~Deception~

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VALLED!

(VALLED, if you're reading this, why aren't you responding to my emails. Soon I'm going to have to stop saying you edited it because you haven't sent me my file back yet! If it's about the condom game thing, then I'm sorry!)

Few, this chapter is so crappy, and it's old too. Like, 3 weeks old compared to the new, fresh stuff I've written, it's so much better! WAH! D: I want to write faster but it's HHAARRRDDD.

Enjoy!


I grabbed hold of Kakashi so tight I thought I was going to crush him, I started to shake. Kakashi darted towards them, and then i felt the absence of his hands underneath me, I squeezed my eyes together so lightly I thought I was going to break something, but he suddenly made a few hand signs, and jumped away.

I opened my eyes and Kakashi landed on a tree branch, confusion ruled my body as he put me down, so I looked up at him, my eyes showing how confused I was.

Then I saw it, the Sharingan; it was intimidating to say the least.

I looked down from the high tree branch and saw a clone fight with Zabuza, Naruto and Sasuke looked terrified. I wanted to go down there and help, but I realized I wouldn't move my legs. They where numb and I saw one of my senbon logged into my thigh.

I looked up at him and growled, he smiled nervously and scratched the back of his head apologetically, "It's to make sure you don't get any crazy ideas." He said nervously.

I glared at him, ready to make a witty remark, but he was gone.

I pouted, I was alone in a tree, hidden in the leaves, but I could still see if I looked hard enough. But I hated that he was right, I could get a crazy idea and try to help even when I was so injured. But yet it pissed me off so much that I couldn't at least help. Its teamwork and Kakashi just excluded out of this battle without a second thought. He would always go on and on about teamwork, yet here he is. I had to be able to help some how.

I watched the fight blindly, holding onto the tree trunk weakly was I mustered over my thoughts. My face was grim as I thought over the Jutsu's I knew. If I could just get Zabuza injured then Kakashi wouldn't have such a hard time fighting him, and it would prove that I could help. Alright, if I was going to fight this guy, he needs to go down in one strike. If he's a water Ninja then I shouldn't use fire Jutsu's. That's good because I'm not too good at them; I bit my thumb weakly, still watching the fight.

This was going to take either a lighting or earth Jutsu.

Solids will always beat liquids in the long run. So if I use lighting, an energy, I have no idea what it will turn out like. It's true that water amplifies lighting, but I wouldn't assume that he would get a nasty shock.

So I'll go with an earth Jutsu to play it safe, if it doesn't work, then I'll use lighting. Now all I had to do is wait and watch for my time to strike.

I watched calmly was Kakashi was kicked all the way into the water. I winced, that must have hurt. But I kept my eyes on Zabuza, I started to form hand seals slowly as he ran forward towards him with is sword.

Kakashi had landed in the water, a bad move. I thought Zabuzawas just going to spear him with his sword when I saw that he stopped because Kakashi had used some Makibishi, I silently cheered, he'd had given me my chance even if he didn't know he did.

I finished up my hand seals quickly as Zabuza turned around, and did a back flip into the water, about mid flip, my Jutsu started.

Spears thrust at him from his blind spot, they where basically large columns of dirt packed together tightly with a sharp point at the end. I thought of another advantage of using earth because you could activate it from anywhere and the Ninja wouldn't be able to find you if you where hiding like I was.

I growled as he dogged and landed in the water, but the spears followed him into the water eagerly. I frowned when he jumped out of the water and wasn't harmed.

I made a few more hand seals and the spears got smaller and faster. I watched as he jumped around on the surface of the water, trying to doge and bock with his large sword.

I watched the water, waiting for Kakashi to get out of there, but I didn't see his head. I almost growled in irritation, he needed to get out of there, I couldn't keep this up!

I felt my Jutsu disperse and I put my hands back around the tree trunk, hiding my chakra.

I was just so frustrated, all that effort and I hadn't done anything but use up valuable chakra. I wanted to stomp my feet on the ground and yell loudly. But I forced my self to keep calm. That wasn't going to help.

I watched as Zabuza trapped Kakashi in his water prison with irritation. I had given Kakashi his chance and yet he blew it off. I bit my thumb nail, snarling, and looking down at my leg.

The damned senbon was still logged in my thigh; I growled at it and pulled it out harshly. I couldn't feel it because of my own numbing poison. I saw the blood seep into the bandages as I looked it over, snarling even louder.

This damn thing made it impossible to move, me and my stupid top notch poison, and if I did try to move, I would fall out of this freaking tree and break my neck.

I put the senbon in my Kunai pouch, then grabbed some pills from my butt pack and swallowed some. This damn handy cap was always holding me back and it make me mad and frustrated all the freaking time! What I would do to get this thing out of me and destroyed.

I wiped my mouth with my sleeve, putting the half empty pill bottle back into my butt pack. I watched as the mist got thicker and Zabuza's clone kicked Naruto so hard his forehead protector fell off as he flew back, him landing yards back, Zabuza stepped forward onto his forehead protector, crushing it into the dirt.

I was mad, freaking MAD; no one beats my team mates around like this, NO one.

I could feel my control slipping, chakra pills where great to keep inner from acting up. But inner was always there; ready to take over the moment my mental wall. I had placed there years ago that held Inner back. It took away from my chakra drastically. But again, inner was always there, waiting for my control to falter and take over.

It didn't help at all was I watched Naruto charge at Zabuza, and get kicked away AGAIN.

I felt my chakra flare wildly inside my body, my eyes become large and angry. I heard inner chuckle lightly.

Sakura-chan…does that make you mad when you see friends beaten around like that?

I couldn't hold my self back as I replied. Hell yes it does.

I heard it laugh, my anger only becoming stronger. Sakura-chan. There going to die if you don't go help them, let me help you.

I felt my anger fizz out when I saw that Naruto was smiling, putting his forehead protector back on.

I almost slapped my self for letting my self get this out of control, I quickly put my mental wall back up and inner went back screaming at me, about how I needed it and how I was so weak.

I watched as Zabuza suddenly got angry ran towards Sasuke with lighting speed. I gasped when he elbowed Sasuke in the gut, throwing him back, he fell to the floor and I curled my fingers into the wood so hard I made it chip. I was horrified when I saw Sasuke hit the ground yards away, but then Zabuza ran at him, Sasuke still on the floor, Zabuza used his elbow and brought it down on his torso. Sasuke's eyes opening side as he recoiled, opening his mouth and a large amount of blood flying into the air.

I hugged that wood so hard I could hear it groan under the pressure, I wanted to run to Sasuke's side and help him, but I couldn't. I resisted the urge to call out to him and I just ended up biting my lip. I watched in anger as Zabuza slammed his foot down on Sasuke, I felt so weak and useless. Such a burden. I wanted to look away as Zabuza pressed down harder with his foot on Sasuke. Making him have his pained expression I never wanted my boys to see, yet alone feel the pain that caused it.

That expression I had seen on my own face so many times.

I growled, and swore. I did a stream of hand signs. "Raitoningu hoippu!" I whispered loudly.

I held my arms out and hoped the tree wouldn't catch on fire, I felt my chakra spark and I watched as a large about of lighting whipped around palms in a thick messy stream.

I watched as the lighting destroyed my covering and was shot toward Zabuza, I smiled as I saw him look up at me with side, surprised eyes. I purred in pleasure when I watched as the clone tried to block my whip of lighting with his overly large sword, only ending up making the clone explode into a large amount of water.

I didn't waste time, as soon as the cone had dispersed I made more hand seals, I looked over at Naruto who was looking at me with wide eyes, "Naruto!" I yelled, "Get Kakashi! I'll distract Zabuza!" I yelled.

I finished my hand seals looking away from Naruto, having faith in him, hoping he would listen. "Kunai no Raiton!" I yelled loudly.

I reached into my Kunai holster and pulled out all my Kunai with both hands, I threw them at Zabuza and laced them with energy. I threw them as hard and as fast as I could. They went with blinding speed at him, he dogged like crazy, trying to avoid where the Kunais had landed in the water so that he wouldn't get shocked.

I reached into my belt with one hand, still using the other to throw; I grabbed a kunai that was rigged with an explosive tag and I didn't lace this one with energy though, it would have exploded in my hands. I threw it along with the rest of my Kunais, it exploded in the air.

A large cloud of smoke separated us, and I quickly started a new Jutsu, "Hirate Raiton!" I yelled out.

I put one palm out in fount of me and one at the side of my chest, and then trust it forward, a pancake shaped lightning bolt fired at Zabuza with great speed, while brining the out stretched arm back in, and repeated it.

I watched as the first lighting bolts cut threw the cloud, creating holes threw out the gray mist. I screamed at him, making the bolts go even faster as he dogged them franticly, trying to get out of the way of my faith.

I didn't notice the large Shuriken till Zabuza was forced to catch it, I grinned, I started to add more energy to my attacks and I saw him try to doge the second Shuriken just as my lighting was coming at him rapidly.

He jumped over the second Shuriken and doge the lighting in mid air, right as he jumped I had made one large lighting bolt and I watched as it raced towards him, I held onto the tree trunk weakly, panting heavily and sweating lightly at the intensity of the battle.

This was it, if this didn't hit I was going to have to depend on Sasuke and Naruto who seamed to have enough problems of there own.

He had been hit.

Though, he had only been clipped on the sholder, he had been hit.

I silently cheered, but I knew I was still every vulnerable.

Then again, I wasn't expecting for the Shuriken to turn into Naruto.

My eyes widened in disbelief as he threw a Kunai at Zabuza and he was forced to let go of Kakashi. Naruto falling down threw mid air, but before he could get into the security of the water, Zabuza got mad, REALLY mad.

I watched in horror as Zabuza turned around and started to use the giant Shuriken that he had caught and started to spin it rapidly in his hand, getting ready to throw it at Naruto.

I hugged that tree so tight I thought I was going to break it in half.

I watched with surprise as Kakashi stopped the blade with the back of his hand where the metal plat was on the back of his glove. Naruto fell into the water loudly as I watched the battle of strength between the too of them.

I wanted to yell out to Kakashi as I saw the beginnings of the Shuriken start to fold up again, tripling the pressure on Kakashi's hand.

I watched as the folding up Shuriken was thrown with great strength away from them, Kakashi coming out victorious.

Zabuza jumped back, and so did Kakashi, copying him. They flew back far into the air, staring at each other carefully. About mid way threw the air, Zabuza started to make hand signs, I watched as Kakashi's Sharingan eye widened and quickly started to do the same hand signs, perfectly in sink with Zabuza's own.

They landed on the top of the water, not faltering with there hand signs, it was quick. To quick, I couldn't fallow there movement's with my eyes at all.

I almost screamed when I saw the two large dragon's rise out of the water, fighting with each other. It wasn't because I was scared, Oh no.

A large wave hit the tree I was sitting on, I held onto the trunk for dear life as the waves crashed over my body.

I felt my whole body be picked up off the branch and crushed ageist it. I opened my eyes wide with pain; it felt like someone had just ripped my skin off. I kept colliding with the tree; I couldn't see anything at all. My vision burred by the salt that stung my eyes and hurt my wounds greatly. I screamed in pain, my arms still strong on the trunk. I only herd a loud gurgle, and I felt water run down my throat as I swallowed it.

I felt my body bashed around a few more times, till the water drew back suddenly.

I felt my body fall back on the branch, shaking it. I gasped and coughed out salt water loudly. My eyes where large with pain and my body was soaked with water and blood from my reopened wounds. I wanted to scream, the stinging pain was so bad. But I held it in, clenching my fist, and leaning heavily on the branch, grinding my teeth together.

I coughed up more water along with my lunch, and maybe some blood. I wouldn't know, it all seamed in shambles.

"Sakura!" I herd Sasuke call out to me, I wanted to look down at him and tell him I was fine, but I wasn't I didn't know if I had broken some bones or maybe even shattered something, I was in to much pain, and it hurt all the same.

I blinked a few times, trying to get the salt out my eyes, and I looked down at my self.

I looked like I had just been dragged threw a mind field, under the ocean, then threw sharp pointy rocks, then drowned.

My bandages where painted red with my blood and my cloths where heavy with water. I didn't feel my forehead protector on my head anymore and my hair stuck to my face and my body, and I was missing a shoe.

I looked over at Sasuke painfully, I saw him, he was wet from mid chest down, and looked dirty and ruffled. But alive, thankfully.

"I'm fine Sasuke, go get Naruto." My voice was dry and crackly, even though I must of swallowed galleons of water.

He didn't make any noticing that he herd me, but he didn't have time to respond as the second crashes of water hit us harder then last time.

I closed my eyes and I felt the water crush me, I screamed as the salt was rubbed into my wounds again. I crashed agents the tree so many times, I felt like someone had just dropped large rock into my side over and over again. But I held on, my grip was faltering though. And it wasn't getting stronger with every crash to the head I got. The hole tree gowned and I felt it uproot it's self from the ground, and the branch I was sitting on broke off the tree, it whacked ageist my leg, before it was rushed away by the current. I herd a sickening snap as it hit me, and I screamed again in pure agony.

I felt my head bob up for a few seconds, I couldn't help it, and my screams had continued threw out the short lived air. I felt my body dragged under again with extreme force. I let go of the tree truck, seeing it no use to me now. I rushed threw the water, flipping and turning violently threw the current. My body hitting broken pieces of wood that had broken off the trees behind me.

I felt the air I had sucked up be knocked out of me in bubbles when I hit a large sold tree that had still been standing throughout the strong attack. I grabbed one of the large branches desperately.

I felt the water smack into me as it continued, every time it did I would suck up more water, and the branch would grown and crack a bit more every time. I screamed again as the branch broke free from the tree, and I was carried away by the current again. My body was being whipped around like a rag doll, I felt sharp pains when it moved the wrong way and I would scream when another sold object would crash into my body.

I started to feel the current get weaker and weaker, and I silently held on hope that this was the end. Trees weren't braking when the water crashed into them, and I silently prayed that if it wasn't over soon, a log would hit me in the head and take me out of my misery. I felt my body be forced up into the heavenly air, I gasped and tried to stay on top as I was pushed threw the top of the trees, getting hit in the face with sharp thin branches.

I felt my body slammed into a tree trunk, and the water had just disappeared from under me, ending the torture. I fell, and fell; I must have been stories up in the air, because when I opened my eyes, I was at least two floors from hitting the ground where sharp broken pieces of wood lay below. I franticly tried to grab onto a branch, anything, but my arms only clawed threw air, and I fell onto the sharp pieces of wood.

The impact made me scream out again, gurgling out blood and water this time, almost drowning my self.

I lay awkward and broken on the forest floor, buried under wood shards and leaves, I tried to take deep breaths as I spit out more sea water. I gasped for dear life, my vision getting fogged over with haze and pain. My body was numb; it was too much for my brain to handle so it just made me numb. But I could clearly see that I was bleeding from old and new wounds. My leg was broken because I could see half of it sticking up in the air, stretching my skin painfully.

My cloths where ripped, shredded into pieces along with my bandages. I could see them start to puss and swell. But without the pain, I lacked sympathy for my self. I saw that my whole body was twisted an odd angles and shards of wood poking deep into my skin. I looked up at the sky, not wanting to see anymore. If I saw more, the pain would come back, and I quite enjoyed being numb.


I waited for 2 hours till my team finally found me, they stood over me and watched me like I was an animal dying.

There expressions where like shock, twisted into disgust, and fear. I could see tears coming down Naruto's face; he wasn't looking at me, but throwing up. Tears where in the corner of Sasuke's eyes, ready to spill over any moment. Kakashi looked like he had just seen murder happen right in fount of his eyes.

I tried to smile at them, but it was forced and ugly. "I-I'm g-g-g-glad y-you d-d-defeated Z-Zabuza." I choked out, my voice weak and scratchy. It was pathetic.

Sasuke's tears overflowed his eyes and he looked away with his hand covering his mouth, holding back a sob. Naruto looked like he was about to ball his eyes out. And Kakashi looked grim.

I watched with lidded eyes as they tried to pick me up, but the moment they had touched me. All the pain had come back, I screamed loud, really loud. I felt tears in my eyes develop as I screamed; I screwed my eyes shut at the pain. I felt Kakashi put his hands under my head as I screamed out water and blood, my screams coming out muffled and demented.

I was getting really tired, and I stopped screaming seeing it no use. I coughed out the rest of the water I was holding inside me, and I leaned back into Kakashi's hands, moaning. "K-Kakashi…" I tried to say.

"Shhh." Kakashi said, shaking his head. "Go to sleep, it's going to be alright." He said with a light airy voice.

I nodded painfully and I let the pain take over me.


D: Wha... Sakura-chan? Are you okay?

Well here you go Miss. Chocolat! One of my best Fan Fiction BUDDYS! :D Here is your 'O SAKURA D:!' *giggle* anywho, I remember wrighting this and I thought I wrote it so much better, *sob* I guess not. :T Poo... Thats what I hate about Fan It stretches things out so my super long writing turn into flimsy little sicks of crappy-ness.

Look at me, I'm blaming my bad writing on a web sight! JEEZ!

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