Hello everyone. Today is the finale of the saiyan saga and I'm pumped! Are you pumped?! All right then, let's get it on.
Chapter 12: Let's Finish This
Saiyan Saga Part 11
The prince's eyes went blank, then he started to grow. His size increased further and further as his eyes turned red and dark brown fur covered his frame. The tattered and torn spandex the flame haired saiyan was wearing was stretching yet not tearing apart as it reached to it's maximum when the prince of all saiyans stopped his growth in size. His face streched until it was a maw. The transformation into the great ape Oozaru was complete.
Goku looked in horror at the beast before it, remembering the sight of the day he saw hiw beloved Gradpa Gohan squashed beneath a footprint of a giant monkey, blood filling the footprint with its red color. 'No... it can't be the same monster that killed grandpa. The monster back then must have been...me.' he thought as realization finally got to him, making his body shake from pain and a single tear flowed from his right eye across his cheek.
The ape looked at the prime defender of Earth and grinned a smug grin, arrogance visible even on the prince's ape features. "WHAT'S WRONG KAKAROT? HAVE YOU LOST HOPE YET?" the flame haired Oozaru asked mockingly as he laughed. "DON'T WORRY, I'LL MAKE YOU SUFFER BEFORE YOU DIE, IN CASE YOU THOUGHT YOUR DEATH WILL BE QUICK." the ape said calmly even with the audible hatred and anger towards his tiny foe.
The hero of Earth wiped the tear away and looked straight at the giant ape with a determined look. "Does it include giving you a banana? Because I would really like to eat one right now. Are you also hungry?" he asked his now beastly foe with a slight mockery in his tone, in order to anger the ape so he could find a weakness.
Vegeta looked at his foe with pure unatulterated rage as he growled and then roared loudly, making the Earth raised saiyan to cover his ears. "HOW DARE YOU MOCK ME?! THE PRINCE OF ALL SAIYANS!" he roared as he tried to sent a powerful right punch at the tiny saiyans, only for the son of Bardock to dodge when his red aura ignited once again.
The younger brother of Raditz skid across the dusty wasteland as he escaped the punch the prince sent. The loud 'BOOM!' as well as the dust cloud spreading all around with a powerful earthquake made Goku sweep his forehead from sweat. 'Woah, my senses were right, his power is enormous. I can't push my Kaio Ken up to even times 2 without destroying every muscle in my body.' Goku thought as he tried to assess the situation.
The voice of his afterlife master then rang in his mind as the being used telepathy to communicate with his student. 'I told you not to push the Kaio Ken that far with a living body you jackass!' the small blue entity insulted the protector of Earth for not listening to his warning. 'Now we have an angry monkey and a surely dead Goku, unless you use the Genki Dama.' the being responsible of the northen area of the universe said as Goku used the dust cloud to find shelter in a small cave that survived the mountain-crumbling fight between the saiyans.
Goku lowered his ki as he hid in order to focus on the plan his new master offered him. 'But King Kai, the Genki Ba-' he stopped his thought, knowing how much his master hates the name he gave the second technique the small catfish looking entity tought him. 'I mean Spirit Bomb takes time to prepare and Vegeta won't give me enough time. Even if I use Solar Flare he is going to find me when he recovers since all the mountains have been destroyed earlier in the fight.' the hero of Earth said as he tried to explainging why using the spirit bomb won't work.
The deity was dumbfouded by how Goku analyzed the situation the explain why the Genki Dama wouldn't work. 'Wow...I mean I didn't know you were that smart Goku.' he complimented his student and praised his quick thinking.
'I'm sorry King Kai were you saying something? I was thinking about fighting.' the saiyan said telepathcally, making the kai facepalm himself from expecting any other answer from the palm haired warrior.
Another earthquake was felt as Goku saw another dust cloud coming his way. He left the cave and used the cloud to get away even further than the large ape. He tried to find a place where there would be hills and mountains to cover for him to create the spirit bomb. Also thinking that Vegeta would search in the closest area would give him enouth time to create a bomb powerful enough to take on even the giant monster.
From the distance he heard the prince roar from anger and frustration. "WHERE THE FUCK ARE YOU YOU COWARD! FACE YOUR DEATH WITH DIGNITY!" his roar shoock the ground beath the Earth raised saiyan as he finally saw a large mountain.
The palm haired fighter got to the top of the mountain and stood there, raising his hands up. 'Earth, give me the energy to save you. Trees, water, animals, people, flowers, give me your energy.' he chanted as small blue orbs of energy came to him. He felt the warmth of the power he was gaining and he smiled as more power was coming into his body.
He suddenly heard a snarl above him, as a large shadow covered him and the entire mountain. "FOUND YOU!" the ape roared as he fired a mouth blast at the mountain the hero of Earth was standing on.
Goku disappeared using the afterimage technique he had mastered while training with Korin. He felt the power starting he leave him. He blamed himself mentally as he figured Vegeta just saw him on top of the mountain, making it easier to catch him.
The prince growled and snarled as the palm haired warrior reappeared above the ape, staring at him as he panted heavily. He absorbed the power in his body, realizing it's too late to use the Spirit Bomb.
Vegeta smirked at his foe with a great amount of arrogance. "STUPID FOOL, DID YOU THINK I WOULDN'T SEE YOU?" he asked as he tried to catch the small warrior only for the hero of Earth do evade once again with his red aura. "I KNEW YOU WOULD PROBABLY USE THE DUST AS A WAY TO GAIN SOME DISTANCE, BUT GOING HIGH UP MADE ME SEE YOU." the saiyan prince continued as he explained his mindset, making his foe's eyes to widen in surprise.
The prince of all saiyans sent another mouth blast, only for Goku to evade with the Kaio Ken. Absorbing the energy for the spirit bomb was not the smartest idea but he couldn't do anything else. He dropped close to the ape's face and put his hands to the side of his face. "SOLAR FLARE" the palm haired son of Bardock roared in desperation as a shining and blinding white light illuminated from his body, blinding the monsterous ape.
"GAH!" the prince roared with pain as he put his hands over his eyes,rubbing them. Goku used the chance to start flying away as fast as he could, igniting a white-blue veil of aura around him as he got away from his huge monkey foe.
He landed somewhere on the ground and started to gather a bit of energy from the Earth once again. Then the memories of the times he lost his tails hit him like a battering ram. He remembered that when he got stuck inside Pillaf's castle he was told not to look at the moon and he did, with the only memory after that moment was waking up naked with out a tail. Something then clicked in his mind as he saw Vegeta's giant tail.
'That's it, the tail! I'll blast his tail with the Spirit Bomb and when he returns to normal, I'll beat him up!' he thought to himself happily and slightly childishly at the prospect of fighting Vegeta on equal ground once more.
He sensed everything as energy started to pour into him, but much slower than earlier, as his first attemp took some power from the living beings on the planet. He had to be careful now in order not to kill some random deer accidently or something like that.
Power surged into his hands and the small orbs started to gather around his palm, creating a blue ball that was larger than the palm beneath it. The flow of power suddenly stopped as a white and thin veil of aura covered the muscular and exhausted frame of the palm haired saiyan, making him smile.
A giant shadow then covered Goku's area, making the hero of Earth look up to his giant foe, who's uncontained fury was shown as he growled and veins throbbed across his furry forehead. "FINALLY THE EFFECTS WORE OFF, BUT IT WILL MAKE YOUR PAIN MUCH WORSE KAKAROT!" he roared as he opened his maw to shoot a mouth blast at the low-class warrior.
Goku's frame hardened as he was prepare to end the monkey's reign of destruction. He got into his turtle school stand and charged ki inside his body, from the ki he absorbed from the first Spirit Bomb. "KAIO KEN TIMES 3!" he yelled in pain as the crimson aura glowed to massive size, bulking his arms as they was again covered with throbbing veins.
The prime defender of Earth evaded the incoming blast and zig-zagged around the prince, making him stumble and lose his balace several times, but it gave the youngest son of Bardock a chance to get behind his foe's back.
The Earth raised saiyan gazed at the flame haired monkey's tail as he took his left arm backwards, preparing to throw the pure bomb of ki at the giant tail that was moving on his own. "SPIRIT BOMB!" the protecter of the planet yelled as he threw the technique learned by King Kai. The tail suddenly moved upwards in a way that made the Spirit bomb miss it's target, much to the surprise of Goku. The giant tail then hit the prime defender of Earth, shattering his spine as if it was a lonely string of hair or cloth.
"Gah!" Goku made an agonizing sound and spewed a large mixture of blood and saliva as his back was broken and his frame crashed into the ground with the thunderous 'BOOM!' the echoed across the now former grand canyon. He turned on his broken spine and looked up, only to see the prince looking right at him as he turned around.
His beastly foe gazed at the Earth raised saiyan with visible joy on his animalistic face. "I KNEW YOU WOULD TRY TO STRIKE MY TAIL. EVERY GOOD SAIYAN NEEDS TO HAVE A COMPLETE MASTERY OVER HIS TAIL. THIS IS WHY YOU WILL NEVER DEFEAT ME." the flame haired prince gloated with a snarl. "NOW I'LL MAKE SURE YOU NEVER WALK AGAIN!" he roared furiously at the top of his lungs as he jumped, his giant feet landing right on Goku's legs, breaking them to bits and making the sound of agony to come out of the mouth of the naive warrior once more, much to the joy of the ape like monster.
The blue spandex wearing ape then bent foward, just to see his foe's pain from up close. "THIS IS THE END FOR YOU AND YOUR PLANET KAKAROT, BUT I STILL HAVE SO-" he started to boast arrogantly when the hero of Earth shot a ki blast right to the flame haired saiyan ape's left eye and upon impact the eye was blown up, much to the agony of the saiyan prince, who roared so loud the sound waves were visible.
"GAH! MY EYE! MY EYE!" the royal saiyan screamed as he put his left hand over his left eye, and he realized he might not open it ever again, which caused all the anger and rage he had towards his foe to resurfes once again, making him growl as he stared daggers at the palm haired warrior.
The prince of all saiyans picked Goku up with both his hands to his face's height and started crushing him. The youngest son of Bardock scream in agonizing pain as his bones were crushed. The bones in his arms broke under the pressure of the monsterous ape's hands, and his ribcage was following suit.
Vegeta was squeezing the life out of his foe and he took an extreme amount of joy doing so, more than any other foe he ever faces. He started to laugh when Goku's screams filled the air around them with an echoing scream and yelp. "YOU SEE KAKAROT, THIS IS WHAT HAPPENS TO A SAIYAN DUMB ENOUGH TO HURT ME AND WHERE IT MATTERS MOST, MY PRIDE!" he yelled furiously as he squeezed harden and blood came from the Earth raised saiyan mouth.
"Leave my daddy alone!" a demanding scream came to the ears of the ape as he turned around. Behind him he saw Kakarot's half-breed brat and right next to him stood the short monk Nappa fought, with the same disk-shapped attack that could have killed his oaf of a partner.
The bald warrior took a step foward as he stared daggers at the giant prince. "Release him or I'll cut you in half!" he yelled angrily as he prepared to launch his attack. The prince released one hand while keeping the defender of Earth firmly in the other. He took several moment to look at the warriors who stood to challange him, then he fliped them both, giving the a middle finger with his free hand.
The red eyed ape grinned as he flipped the boy and his short friends. "FUCK OFF!" he told both fighters, as Gohan entered a battle stance and Krillin threw his Kienzan. The giant ape jumped so high the disk missed its mark, as he mockingly laughed at their efforts.
The prince landed once again, making the ground shake and fracture as his laughing stopped. "YOU TWO ARE PATHETIC! NO ONE CAN STOP ME NOW, FOR I AM THE SAIYAN PRI-" he started to boast yet again, until his left cheek was hammered by a giant furry fist, sending him flying as well as dropping the palm haired saiyan.
Goku fell but he was caught by a giant paw and he looked up. He was a giant Oozaru ape with red eyes like Vegeta, but his mane wasn't like Vegeta, but a long mane that reached his lower back. "SO KAKAROT, YOU CAN'T WIN A FIGHT WITHOUT YOUR OLDER BROTHER?" it asked him as a smile appeared on it's maw, making the son of Bardock to smile at his older brother.
Raditz put his brother's broken and bleeding body on the ground as it stepped foward as the prince of all saiyans got up. The long haired saiyan smirked at his foe as he got into a battle stance. "READY FOR ROUND TWO VEGETA?" he asked mockingly as he prepared to defeat the saiyan this time around.
The flame haired warrior got into a battle stance of his own as his surprise of the low-class warrior's control of the Oozaru form died down. "SO JUST BECAUSE YOU CONTROL THE MIGHTY OOZARU YOU THINK YOU CAN WIN?! DON'T GET COCKY!" his booming low voice roared angrily as he charged at his giant foe.
Both apes then charged at each other, both cocking their arm for a mighty blow on the other. When they were close enough to release their punch, Raditz was the one to attack first, as he tried to smash the prince with a straight thunderous right hook, only for the royal saiyan to dodge as he bent downwards and sent an uppercut to the chin of the long maned ape, who was sent flying before he crashed on the ground, creating an earthquake that fractured the entire area.
Vegeta ran at his foe to try and land another hit but the son of Bardock fired a mouth blast straight at the prince's face, making the elite cry out in pain. The low-class warrior then sent a powerful right punch to his furry foe's abdomen, making the prince of all saiyans roar with pain. After that another punch came and another until Raditz was hammering a flurry of punches to the saiyan elite's abdomen, causing blood and saliva to come out of his foe's maw.
Vegeta immediately hammered a double-axe hammer on the head of the long haired ape, causing the flurry to stop. The prince of all saiyans then started a flurry of punches of his own, hammering punch after punch to the head of his foe, making him spew blood as well as stagering him. Vegeta finished the flurry with a thunderous left hook that sent the older brother of Goku flying.
Raditz corrected himself only to see the flame haired ape charging at him. He sent a left punch which was caught easily by the prince and caught his foe's punch. A moment later both fists were released as the paws entangled their fingers together in the other's paws, as they started to grapple to overpower the other.
Veins started to throbe all across their furry bodies as both saiyans ignited their auras and use their full power in hopes to defeat the other giant ape. To the surprise of the prince, he wasn't getting anywhere, as if his fight with Kakarot injured him and took so much out of him that now he was matching Raditz in power. That notion made him angrier. 'HOW CAN I BE MATCHING THIS FILTH?! IT IS ALL KAKAROT'S FAULT!' he curesed the Earth raised saiyan as he fought tooth and nails to overpower the eldest son of Bardock.
The Earth shook so hard that the ground beneath the two giant monsterous apes started to split into islands as they sank deeper in the ground. Lava started to flow out of the cracks as it flowed closer and closer to both apes' feet, but neither moved an inch.
Both apes then opened their mouths and fired a mouth blast and both energy beams clashed in the middle, as they also seemed completely equal in power. The release of the beams made lava slash high into the air like wave as it reached their feet, making them stop their beam struggle as they wailed in agony from the sensation of the lava, making both blasts explode in their faces, sending them both skidding across the lava.
The apes flew up into the air as they charged at on another. Each clash sent thunderous and defeaning sound waves that spread across the shattering land with a 'THRUUM!' 'THRUUM!' as the two saiyan warriors clashed over and over again.
Both saiyans sent a punch that hit the other on the cheek, sending each other flying in the opposite direction inside a mach cone filled with air that broke the sound barrier. They corrected themselves again and just stared daggers at each other.
Raditz opened both palms and started to charge an attack as Vegeta cupped both hands to the side of his head. A red orb appeared in Raditz's left palm with small pink orbs surrounding it while a dark blue ball of ki appeared on his right with small pink orbs surrounding it as well. He cupped both hands in a center in front of his chest as the orbs mixed to a large purple ball of ki.
Vegeta's giant frame was covered with a veil of purple ki as he prepared to clash their beams and he saw his foe smiling, making the prince smile as well. The long haired ape then sent his hands foward as as attack was ready.
"OMEGA SATURDAY CANNON!" Raditz roared as the giant beam of purplr and pink flew towards the prince, who just laughed out loud from the attemp of the son of Bardock for a beam struggle once more.
"GALICK GUN FIRE!" the flame haired royal ape roared as he sent his bright-purple beam. Both attack clashed in the middle as the Oozarus tried to defeat the other once and for all. Vegeta was the first to push foward as he gave everything he had in that strike, but Raditz quickly started to overtake the elite's attack mostly because of the royal's exhaustion.
The area beneath them was filled more and more with lava, as the molten liquid covered more and more of the fractured ground. Drops of lava were in the air and well and the power of the attack was slowly destroing Earth. With a final yell from the saiyans, both attacks exploded in a vibirant light dome of pink and purple, which was so large it expanded up to 5 kiliometers from the center, and sucked in the other warriors.
When the lights died down, both apes were badly injured and panted heavily as they looked at each other. For several minutes all they did was watch the other in case he wanted to start clashing yet again, but none of them did.
Raditz then noticed something: a yellow disk coming from beneath straight at his foe's tail. He smiled and looked at the prince, knowing he had to distract him somehow. "SO VEGETA," he started talking which made the prince to give him the attention he wanted, much to his pleasure."HOW DOES IT FEEL TO LOSE TO A LOW-CLASS FILTH?" he taunted his giant foe arrogantly, making the royal saiyan snarl with distain to the long haired warrior.
It was too late for the prince however, as he immediately felt the disk cut his tail, making him wail in agony from the pain. "YOU BASTARD!" he yelled towards the low-class ape but then he smiled. The elite warrior looked up to the sky and fired a mouth blast which destroyed the power orb he created, making Raditz himself feel the effect of losing the Oozaru form.
Both saiyans started to shrink as they reverted to their original forms, a process that caused both an extreme amount of pain. When they finally returned to their human looking state they both looked like a mess: their bulky and topless frames were covered in blood, Vegeta's left eye was shut and blood came from it, their feet were burned from the lava that now covered the entire ground beneath them and them both panted heavily.
Krillin and Gohan on the over hand were gravely injured from the explosion that engulfed them as their frames were covered with burns, as they protected the now slightly burned hero of Earth. They landed in an area that was elevated enough and put Goku on the ground.
Both saiyans warriors looked at on another with anger and even fury. Vegeta was the first to ignite his aura as he charged at Raditz. "You die now!" he yelled as he fired several ki blasts, which the long haired fighter deflected without much effort. The prince reached him at the moment he slapped away the last ball of energy and received a crushing punch to his abdomen, making him spew blood.
Vegeta tried to follow with a double-axe hammer to the head of his taller foe only for it to pass through an afterimage, making the elite snarl with anger. Raditz appeared behind him and grabbed both of the royal's arms, bending them backwards. The older brother of Goku sent a knee strike to the back of his flame haired foe, making the elite cry out from the pain as saliva came from his mouth.
The prince's anger rose yet again as he heatbutted the low-class warrior with the back of his head, causing the son of Bardock to let go of the elite's arms. Vegeta then spinned in a counter-clockwise direction and gave Raditz a spinned kick to his right temple, sending him flying across the air. The prince of all saiyans followed as he started hammering fists into the tall saiyan's abdomen while they kept flying further and further from their last battle ground.
For a while the son of Bardock was defensless from the barrage of fists the elite saiyan sent at him, but at last he caught both of the royal's hands, giving him time to gain some breathing room. Vegeta tried to free himself, but the brother of Goku headbutted his shorter foe, causing him to wince in pain. Raditz then headbutted him again, causing the prince of all saiyans to stagger and the third headbutt caused him to wince and growl from the pain once again.
Raditz let go of the prince's hands and sent both his hands as fists right to the chest of the saiyan elite, making him spew blood as his right eye widen from the pain. The new defender of Earth followed with a knee to the shorter saiyan's chin, sending him flying.
They were now fighting over a wasteland partially destroyed from their fight as Oozarus, it was was filled with yellow grass and small hills which parts of already started to crumble. Vegeta corrected himself quickly and charged at his long haired foe. He shot an energy beam but the son of Bardock evaded it with ease. The saiyan elite then tried to send a kick to his low-class foe's kidney, which was caught by the brother of Goku.
Vegeta grinned as he sent a second kick to his opponent's chin, snapping his head backwards as it landed, causing him to let go of the royal fighter's other leg. The prince started hammering another flurry of punches to his foe's face and chest, but the taller saiyan opened his mouth and sent an energy beam that exploded right in Vegeta's face, causing the the flame haired warrior to fly backwards as he put his hands on his face.
"Why is it always the goddamn eyes?!" the prince of all saiyans asked in fury as he wailed in pain from the blast. Raditz then appeared to his left and smashed an axe kick right on his shorter opponent's head, sending him down crashing with a thunderous 'BOOM!' sound that echoed across the landscape.
Raditz charged at the prince as he got up, and the son of Bardock tried to hammer a ki enhanced punch at the flame haired royal, but his foe sidestepped the punch and grabbed the tall saiyan by the hair with his left hand, and then he punched the new defender of Earth with his right, making the brother of Goku spew some blood.
Vegeta hammered another punch, making the long haired warrior spew some blood once more. The warrior prince then slapped the low-class saiyan with the back of his hand causing more blood to come from the mouth of the son of Bardock. It went on for a bit as Vegeta punched him over and over and even started to hit him with his knee, causing blood to come from Raditz's nose.
The battered warrior looked at the prince, all his face was bloody and broken, and he spit some blood in his royal opponent's face, making the prince of all saiyans infuriated. From that action alone the prince hammered his fist and knee harder, until he hit him at least a dozen times before he stopped.
The royal saiyan warrior growled angrily at the injured and seemingly defeated low-class fighter as he charged a ball of ki in his right hand. "Any last word before you die you low-class scum?" he asked in a deep and mencing tone, the raspy voice adding to the menace.
Raditz smirked at the prince as he had one more trick up his sleeve. "As a matter of fact, I do." he said with a bit of joy in his voice, as both his fists met in the center infront of his body and a veil of bright red and pink ki appeared around him, much to the worry of the saiyan prince. The smirk on the son of Bardock's bloodied face grew wider from the satisfaction from seeing Vegeta worried.
The veil now grew as it engulfed the prince as well, much to the caustion of the saiyan. "The technique is not complete yet, so it will take us both to the deepests pits of hell! SCORCHED EARTH WEEKEND!" the low-class warrior roared in pain and determination, as the veil exploded into a fiery dome. Flames of red and purple flew across the grassy ground, instantaneously scorching the grass into ashes. In the sky above the dome seemed like blazing red and purple wildfire.
As the flames died down the area was as black as coal and the two saiyans were on the ground. Their skin was burned and Raditz seemed uncontious and near death, while Vegeta was still alive. His round orbital pot arrived to where he was lying down. The prince thanked whatever god existed for the implants that allowed the pod to arrive whenever his life was in danger.
The prince of all saiyans started to crawl to his pot when suddenly two blades of ki appeared from both sides of his neck. The short noseless warrior was standing above him with his hands shaped like the letter "x". The energy blade that appeared from his right hand was on the left side of the elite's neck while the blade from the left hand was at the flame haired warrior's right side. He gulped as he feared that the short fighter will kill him.
Krillin stared daggers at the saiyan royal while with hatred in them, while his smile showed a grim sense of satisfaction. When he saw Yajirobe impale the oaf who killed Yamcha he felt so happy he wanted to squeal with joy as Yamcha got avenged. When Goku spared the saiyan that killed Tien, Chiaotzu, Piccolo and almost killed Gohan, the noseless desciple of Muten Roshi was absolutly livid, as he wanted nothing but avenge his friends, but he stopped guessing Goku's need for second chances when he saw Piccolo fighting alongside them. Now he had a chance to avenge his friends by his own hands and he wasn't going to give it up.
The blades of ki started to get closer to Vegeta's neck as the turtle student gritted his teeth. "You killed my friends, I will avenge them!" he yelled in pain as his body was giving up on him, but the shorter fighter's determination and will power made him stand up and keep his ki blades on.
The orange wearing monk yelled as he raised his arms to decapitate the downed saiyan, until something stopped his body, the voice of his best friend. "Krillin no!" Goku yelled to his friend, pain rising with his voice as he struggled to say every word. Gohan was carrying him as they kneeled beside the downed older brother of the palm haired saiyan. Krillin was starting to cry as he imagined all his friends and how they would react to the news. He couldn't let this saiyan live, not this time.
"No Goku! I allowed you to spare the saiyan that killed Tien, Chiaotzu and Piccolo but someone has to die in his stead, and this one will do!" he screamed as he refused Goku's plead to save the life of the prince of all saiyans. Goku gritted his teeth as he felt pain from all the broken bones in his body, as well as the burns on his skin.
The greatest hero of Earth smiled and he breathed slowly. "Krillin, he is not a threat to us anymore. Killing him would be too cruel. We are not on that level and I thought you knew that. Besides, I want to have a rematch against him." the naive fighter said happily as he coughed blood.
Krillin looked at his friend and then at the saiyan warrior who tried to crawl to the pod. Krillin's anger got the better of him once again as the blades started to move down to the saiyan's neck. "NO! HE DIES RIGHT N-" he started to scream as he prepare to strike the killing blow, but a flying kick from Gohan hit him on the cheek and the ki blades dispersed.
Gohan landed in front of the noseless monk and he cried, tears streamed across his soft cheeck as he looked at Krillin with anger. "I DON'T WANT TO SEE ANYMORE DEATH!" he declared with a scream as Vegeta used the opprotunity to get into the pot and fly away from Earth. Krillin saw the pot go to space and he slammed his fist at the ground while tears fell on the scorched black ground.
King Kai's Planet, 16:22 PM, 2 hours after the fight with the saiyans ended,
King Kai was exhausted. For the last hour he had to do so many things. At first the black djinn on Earth called him telepathically and demanded him to call Lord Enma or as the genie called him "Giant McAsshole" and tell him to send Yamcha, Tien Shinhan, Chiaotzu, Piccolo Junior and Protector of Earth Kami on a journey to the Snake Way, which the blue catfish looking being did with caution and he didn't like doing it.
Now he tried to rest when he felt the djinn getting into his head once again. "King Kai, I have formed a plan. I will send some of the Earth's warriors to Namek to use their dragon balls to revive Kami. Please watch at what Frieza is doing so that we will know to guide them to Namek without meeting him." Mister Popo demanded as he immediately disconnected the telepathic connection without hearing what the martial arts master had to say, which angered the kai.
King Kai snarl from the fact that he was ordered around, but the last time he refused the black djinn's demands he suffered a lot from the genie's magic. "I hate that asshole." he sighed as he focused on the location of the emperor of the Planet Trade Organization.
He listened to hear what the lizard was talking about with his second in command as he didn't it was that important, but he the djinn gave him an order and that notion angered him. His ears started to get a better notion of the conversation when to his surprise he heard one word: "Namek".
The blue entity quickly panicked as he listened. The lizar emperor was sitting in his flying chair while his green skinned second in command walked across the room and the fat spiky blob just stood next to the taled reptile. "So on this planet Namek there are 7 magic ball that can grant any wish?" the pink warrior asked as he tapped his scouter.
The bright-blue skinned warrior walked from one side to the other while holding papers in his hands. "That is right. According to the conversations between Nappa, Vegeta and Bryco as well as the data taken from the bug that was in Raditz's scouter, it seems the unregistered planet he landed on had a namekian and he said that there were dragon balls to revive his fallen comrade. Now if Vegeta had killed that namekian, there should be others and by that logic, another set of dragon ball." he said as he tried toread whatever was written on these papers.
The reptilian tyrant smiled with an equal amount of sadism and joy. "Then it's settled. We're going to Planet Namek." he said with his british accent as both his minions bowed respectfully and left the room.
King kai fell from his chair as he zoomed out with the sight over the northen side of the universe which was given to him by the kai before him. He panted as sweat covered hi face from the fear he had of Lord Freeza or Frieza or however his name was spelled. The blue skinned entity sat on his chair once again as he cleaned his forehead. 'Shit! What do I tell Mister Popo? Wait, I don't have to tell him anything. Screw him! He can't make me do what he wants!' the kai thought to himself as his fear switched to anger over the djinn's demand.
The small flying cricket entered the house of the guardian of the northen side of the universe, much to the displeasure and anger of the kai. "Fuck off Gregory, I'm busy!" he yelled at his insect companion who just crossed his arms and frowned at the short being.
The cricket then looked away from the entity who owned the planed. "Fine. I was going to tell you that the Grandmaster is here, but I'll tell him you're busy." he said as he left the house. King Kai sulked in his anger for a moment until everything the bug said clicked in his mind. "WAIT WHAT?!" he yelled in panic as he ran put side.
On the grass of the planet stood an effeniate teal skinned humanoid entity. He was thin and his white hair was defined his identity like a sore thumb. He wore a maroon robe, a black cuirass with a diamond pattern and a blue sash he also wore black high-heeled shoes and a big light blue ring around his neck. In his right hand he held a long scepter with a floating gem above it.
King Kai was frozen in fear from the entity that stood in front of him. He quickly bowed respectfuly and fearfuly. "G-G-G-Grandmaster Whis. I-i-i-i-is there something I can do for you today?" he stuttered as he feared the thin being in front of him.
The entity gave the short blue catfish a respctful bow and smiled with joy, approval and happiness, which caused King Kai to take a breath and calm down. The entity raised his eyes to thos of the kai. "There is something you can do for me, Guardian of the Northern Side of the Universe." he said calmly and peacefully, making King Kai gulp with fear of what one of the tall teal humanoid had to say.
What does this man require of King Kai? What is the Planet Namek? Is there really another set of dragon balls? Will the remaining Z-Fighters meet this Lord Freeza? Find out on the next chapter of "Changed Path" as we begin the road to the Namek Saga.
Well, well, well. Didn't expect Whis to show up to make a cameo this early right? Don't worry, he is just a cameo and you will see his request next chapter. Now how about that monkey fight?! I really wanted Raditz back in the picture so I him fight as an Oozaru against Vegeta. Tell me if you liked it.
Power Levels:
Oozaru Vegeta (injured and tired): 156,000
Oozaru Raditz (slightly injured from before): 154,000
Raditz (after Scorched Earth Weekend): 53
Vegeta (after Scorched Earth Weekend): 69
R&A:
R: I feel you wasted Nappa potential in favor of this OC or self insert
But I give you props for having the OC acually being Pissed that Vegeta Killed Nappa.. Despite Nappa Loyalty to Vegeta.
The reason I partially believe your Oc is self insert is because you portray him as more honorable and less Flawed then Vegeta and Nappa.. Like any other Author being afraid to show Flaws of the character because it is a self insert making that character a Gary or Mary Sue.
That is my concern.
Also regarding your writing. There not much Dialouge or much of reaction of the characters.. It is like I see more of your input then the Reaction of the characters... For example Nappa being stabbed.. You just say the Of saw him being stabbed.. But we saw reactions of Nappa being Stabbed
For example
Krillen: !?
Think about
A: Yeah I know and understand why you're disappointed, but Nappa never had much potential unless it was abridged Nappa. I also wanted to show Bryco in this arc in a slightly more positive light, because I have a hard time of how to write faults of the character. His role in the story is to get his ass kicked mostly to make fun of how much OC are mary/gary stues in some stories. I'll try to write him better in the future, but for the next arc he is will have a fun time with Freeza, while he will also have some badass moments in the future.
Thank you for the Krillin idea. I tried to insert that in this chapter and I hope it payed off. Please review once more, because I like what you said.
R: So many refences to DBZ Abriged
A: Because it's just too funny to pass over it.
R: Vegeta and Goku, round one. Arguably my favorite bout in Dragon Ball, and one that was done incredibly well here.
Character wise both were extremely in character. Goku's scrappy determination, along with slight idiocy, was so perfect for this time in Z. More so than Super's version of Goku. His willingness to go even further with the Kaioken had just as much tension it had in Z. Vegeta's brash, arrogant, attitude was wonderful. His plotting hatred and absolute disdain for Goku already was great.
The fighting was not half bad either. There were several miss steps in grammar and the flow could have been better but nothing was wrong with it.
Overall not a bad chapter and an excellent launching point to go into the future of Dragon Ball.
Thus far in the Saiyan Saga my favorite part was the stuff with Goku in the afterlife. Maybe because you showed off more of the afterlife than most would and it ran beside Raditz developing with the humans making it seem even more important.
A: Well I think it's also one of the best if not the best DBZ fights ever.
This chapter was more Raditz vs Vegeta while it did end the Goku vs Vegeta fight, the prince still hates our hero. What did you think of the Oozaru fight of Raditz and Vegeta? I myself loved writing it and while it was short, it was destructive and badass. This is what I wanted to write the most in this arc.
Don't worry, there will be a bit more of the afterlife in the next chapter. I'm also glad you liked the fighting and how I used Kaio Ken.
Okay everyone, the Saiyan Saga is over. See you next week. Bye bye.