them is a Picture of Ray.

She changes her clothes and goes back outside where Gary and Kevin were also.

"ready for Breakfast" Kevin asked in his usual tone

She nodded.

"well, lets go...we don't want to go down and find its all gone" Lee said putting his shoes on.

"hay guys" The PPB Captain said to the Tigers.

The Allstars met the White Tigers at the lift.

"hows it going?" Lee responded

"good, Judy is still upset...real upset" Eddie said

"we all are" the Pink haired girl said

"so, are you guys going to breakfast?" Kevin asked

"yeah, we want to get there before it runs out" Steve said.

The doors opened to both lifts.

"see you down" Lee said pressing the button to go down.

Luckily it was a short decent as they hated the music in the lift.

The week after the remembrance ceremony went slow.

It was a time for fragile emotion and breakdowns.

"Kai, hows the robot leg doing?"

"Hi Tala, its doing fine.

It still looks and feels weird but I'll get used to it."

Tala nodded.

"you ready to head home now?"

Kai stared blankly at an old photo of the Bladebreakers on the notice board.

"Kai?"

He daydreamed of the good times and bad times before Tala snapped him out.

"Kai come back to me, come back to me" he snapped his fingers in front of Kai's eyes"

"huh?

Oh sorry"

"you were daydreaming...about the Bladebreakers?"

"yeah" Kai pointed to the noticeboard.

"oh Kai, I'm sorry"

"you don't have to be"

Kai and the Demolition boys had softened up about a month ago and were always showing more signs of human, even signs of depression.

"well, that hit the spot" Lee wiped his mouth and put his hand around his head

"Mariah, you not hungry?" Gary asked

she was poking a pancake with her fork.

"huh?

No, i'm not hungry"

her eyes were wetter like she was about to cry

"Lee" the little neko said

he opened his eyes and looked at his sister, he passed her a clean napkin as se burst like a balloon.

"come on Mariah, I don't think Ray would like you crying, he'd want you to be happy"

She nodded.

"how long has she been like this?" Emily asked

"about two months...Mariah loves him a lot...Sometimes I cry myself to sleep"

"so the lion has emotion?" Michael asked

"very funny, I know your all upset about Max...and the others"

"how!" Eddie asked shocked

Lee pointed to his ears.

"remember?

Were Neko-Jins...we have enhanced hearing, vision and smell"

"Thats right, we heard you and you wouldn't need enhanced hearing to hear how bad you've been crying" Kevin smirked

"why YOU!"

"Kevin!"

"I was only having a little fun, Ray and the others wouldn't want us to be sad...you said that yourself"

"I said that about Ray"

Kevin looked at him sternly.

"well, ok...all of them"

his smirk returned.

"I just want to go back up" Mariah said, she had just calmed down.

"ok, we'll see you guys later" The Tigers stud up and left

"bye" they called after.

"man, there messed up" Steve said shocked

"we all are" Eddie pointed out.

"do you guys smell something burning?" Gary asked sniffing the air

"yeah, I do" Kevin said

Mariah remembered.

"the CANDLES" The team ran to the door and Lee opened it and went into Lee and he sisters room, the dresser was on fire.

"oh my" Mariah's hands shot up to her mouth.

"Gary, water" Gary threw the jug of water onto the dresser, it didn't work.

"Get more water, open the window, get as much ventilation in here as possible...do not let the fire alarm go off"

The team used both the jugs they had and worked and soon it was out.

They all sighed.

"how are we going to explain this one?"

Kevin asked, he was sitting down by the wall

"that was close...Mariah, why didn't you blow the candles out...Mariah?"

"i...its...b,b,urnt...I,I, can't believe it"

She was holding onto the only part of the picture to survive...his face and some of the background on the right of the picture.

"there there, its not your fault...your emotions are fragile and depressed, you forgot"

"it IS my fault" she broke down even further.

She cried into Lee's shoulders, he ran his arms slowly down her back and kissed her forehead.

"don't cry little tiger" she still cried.

"please little cub"

Kevin was draging his thumb across his neck mentally saying

"shut up you idiot"

his eyes wide open and shaking his head.

"thats...what R..ray said to me when ever I...I was sad or c..crying"

"I'm sorry"

The Sun was shining, 3 ships left Amber-Truth.

They went towards a city

"The message just repeats: Regret.

Regret.

Regret". The AI informed

"Catchy.

Any idea what it means?" Herena asked over the radio

"Dear humanity, we regret being alien bastards, we regret coming to

Greyon, and we most definitely regret the Corps just blew up our raggedy-ass

fleet!"

The Sarge was angry about the attack and was sarcastic

"Hoorah!" The pilots said together

The ships passed over the city's boundries.

"Regret is a name Sergeant.

The name of one of the Alliance's religous

leaders.

He's on that carrier, and he's calling for help." The AI said again

The crafts pass over a group of hogs headed down the street.

A sniper team is running lookout on a nearby rooftop.

"Immediate: grid kilo-two-three is hot.

Recommend mission abort." Said the spotter

"Roger recon.

It's your call Sarge." The Pilot said back to the Sarge

"We're going in.

Get tactical Marines!" The Marines started to get ready

Yosma: Humans?

Get aboard that carrier secure Regret.

This is the only place on Greyon the Alliance decided to land and is going to tell us why"

"Thirty seconds out.

Stand-by...whoa..."

Alliance attack pod stomps into view.

It is on four legs and is made of the same material of the ships in orbit, there is a huge mouth on the front.

Its jaws open, and it fires a plasma beam

at the approaching craft.

The one holding the Bladebreakers goes down hard.

"You alright?" Roana asked

"Shake it off Marines!

Clear the crash site.

Go! Go! Go!" Caner ordered.

The surviving marines went towards an arch, they went down to the left and shot an Unggoy investigating the loud noise.

At the bottom of the ramp they looked out to a square.

"alright humans..."

"we have names you know"

"what ever, now you have to clear out this area...we'll help too"

Tom went out and surprised the awaiting Kig-Yar and Unggoy.

A Sangheili came down the stairs inside the opposite building to the arch to the square but with a grenade it and the surrounding two Unggoy died.

Everyone was upstairs with an excellent view of the square.

The group fought off all opposition.

Max had got the turret and was firing at anything that moved.

"if they didn't know were here, they do now" Caner yelled

"bugs, over the roof" one yelled.

"Max, get em'"

"no prob"

"more Kig-Yar in the courtyard." Caner yelled.

Soon after a lot of fighting, the courtyard floor was covered in bodies and blood, just then an Alliance dropship came over and dropped more Alliance and firing at the group

"TAKE COVER!" Tom yelled

Ray made it in avoiding a round of plasma.

As soon as it arrived, it was gone.

Max ran back out to the turret and the Brakers jumped down with Marines to fight the new comers.

Doors burst open.

" Lekgolo" Roana screamed

"these guys again"

This time they didn't fire out single rounds, they fired a stream of plasma that destroyed nearly anything it touched.

Max turned the gun on them and with in a few second, they were toast.

"nice one Maxie"

"Always go you covered Ty" Max said leaving the turrent and jumped down to his team.

"everyone ok here?"

"My girl's a little too big for that courtyard Sarge.

I see a good LZ on the other side of these buildings.

Meet you there.

Over?" the Pilot asked

"Copy that.

Someone get a satchel on the gates." Caner said

"Second squad, this is Roana.

What's your status?

Over."

"We're operational ma'am...barely.

Our pilots didn't make it."

"Find a hole and stay put.

We'll come to you."

"thank you ma'am, Second squad...out"

Caner led the group down the long passage that was burning, to the right and to the left.

"oh great, Kig-yar with sniper rifles" A marine said

The Sargent sniped the one with the rifle but the normal ones with the shields were only killed when the Dropship landed and used the chain gun

"Sergeant, I need you on that bird." Herena ordered

"Ma'am?" he asked back

"My Birds are gonna start airlifting armour and reinforcements into

the vicinity then the wounded.

They'll need an escort that isn't afraid of a little hostile

ground fire."

"Understood!

I'll keep an eye on 'em.

Humans?

Good luck."

The craft lifted off.

The only way forward was through another passage ahead.

It went of to the right then to the left to lead to another Communal area, but more badly damaged.

"SNIPERS" one said.

"Ray, grab that Alliance weapon and use it on them."

"how?"

"I dunno, work it out"

He looked at it for a second and how to work it came into his head, he peeked around the corner, aimed and took a shot.

One down, two down and three down.

"great shot bud"

"no prob"

Ray threw it down and grabbed his own weapon and went forward

"more bugs" one called out.

Max took a hit to the head, a little shocked but kept fighting"

"which way?" Kenny asked, looking around

"there looks like there's one way" the Bird master pointed to the way

"this is creepy, its like were being herded into a place to be killed" The Dragoon master said inspecting his weapon.

Alliance were at the other end.

Tom used the scope to quickly kill them and the Sangheili at the other end.

They ran towards the other side and took a left, one of the marines were killed.

"look out" tom ordered and killed the sniping Kig-Yar.

Max threw a sticky grenade to the one on the turret, BANG.

"look its the humans"

"Glad you all could make it.

Crash site's on the other side of this hotel and the Alliance are crawling all over it.

Follow me." The Squad leader informed them.

The Squad leader went into the dark hotel.

"lights on guys"

Tom vollied a Grenade to the other side which dazed the Alliance troops.

"Die" a Marine said.

An enemy dropship dropped more troops on the bridge and went away quick.

A hog stopped beeping its horn

"Special delivery from the Commander"

It was bigger with the capacity to hold 6, two mini turrets and seats.

The Brakers climbed on and it spead away.

"The highest concentration of Alliance troops is directly below the

carrier.

I don't think they want you to get onboard.

That bridge is the most direct route to the city's centre." said the AI through the suit's coms.

The Team looked to the city to see a huge bridge.

It went down towards the right and followed the shore and jumped a divinding wall.

"Troops, guys...FIRE" Max and Tyson got into position whilst the others fired using their weapons.

The driver drove through the troops, knocking some over and went off to the right and around the corner to there right again finding more shore.

An Anti Aircraft Battery stud there, motionless.

The driver drove past them and over another wall.

"Humans, the carrier just launched a wave of hives and there inbound on your position.

Looks like that highway is the only way to the bridge...beats swimming but its full of wraths.

"Wraths?" The Neko asked

"a type of tank"

"oh" the Blond said.

The Drier went to the right and followed the tunnel, encountering resistance but soon crushed under the wheels.

A big blast of green energy cuts thought the roof, the driver swerves to avoid and rolls the hog.

"Everyone ok?" Tom asked picking up his weapon.

They all get up and get back in the hog, luckily it hadn't rolled over.

Soon they were back moving.

The Turrets blazed, they went down to the left and broke through another line, a big purple object fired at them.

"Ray...that was a Wrath" She said

The way ahead was blocked so the driver went right into another tunnel, ahead were three wraths.

"good luck everyone" Tom said to the group, everyone nodded.

The rear one opened fire and the Hog returned fire.

The group and Wraths exchanged fire until they were passed.

"is everyone ok?" Tom asked

Again, they all nod.

The road went down and to the right.

The Armour was scolded, but at least everything was working.

"damn, my gun has jammed"

Tyson said

"The right gun is down" he said again.

The Passage kept going to the right and soon they were in a wide open area still underground.

"more Wraths...up ahead" Roana said to them.

They cut through them and the hover craft.

The path went right and up into the light...

Beywriter: Tyson, say sorry to Max

Max: I still feel like I can't breath properly.

Beywriter: You'll get over it

Ray: So, what did you think of this Chapter?"

Tyson: Fine, sorry Max.

Beywriter: I'm going to try to update more from now on...guys its double shifts from now on

Tyson: Your worse than Kai

Beywriter: I may ask him to help me film our parts. Its hard for me to hold and operate the Camera while on set

Ray: Poor Mariah, well guys...I we all hoped you enjoyed it LET IT RIP!

Max: One last thing...Beywriter Doesn't own the Alliance leaders or the Jiralhane Chief.

He based the Bladebreaker parts in Chapter 2 on...

Beywriter: not now Maxie, we tell everyone later.

Here is alittle bit of important info:

I will be hopefully updating EVERY Sunday and Wednesday.