Authors Note:
Sorry it took me so long to get this baby updated. I've been incredibly busy, for a fourteen year old.
I hope you like the direction this story is going in. If you were one of the ones who gave me an idea on where the story has gone and is going, you know who you are. THANK YOU!!!! I OWE YOU ONE!!!!!
Besides that, not much to say. I'm looking for more ideas, so if you have some, feel free to include them in any reviews!
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*-* Domon's Point Of View *-*
I felt Rain shudder and I held her close. She doesn't need this. I wonder why bad things always happen to good people.
Rain is the best person I know.
The official started pacing, looking at us every now and then. He glared at me, but when he manages to steal a glance at Rain, an evil grin crawls up his face.
"Well, gorgeous," he says, staring right at Rain, "how could one hurt such a sweet flower as you? Why didn't your little boyfriend protect you? After all he looks so strong and manly..."
I have never stood up so fast in my life.
"Hey asshole, how dare you speak to her that way! She is a much better person than you are and could ever hope to be, so why don't you shove it and leave her alone. She's been through enough, and I'm sure she doesn't need you making it worse."
I grabbed Rain's hand, shot a death stare at both officials, and we walked out of the room. We continued briskly down the hallway, when Rain looked over at me.
"Thanks Domon. I'm glad you were there to help me out."
"Anyone who is mean to someone I love deserves a kick in the face." I fumed.
She smiled. I heard something behind us and I turned around. I saw the two fake policemen. One of them was holding a gun, but it wasn't a real gun. Something hit my neck, like a small prick, and I started getting really sleepy. I heard someone scream as I fell...but they sounded so far away... and all I could concentrate on right now was sleeping... ________________________________________________________________________
*-* Rain's Point Of View *-*
Domon is dead.
Domon is dead. Domon is dead. Domon is dead.
That is the only thing that I can think of. That is the only reason he would fall. That is the only reason he would leave me here. Why he would leave me here all alone.
I turned to see the men advancing towards me, and grabbing both my arms. They took me outside, and shoved me in a limo. Kind of weird, my brain said, a limo. They got in next to me, and I was sitting in-between them while someone else drove.
"Hey baby, come sit my me." Said one, a sick look in his eyes.
"No," said the other, "come sit ON me."
One of the men started kissing my bare skin, and sticking his hands in uncomfortable places.
"Lemmie undress you honey, get you in bed and stick my self into you..." his voice was husky.
"Maybe Seitt will let us have a turn with you. I'll give you the best sex you ever had, at least better than that wimp we left behind could have given you." The men laughed at that.
SEITT?!?! My mind went off in total alarm. He was in captivity though, maybe they were bluffing...
After a moment of silence, one of them turned to stare at me.
"Those are some nice assets you've go there honey. I'd love to see them without all the clothes though..." the man put one hand on each of my breasts and started to play as he licked my neck and pulled at the top of my shirt. I shoved him off of me the best I could, trying not to imagine Domon lying there on the floor.
"Oh, feisty are we? I always get hard off the feisty ones."
I closed my eyes and huddled in a ball. Ten minutes and a lot of inappropriate comments later, we arrived at our destination. The driver pulled into the parking lot of a motel and the two men got out, shoving me along with them.
"Room 14... good, we're on the bottom floor..." one of the men muttered, looking at a piece of paper in his hand.
When we reached that room, one man reached out and knocked a certain pattern. We waited a minute before the door opened slowly.
"Ah, gentlemen, how kind of you to stop by. Your pay will be deposited shortly. Rain my dear, right this way."
I heard some bushes rustle behind me, but I was too preoccupied to look at what it was. Seitt had pulled me into the room.
"Rain, Rain, Rain, long time no see."
"Thankfully." I said defiantly.
"Started getting pretty close to that Kashuu kid, haven't you?"
"Yes."
"Well," he said with a smirk, "that's about to change. You're with me now, and there's nothing you or anyone else can do about it."
"No Seitt! No matter what you think, I'll never truly be with you, because in my heart, I love Domon, not you. And you can't change that."
Seitt groaned. But it didn't seem to be out of anger. It was out of...boredom.
"Honey, that monster of a man drilled that into you didn't he? Oh you poor thing! Let me comfort you..."
He reached out for me, but I recoiled. I ran over to the other side of the bed. He turned, and walking slowly he advanced toward me. I shut my eyes as hard as I could and I prayed. I prayed to God, and I prayed to Domon.
((Oh Domon, if you're out there, if you can hear me, please wake up. I'm afraid I won't be able to keep Seitt at bay for much longer. Please save me Domon...because if you don't, I might not be able to stop Seitt from taking the gift I have for you...))
"Why don't we finish off where we started honey? But this time, I'll go slow and steady...relish in the time we have together..."
No......
SMASH!!!!!
"No Seitt! STOP RIGHT NOW!!"
It was Domon!
I love him. I love him. I love him. I love him. I love him. I love him.
I swear to God I will shower that man with kisses the second we get out of here.
"Why," said Seitt coolly, "Mr. Kashuu, we were just talking about you. And how much Rain hates you."
Domon just stared at him, a deep frown on his lips.
"That's a lie Seitt. Can't you see it in Rain's eyes? She's scared of you. A woman shouldn't be scared of her husband. She should feel safe and protected, nurtured and cared for. YOU CANNOT GIVE THAT TO HER."
"No...no...I can.." said Seitt, sputtering over his own words as if he didn't know where he was."
"C'mon Rain." Domon called. "Let's leave. Seitt, please move out of the way kindly. I won't call authorities."
"No...I could give her love..." Seitt obviously never heard a word Domon said.
The next sequence of events happened so fast, I can only recall parts of it.
"NOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! NO NO NO NO NO!!!" he said in a sudden fit of rage.
I remember thinking to myself that I had never seen someone consumed by hatred like the man that was standing before me right now.
He calmed down within an instant, and looked up with an wicked smirk on his face.
"If I can't have her Domon Kashuu, neither can you."
Out of his coat he pulled a revolver. I saw Domon's eyes get large and he lunged for Seitt. I heard the shot. It was in my stomach, but I was too much in shock to figure out where. I heard a scream, a word dragged out long, and I saw a flashing image of Domon running towards me.
And then the world went black.
Sorry it took me so long to get this baby updated. I've been incredibly busy, for a fourteen year old.
I hope you like the direction this story is going in. If you were one of the ones who gave me an idea on where the story has gone and is going, you know who you are. THANK YOU!!!! I OWE YOU ONE!!!!!
Besides that, not much to say. I'm looking for more ideas, so if you have some, feel free to include them in any reviews!
________________________________________________________________________
*-* Domon's Point Of View *-*
I felt Rain shudder and I held her close. She doesn't need this. I wonder why bad things always happen to good people.
Rain is the best person I know.
The official started pacing, looking at us every now and then. He glared at me, but when he manages to steal a glance at Rain, an evil grin crawls up his face.
"Well, gorgeous," he says, staring right at Rain, "how could one hurt such a sweet flower as you? Why didn't your little boyfriend protect you? After all he looks so strong and manly..."
I have never stood up so fast in my life.
"Hey asshole, how dare you speak to her that way! She is a much better person than you are and could ever hope to be, so why don't you shove it and leave her alone. She's been through enough, and I'm sure she doesn't need you making it worse."
I grabbed Rain's hand, shot a death stare at both officials, and we walked out of the room. We continued briskly down the hallway, when Rain looked over at me.
"Thanks Domon. I'm glad you were there to help me out."
"Anyone who is mean to someone I love deserves a kick in the face." I fumed.
She smiled. I heard something behind us and I turned around. I saw the two fake policemen. One of them was holding a gun, but it wasn't a real gun. Something hit my neck, like a small prick, and I started getting really sleepy. I heard someone scream as I fell...but they sounded so far away... and all I could concentrate on right now was sleeping... ________________________________________________________________________
*-* Rain's Point Of View *-*
Domon is dead.
Domon is dead. Domon is dead. Domon is dead.
That is the only thing that I can think of. That is the only reason he would fall. That is the only reason he would leave me here. Why he would leave me here all alone.
I turned to see the men advancing towards me, and grabbing both my arms. They took me outside, and shoved me in a limo. Kind of weird, my brain said, a limo. They got in next to me, and I was sitting in-between them while someone else drove.
"Hey baby, come sit my me." Said one, a sick look in his eyes.
"No," said the other, "come sit ON me."
One of the men started kissing my bare skin, and sticking his hands in uncomfortable places.
"Lemmie undress you honey, get you in bed and stick my self into you..." his voice was husky.
"Maybe Seitt will let us have a turn with you. I'll give you the best sex you ever had, at least better than that wimp we left behind could have given you." The men laughed at that.
SEITT?!?! My mind went off in total alarm. He was in captivity though, maybe they were bluffing...
After a moment of silence, one of them turned to stare at me.
"Those are some nice assets you've go there honey. I'd love to see them without all the clothes though..." the man put one hand on each of my breasts and started to play as he licked my neck and pulled at the top of my shirt. I shoved him off of me the best I could, trying not to imagine Domon lying there on the floor.
"Oh, feisty are we? I always get hard off the feisty ones."
I closed my eyes and huddled in a ball. Ten minutes and a lot of inappropriate comments later, we arrived at our destination. The driver pulled into the parking lot of a motel and the two men got out, shoving me along with them.
"Room 14... good, we're on the bottom floor..." one of the men muttered, looking at a piece of paper in his hand.
When we reached that room, one man reached out and knocked a certain pattern. We waited a minute before the door opened slowly.
"Ah, gentlemen, how kind of you to stop by. Your pay will be deposited shortly. Rain my dear, right this way."
I heard some bushes rustle behind me, but I was too preoccupied to look at what it was. Seitt had pulled me into the room.
"Rain, Rain, Rain, long time no see."
"Thankfully." I said defiantly.
"Started getting pretty close to that Kashuu kid, haven't you?"
"Yes."
"Well," he said with a smirk, "that's about to change. You're with me now, and there's nothing you or anyone else can do about it."
"No Seitt! No matter what you think, I'll never truly be with you, because in my heart, I love Domon, not you. And you can't change that."
Seitt groaned. But it didn't seem to be out of anger. It was out of...boredom.
"Honey, that monster of a man drilled that into you didn't he? Oh you poor thing! Let me comfort you..."
He reached out for me, but I recoiled. I ran over to the other side of the bed. He turned, and walking slowly he advanced toward me. I shut my eyes as hard as I could and I prayed. I prayed to God, and I prayed to Domon.
((Oh Domon, if you're out there, if you can hear me, please wake up. I'm afraid I won't be able to keep Seitt at bay for much longer. Please save me Domon...because if you don't, I might not be able to stop Seitt from taking the gift I have for you...))
"Why don't we finish off where we started honey? But this time, I'll go slow and steady...relish in the time we have together..."
No......
SMASH!!!!!
"No Seitt! STOP RIGHT NOW!!"
It was Domon!
I love him. I love him. I love him. I love him. I love him. I love him.
I swear to God I will shower that man with kisses the second we get out of here.
"Why," said Seitt coolly, "Mr. Kashuu, we were just talking about you. And how much Rain hates you."
Domon just stared at him, a deep frown on his lips.
"That's a lie Seitt. Can't you see it in Rain's eyes? She's scared of you. A woman shouldn't be scared of her husband. She should feel safe and protected, nurtured and cared for. YOU CANNOT GIVE THAT TO HER."
"No...no...I can.." said Seitt, sputtering over his own words as if he didn't know where he was."
"C'mon Rain." Domon called. "Let's leave. Seitt, please move out of the way kindly. I won't call authorities."
"No...I could give her love..." Seitt obviously never heard a word Domon said.
The next sequence of events happened so fast, I can only recall parts of it.
"NOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! NO NO NO NO NO!!!" he said in a sudden fit of rage.
I remember thinking to myself that I had never seen someone consumed by hatred like the man that was standing before me right now.
He calmed down within an instant, and looked up with an wicked smirk on his face.
"If I can't have her Domon Kashuu, neither can you."
Out of his coat he pulled a revolver. I saw Domon's eyes get large and he lunged for Seitt. I heard the shot. It was in my stomach, but I was too much in shock to figure out where. I heard a scream, a word dragged out long, and I saw a flashing image of Domon running towards me.
And then the world went black.