Ok as requested dialogue now has "" to separate thought from talk. I will eventually change previous chapters with this but for now I'm focusing on an issue I have with the story. This issue is a writer's block. This is when you can't think of what to write next. Now this writers block is nothing to worry about because it occurs after Chapter 78 (so it's a long ways off) but I still would like to get past it. Yes I really actually have 78 chapters written ready to be uploaded (as of November 12th 2014). After chapter 16 the story becomes like a TV show. There isn't a direct sole storyline. It's a different dilemma every few chapters. And I've just hit a small block so if anyone has any ideas I could gladly implement them and they can be any idea. I'll deal with fitting it into the storyline and I could do sort of mini crossovers that last a few chapters. I don't know but if you have ideas feel free to PM me. So with all that covered... ENJOY!
Chapter 11
The victory
After about an hour and no reply from speckles I returned to the nest to find them asleep.
"I guess they're done with the doity woik."
I said to myself in a mobster accent. I fell asleep only to wake up
To blue eyes staring at me.
There was an awkward silence.
"Whatcha doin?" I asked cautiously.
"Jared do you know where speckles went? He just vanished." She said.
"He probably just went to get some food." I replied. Sure enough he returned moments later with a slab of meat.
They were eating when a boulder came smashing down the wall and knocking speckles into the lake below. I dove in after him and began dragging his unconscious body up the cliff, blue eyes was fighting one eye who was trying to mate with her. I began fantasizing about carving one eye's brain out with my sword when we got up there and speckles and I defeated him, speckles woke up and tried to help climb but we were there by then.
I tossed speckles up and climbed up.
He roared and we attacked.
One eye held him in the same position he held his mother in.
He stopped struggling and I became worried.
"No, not again." He said.
He suddenly began overpowering one eye and threw him across the nest.
He tumbled to the ground.
"Bring it on, ya filthy beast!"
"You will regret this."
One eye said.
I pulled out my ray gun and aimed at one eyes head. Speckles stopped me.
"No, he's just a sad old dinosaur talking to himself. Let him talk."
I reluctantly put away my gun.
He walked away with his head low but stopped and turned around.
"Congratulate your pet, human.
He won this fight." He said with an evil smile.
"Get out of here before I change my mind." I said walking away.
So I hope that sorta explains why he just let one eye get away! I pretty much crammed everything I needed to say into the intro so! As always! Thanks for reading! And I will see you (hopefully) for chapter 12!