Disclaimer: I do not own Naruto, or any of its characters. Anyone who does, will have to buy me gasoline for my car! (Noooooooooo! Its so expensive!)
Anyway, sorry my friends, but I have changed the last chapter back to the way it was, I gotta learn to not take ZoneShifterD's opinion so seriously, true he is one of my greater reviewers, but he is only one of them. And besides like a wise man once said "You can please some of the people some of the time, but you can't please all of the people all of the time". ZoneShifter, no offense, but I won't be making any more changes to my story unless they are absolutely needed (Its hard work rewritting a story).
So yeah, and I hope you guys like the last chapter, I liked it, but then again I'm the author so I should like it!
Respond To Reviews Time;
Endermon- Probably not. I nearly made myself throw up writing just that as I imagined... ok I'm going to stop there before I vomit.
VFSNAKE- Yeah he is. And don't worry Hinata will manage soon.
Infinite Freedom- He will.
KatanaKage- Hey so did Kakashi, but he decided to let himself get "killed" in order to get some information.
ZoneShifterD- Yeah thats part of the reason I'm going to make sure to take everyone else's opinion in as well. You have great ideas don't get me wrong but I have decided that even if they are good, I have to take into account everyone else. And I'm glad you liked that that was the cat that tried to kill Auron. It just came to me. Auron can be such a great character. And I believe that Sasuke is a self-centered bastard who would love the idea that the Hyuga heiress froze in a fight, and take the opportunity to give his own ego a boost by pointing it out. But thats just me. And don't worry, it may seem like I'm rushing it, but its just something to make it a bit easier for a relation to develop when I believe they are ready.
DragonMan180- Yeah that was basically the point of her freezing. Auron, though incapacitated at the moment, didn't miss it so your idea with him talking to her about those two is actual a very good idea sorry if I seem like I'm stealing it, but it just fits in so well sorry.
Omegagaurdian- Thank you, I like that you liked it. I think Auron has a ton to offer to this story. And you may be right, SHino grinning now really doesn't sound right, I think I'll remember that in the future. Ryoko from Tenchi Muyo, your right easy to integrate, but hard to maintain, your idea of Naruto teaching Hinata is a great idea, so don't think your pushing it, or insulting the other one ok. And I'm glad you see it my way, that Moe guy was a bit of a prick. (For those of you who don't know, biting your thumbnail at someone is the Italian middle finger basically.) And sorry I didn't know who they were, could you tell me.
Koharu Kage- I will try.
PinoyJas- Oh its Tsuuga? I will remember that in the future.
Shadowkeeper113- He isn't alive in the first place he is dead! Read the wikipedia article on him!
Not as many reviews this time, oh well!
Oh and before I forget seriously, I want some artists to draw up some manga versions of my story and post them on the internet so don't be shy, just be sure to tell me!
I have no clever introduction. Naruto: An Alternative Story
Chapter 11: Land of Waves Part 2
Last Time
When Tazuna and Sakura returned from blowing chunks Kakashi started questioning him.
Naruto just had the feeling... that today was going to be a long day.
Now
He hated it when he was right. Tazuna had told the entire group during a boat ride to Wave Country's border about Gato, and how he had literally destoryed Wave's economy. He also told them about how the bridge was supposed to have broken his control over Wave. With that said Gato had hired mercenaries in order to kill Tazuna, most of them ninja. He told them the reason he lied about the mission rank was because that they couldn't pay for a B-rank or A-rank mission.
"Okay then teams, its your all's decision now, knowing that the next ninja we meet might be a Jounin, do you still wish to proceed with the mission." Kakashi asked.
Everyone thought for a minute... well almost everyone.
"Of course I'm going to do it, we decided to take on this mission, and now we have to follow through on it, besides what kind of person would just leave a country to suffer like that." Naruto said energetically.
"And anywhere he goes I go." Auron said.
Hinata just nodded her head.
"Hmph. Like I'm going to leave an idiot to do something so important." Sasuke scowled.
"Well I'm not leaving Sasuke." Sakura said.
'Fan girls...' Everyone thought on the boat at once.
"Well looks like me and Shino are coming too then, we sure as hell can't go all the way back now." Kiba said while Shino just gave an affirmative nod.
"Well then Tazuna, it looks like you got yourself some protectors." Kakashi said making Tazuna feel a bit better.
As they reached the shore the teams started walking once again towards Tazuna's town. On the way there Naruto started noticing something, and that something was following them. He eventually pin pointed the location of the thing and threw a kunai in its direction. When they reached it the only thing there was a hare.
"Naruto, you nearly killed a poor rabbit!" Sakura shouted as she tried to help the poor animal calm down.
'Weird, a snow white hair, in this weather?" Naruto thought for a second before hearing a sound in the air coming straight towards them.
"Everyone, get down!" Naruto, Auron and Kakashi said at once. Everyone except for Auron fell to the ground. As what everyone could now see as a giant cleaver heading towards them, Auron swung his blade at the flying object, forcing it into a nearby tree.
"Hmmmm. So you saw my attack coming, not bad." Spoke a man with a mist headband on his head as he appeared an the handle of the giant sword.
"You are Zabuza Momochi, former ninja of the Village Hidden in the Mist, I presume." Said Kakashi "The Copy-nin Kakashi, I should have known. That's why the Demon Brothers lost so easily. It's an honor to finally meet you. I'm afraid you will have to hand over the geezer over there" the figure said sarcastically.
Kakashi and Auron dropped into battle stances as Kakashi reached up to his forehead protector. "Everyone, get into formation and protect Tazuna. Don't get in the way." Kakashi said as he revealed the sharingan in his left eye.
A thick mist fell on the area as Zabuza yanked out his sword and disappeared in a flash. The people present next saw Zabuza on the water focusing his chakra into the water surrounding him. He then said one phrase.
"Ninja Art: Hidden Mist Jutsu"
A heavier mist fell upon the area as Zabuza completely disappeared. Auron and Kakashi moved forward and prepared for battle.
"Eight points; the spinal column, the larynx, the lungs, the kidneys, the jugular vein, the collarbone, the liver and the heart; now, which point do you wish to die by?" Zabuza said in a voice that came from everywhere at once.
Kakashi started forcing chackra around him as he blew the mist away. Everyone was on high alert, Zabuza could appear anywhere he felt like. All of a sudden Zabuza appeared in the middle of all the genin.
"Ha! Too slow!" He said as he was about to kill of of them in one stroke. Auron blocked Zabuza's sword, then Zabuza tried to cut Auron's head off, Auron just fell backwards as Kakashi threw a kunai into Zabuza's throat. Then Zabuza started bleeding... water? He turned into a puddle of water as he appeared in front of Kakashi and sliced him in half, then Kakashi turned into water. Then as fast as the fight began it was over as Kakashi held a kunai to Zabuza's throat.
"Its over!" Kakashi said.
"Indeed it is." Zabuza said as he once again turned into a puddle of water. When Kakashi turned around he was struck in the stomach by Zabuza and sent flying into the water. Auron tried to kill Zabuza by aiming a slice for his head, Zabuza blocked it with his sword, and sent a round house kick into Auron's back, sending him into the water as well. When Kakashi and Auron came to the surface, two Zabuza's appeared behind them.
"Fools! Water Prison Jutsu!" Both Zabuza's said as they captured Auron and Kakashi.
"Everyone run! You can't win against this guy! Tazuna is more important!" Kakashi yelled at the Genin.
"We can't, that wasn't an option the moment you got caught!" Sasuke said.
"Well it doesn't matter I would catch them one way or another. Water Clone Jutsu!" The original Zabuza shouted as about ten more of him rose from the water and onto the surface.
Everyone started to panic, not sure of what to do. Naruto on the other hand.
"Everyone listen I have an idea!" Naruto said pleading with his team to clam down.
"Why should we listen to you?" Sasuke said as he ran towards one of the Zabuza's only to get tripped up, and elbowed into the ground. Kiba used his Tsuuga in order to destory the clone that caught Sasuke only to be hit by another one of the clones. As the chaos resumed Naruto was already trying tho think of another idea, when it hit him.
Meanwhile Auron and Kakashi were watching from the sidelines. "Shit, their still not ready to act as an good team, we're toast." Kakashi said as he looked over to Auron who was as calm as possible. "Why are you so calm." Kakashi said as he began to become dizzy from being in the prison for so long.
Auron just pointed over to Naruto's direction. When Kakashi looked he was shocked at what he saw. Naruto had began to produce large amounts of chackra around him.
'I can't take this guy on my own, I would need some of the nine tail's chackra to do so, but with the others here.' He thought looking over to the others. 'I can't let them know my secret, so I'm going to have to release Kakashi and Auron.' He thought as he finally formed the cross seal.
"Shadow Clone Jutsu!" Naruto shouted as about 60 Naruto clones appeared. They all jumped into the air 20 of them through shuriken at the water clones that were on dry land, the other 40 were doing seals, 20 for each jutsu. One group finished theirs and shouted.
"Shuriken Shadow Clone Jutsu!" As the number of shuriken thown by the first group were multipied by who knows how much. While the other group finished theirs and shouted.
"Wind Release: Great Storm Winds Jutsu!" As the shuriken were propelled at the water clones easily breaking the sound barrier. The nine left over clones (save for the one holding Auron) were instantly destoryed, as Naruto landed on the ground and started forming new seals.
"Fire Release: Volanic Smokescreen Jutsu!" Naruto shouted as he blew out a large smokescreen covering him and the rest of the shore.
Meanwhile with the other Genin, they each had their own reactions as usual. Hinata was staring in amazement at the skill Naruto was showing. Kiba, Tazuna and Shino were also impressed, but not in an "amazing" way like Hinata, but a "holy shit" kinda way, Sakura could only stare as Sasuke began thinking.
'How is the idiot doing all of these jutsus? And that last one, that one was a fire jutsu, I thought that we of the Uchiha clan were the masters of those jutsus? So... why haven't I seen that one before?' Sasuke thought as he waited for the smoke to clear.
On Zabuza's side, Kakashi and Zabuza could only stare at what the blonde had done.
"Naruto..." Kakashi said as he looked over to Auron who was smirking. Soon Kakashi understood why he was so calm.
'Naruto will find a way to get us out.' He said as he started grinning as well. Then all of a sudden a fuuma shuriken came flying out of the smoke heading straight towards Zabuza.
"A fuuma shuriken, I'm not impressed." Zabuza said as he caught the shuriken out of the air. Then out of nowhere a second shuriken appeared where the shadow of the last one was.
"Shadow Shuriken Jutsu?" Zabuza said as the shuriken closed in fast. Zabuza jumped over the shuriken as it flew behind him. Then the shuriken turned into Naruto who threw a kunai at him.
Naruto made some seals then. "EAT THIS! Kunai Shadow Clone Jutsu!" As the single kunai turned into ten, five flew towards the Zabuza holding Kakashi, while the other five flew towards the Zabuza holding Auron. The Zabuza holding Auron was hit with all five kunai and turned into water, meanwhile the other Zabuza pulled his hand away from Kakashi's prison in order to escape, but he was hit by two of them, one leaving a gash in his side, the other a cut on his cheek.
"Why you brat!" Zabuza said as he was about to cleave Naruto in half with his sword. Then Auron appeared in front of him, blocking his own sword with his.
"Naruto, take Kakashi to shore, his time in the prison has affected him." He said standing on the water, while Kakashi was slowly sinking.
"Right Auron!" Naruto said as he carried Kakashi to shore. At the shore the smoke started to clear, as the other Genin saw Naruto carrying Kakashi back while Auron was holding back Zabuza.
"Naruto, how is he standing on water, I thought only ninja could do that." Sakura said.
"Well Sakura, remember those glowing objects that surrounded Auron?" Naruto said everyone about ready to puke at the memory. "Well you see, by focusing those at the base of his feet, he can walk on water, that simple." Naruto said turning to watch the fight.
Auron and Zabuza were still locked in a battle of strength. "So your pretty tough aren't you?" Zabuza said.
"Yes I am, but so are you. In fact you should be honored, you are the first person in this world I will have to use both my arms for." Auron said as he pulled his left arm out of his coat and started gripping the handle of his sword.
Naruto gasped, which did not go unnoticed by everyone. "Naruto what's up?" Kiba asked.
"Its just, Auron has never had to use his other arm in a fight for as long as I've known him." When Naruto sai this everyone's attention was turned back to the fight.
After a few seconds Auron and Zabuza seperated, Zabuza started making seals as fast as he could while Auron just dipped the edge of his blade in the water, a red object started to form at the tip. Soon Zabuza and Auron were ready to launch their moves.
"Water Release: Water Dragon Jutsu!" Zabuza shouted as a dragon made of water rose from the water and started to head towards Auron.
Auron smirked and said. "Bushido Style: Dragon Claw Technique!" He said as he swung his sword to the dragon's head, forcing the Dragon "Claw" to shoot itself towards the dragon head. When they collided water was blown everywhere. When everyone could see again they watched as Zabuza and Auron pushed against each others swords, they then backed away from each other again, as Zabuza was beginning to make some seals, all of a sudden Auron jumped into the air a few feet and started spinning violently.
"Bushido Style: Tornado Technique!" He shouted as a tornado formed and started heading straight for Zabuza. Zabuza at first could fight back, but then he was sucked into the tornado's spin. As he was blown away, pieces of debris that were inside the tornado started cutting him, hurting him. Then Auron threw his bottle of Sake into the tornado, causing the entire tornado to become a tornado of fire! As the tornado subsided, Zabuza struck a tree at the end, burnt, cut and bruised, as Auron approached him.
"Maybe I didn't need my left arm to defeat you." Auron said while getting ready for the final blow.
Then out of nowhere, two senbon needles struck Zabuza in the neck, killing him. When everyone arrived, a hunter-nin appeared on the branch.
"I would like to thank you for helping me capture Zabuza." The hunter-nin said as he jumped from the branch onto the ground next Zabuza. As he was about to disappear Naruto stopped him.
"Hey aren't you supposed to burn the body?" Naruto said, drawing everyone's attention to him, while the hunter-nin disappeared in a swirl of leaves.
"Well that... was... weird..." Naruto stammered before holding his head, and passing out.
"Ka-Kakashi-sensei, wh-hat just happened to Na-Naruto." She said with a bit of worry in her eyes.
"By the looks of it chackra depletion, he'll be fine, after using all of those jutsus, I'm suprised he didn't pass out after those first few." Kakashi said while grinning a bit.
Auron smirked as he got a devious idea into his head. "Hey Hinata, could you help me carry Naruto, I'm a bit worn out after fighting Zabuza." Hinata turned beet red, she couldn't have thought for Kakashi to carry Naruto or Shino, all she could do was nod. She then started carrying Naruto with Auron, blushing widly just at touching Naruto.
"Well then I guess I'll carry Sasuke, Shino could you carry Kiba?" Kakashi asked, covering up his sharingan. Shino nodded and started carrying Kiba while Sakura was stuck thinking.
'CHA! I WANTED TO CARRY SASUKE!' So after the fight everyone was back on their way to Tazuna's house.
When they reached Tazuna's house Auron and Hinata immediately went to a guest room, and layed Naruto down on one of the mats, and started waiting for him to get up.
Woohoo! Chapter done! I'm sorry if this one is a little short I have a schrimage coming up for football, so I figured I could leave you guys with this, sorry if I am being mean.
Remember Reviews are like jutsus in Naruto, they are KICK ASS!