Me: hey guys uh, this isn't the dare round, I will be updating that a little later, this is just a response to DullNessBC, AGAIN I wouldn't have made a whole author's not about it a comment if it weren't for the commenter to be a guest, please please PLEASE don't make a negative note about him/her

DullNessBC:Alright, time to review this "fanfiction"

First of all, the dares are full of s*** and are full of "lol le randomness xD" and you need to atleast make it MATURE, I do not mean add sex or something,

Characters are bland, and Neon likes the pain and suffering of others, Neon is a Mary-Sue and needs to be changed immediately.

Vincent is in this. Vincent is not canon, Rebornica even hates being reminded of him. Stop using "Vincent" but keep using "Purpleguy" and/or "William Afton"

The Bite Victim and the Brother should have no names,

Overall, 1/10, A first step, but sadly tripped.

Me: okay so firstly I will try to make it a bit more mature, you see my nature IS random s***, but I will try ... though I need to understand where should I start from.

Secondly I will work on the characters behavior, I completely agree with you in this, guess I just didn't notice it earlier, so thank you for that and Neon isn't an OC 'Neon' is the name I use to hide my REAL name, so calling me a Mary sue is ... a bit weird ... see I have flaws okay, firstly as you said I like to see people suffer and all, that means I am not someone innocent and sweet, so because of that, not everyone likes me. If you didn't know I kind of am short tempered, why do you think I stab people in their stomach every time I get mad? I'm also quite lazy, that explains WHY there are so many grammar errors, after typing I rarely go back and check my grammar errors. I'm also not that good in studies *hangs head* especially langua- HECK I AM NOT EVEN SO STRONG! I CAN'T EVEN PICK UP A 5 YEAR OLD IMAGINE ME PICKING UP FOXY! I WILL BE CRUSHED UNDER HIM IN A NANO SECOND! NO ONE DARE THAT PLEASE!

Jessie: YOU NEVER TOLD ME THAT

Me: ... see I can't change myself, I mean I can but ... MOVING ON! Vincent isn't a name that I want to use either, I never use that name, they are just used in the dares, I remember Writer's pen77 gave this dare in which Vincent had to come and smash a cake on William's face I think, honestly I didn't want to do that but a dare was a dare. I swear I don't want to use that AT ALL! So whoever is reading this, please don't type Vincent for Rebornica's sake, I don't know about Rebornica and what happened but I won't use it again, but if it is a dare then ... I guess I will just ignore it or change the name

Thirdly, the reason why I gave the Bite victim and the brother name's is just to not make it sound awkward ... imagine saying bite victim make a cake, brother do this ... my brother might do it instead by accident ... this is something that I'm going against, I was INSPIRED by other stories, lemme guess, you used to go to those stories too and say they shouldn't have a name? I don't see the problem in this name thing, if Scott gives them names then I will change it, until then I will just keep it like this. Anyway thanks for pointing out a few things, they honestly helped me, and anyway, that is why negative reviews are there, to tell you where you go wrong. PEACE! AND the dare series is about to get delayed because I need to make a table on Excel about the personalities of the characters ... NOWINEEDTOUNDERSTANDWHYTHISFRICKENEXCELDOCUMENTISN'TWORKINGAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH