A/N: Hey, I know it's been forever since I've updated, there will be a
little on that at the bottom. This chappie has a bit of a cliffie , but
don't worry, I aim to updated fast!
Has anyone seen Rain?
I hope everyone likes this chappie! It is dedicated to: Emeline! ((not because you wanted one dedicated to you...well, yes, but I was also going to dedicate it to you anyways ))
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Pure
Chapter 12: Premonition
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How long had it been now? Days? Months? Weeks? Years? Maybe it hadn't even been a day. Harry couldn't tell. Every second passed like an hour. The darkness seemed never ending. Harry sometimes wondered down, into the darkness, but when he stopped to turn around, he couldn't tell if he had walked miles, or if he had even left the place that he had started at.
All that Harry knew was he didn't like wherever he was. He didn't like the darkness, the silence. That was the one thing that Harry truly feared.
Silence.
Not the silence of an ocean, the silence of gentle waves breaking on the shore. Not the silence of the wind, the silence of the breeze softly ruffling the leaves. True silence. A box, a cage, where there was no noise. Bare walls, nothing to focus on. Just silence.
Silence, where there was nothing but you. Silence, where you were left alone with your thoughts. Silence, where there wasn't anything but you, and your flaws. And the mask that you had put on, the mask that fooled everyone else could not fool you.
Just you, silence, and your flaws.
And your memories.
For that was truly all Harry could focus on. His flaws and his memories. Every scar that ran through him, internal or external. The darkness that had consumed him, the darkness that ran through him, the poison darkness of his blood.
And the memories.
Every scar, every flaw tied into a memory. And then there were the images. The image of the flash of green light that killed his parents, the voice of his mother screaming. The image of Sirius, his eyes still laughing as he fell through the veil. He saw his friends falling, their eyes blank, as curses hit them. He saw the blood spilt over the ground, the blood of his friends and his mixed together.
The blood that he had spilt.
And the worse image was the one he saw every time he closed his eyes, the image that haughted him constantly.
Draco.
He was always there. His silver blue eyes, the ones that seemed to look through Harry, look into him. The blonde hair that he had grown, that loosely fell into his eyes. The lips that Harry had never seen smile, only smirk.
The question haunted Harry every moment; it was always there, hovering in the back of his mind: Would he ever see Draco again?
Sometimes, he didn't know if he wanted to. What would Draco do? How would he react? Harry-his worst enemy-had saved his life.
He knew Draco would as why. What he did not know is what he would say when the question came. How could he answer with out Harry giving away the truth?
The truth that he loved him.
For Harry had decided not to tell Draco. He knew the way Draco felt, the way Draco had always felt. And he knew that Draco did not feel the same way. So, no, he would not tell Draco his feelings.
He would never tell Draco.
But, before Harry could decide what he would tell Draco, he felt himself being pulled backwards. He gracefully dived, parallel to the ground. He could feel his body becoming weightless. And then, suddenly, he was whirled backwards, his hair was being blown, and he shut his eyes to keep the biting wind from reaching them.
And then, as suddenly as it had started, it stopped. He felt his feet connect with the ground. He felt his feet slip, saw the bed next to him, and held out his hand to stop the impact. But it never came.
He fell right through the bed.
His heart pumping wildly, he pulled himself up, and looked around. He was in the hospital wing. And on the bed he had just fallen through...
Was himself.
An out of body experience? His heart told him no. But then, what was it...
Suddenly, the figure's eyes opened, and Harry gasped. He was...awake?
He heard a voice across the room, but the voice was soft, blurred, as though the speaker was yelling to him underwater. Turning slowly, he saw it was Madame Pomphrey.
"Mr. Potter!" The words reached Harry's ears slowly. He could see her lips form the words, parting slowly as each syllable left her mouth. "You're awake!"
Then Harry felt the same sensation he had before, but this time he was being pulled forward. He tried in vain to stop, to stay behind with his body, but the force was too strong. He could not make out anything around him. He could hear the voices, slurred as he rushed past them.
And then he stopped.
He fell to the ground again. Then, pulling himself up, he realized who he was standing in front of.
Hermione and Ron.
He felt the anger surge through him when he saw Hermione, their last encounter fresh in his mind. She turned to Ron and said breezily, "We should go see Harry."
Ron nodded, scowling. "Haven't been able to get a moment alone with him, what with that git Draco near him at all times."
Harry was barely able to contemplate that Draco was not by his bed when he woke, when he was pushed forward. He lost sight of Ron and Hermione as everything became a blur once more. He vaguely realized that he had turned two corners. Then, suddenly, he stopped.
He realized where he was at once. The kitchens. To the right of him was the painting of the fruit. And there, in front of him was...Draco.
Harry longed to reach out to him, though he knew Draco could not see him. Then a flash of movement caught the corner of his eye. Turning slowly, he saw what he had feared. A cloaked Death Eater, their wand pointing menacingly at Draco.
Harry ran to the Death Eater, fully aware that he could not stop him, but still trying to do so. He watched the Death Eater's mouth form the horrid words and the green light shoot out of his wand.
And then Draco fell.
Harry couldn't move. He stared at the fallen, crumpled form of Draco, his heart pounding in his ears.
It was then that he realized what this was. Not an out of body experience, no, but it was something of the supernatural.
A premonition.
He was being pulled backwards now, away from Draco, away from the kitchens, away from the Death Eater. He was moving backwards, and everything was becoming a blur once more.
Suddenly, everything stopped. He was in darkness once more. Then, suddenly, pain shot through his body. He couldn't breathe, couldn't think. The pain was circulating through him, his mouth was open in a scream, but nothing was coming out.
He fell to the ground, withering, his arms clutched to his chest. Another jolt of pain shot through him, and he arched his back...
And shot up in bed.
Harry Potter had woken up.
He turned to see Madame Pomphrey staring at him in shock.
"Mr. Potter! You're awake!"
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A/N: Okay! A bit of a cliffhanger.
Alright, I am so sorry that I have not updated. We were supposed to go to Mexico this week, but then, on Tuesday, we got word that my Great Grandmother had died, and I just didn't feel like writing ((sorry!)) and on Wednesday, we flew to her funeral, and stayed there for a week. I'm so sorry it's taken me so long!! I'll try to be faster next time!
Thanks to all that reviewed:
SarkLover- lol thanks! Yay, school's out! Wyoming, cool. Did you have fun?
Tara Potter101- lol! He's out of the coma! But now we have bigger problems!!
MyGildedCage- Thank you so much! I hope you liked this chapter!
Mistik-elf13- Inquiring minds' questions are answered! But now what about Draco...bump bump BUM
Celedriel-greenleaf- Lol, I loved your review! New chappie, yay! Hopefully the next one will be up sooner!
Riley Riddle- Well, it wasn't ASAP, but I hoped you liked it! AHHHHH!!! retreats from intimidating Flobberworms
Mandie- Lol! I've posted! And hopefully the next post won't take so long!
Serenity Slytherin- Kool, thank you, I'll check that out!
The Wing Master- I'll finish, I'm just not sure when...lol! Hopefully sooner than later
Dea Puella- New England! I want to live there! You suck! ! Well, that didn't exactly happen...but soon, soon...
Crystalstorm21- Hope you liked it!
Kitsune-fa-Toren- Lol, well I'm taking that as a compliment I loved angst
Son of twilight- Lol, thank you! I hope you liked this chapter! Mexico won't happen until late July...change of plans!
Hiei's fiancee- Well he's out of a coma, but now what?! MUAHAHAHAHAHA! Yes, I meant Godfather, sorry! Don't worry; Mexico won't be until late July ((change of plans since Great Grandmother died))
ROsE-ofHeL- Yes, the plot thickens, MUAHAHAHAHAHA!
p0l- Lol, I'll sue! Jk! Thanks!
Emeline- Lol, you envy my talent? What talent? Lol. This chapter was dedicated to you! I hope you liked it!
Elebereth- Lol, well they realized it, but now when will they act upon it! Now THAT could take ages! Lol jk!
Elven Warrior1- Uh oh, this was a cliffie wasn't it? bites nails
Silverlie- LOL, your review made me laugh!! I hope you liked this chapter! The next one will be up sooner, but don't hold your breath! YOU NEED TO BREATHE!!
Shadowed Rains- Lol, no it's fine that you wrote about yourself. Yes, I get a double cheese bugger too! But I get mine plain, instead of with everything on it. yes, I know what you mean...Well, I hope you liked this chapter!
To them, and everyone else, please review! I will update soon!
Has anyone seen Rain?
I hope everyone likes this chappie! It is dedicated to: Emeline! ((not because you wanted one dedicated to you...well, yes, but I was also going to dedicate it to you anyways ))
----
Pure
Chapter 12: Premonition
----
How long had it been now? Days? Months? Weeks? Years? Maybe it hadn't even been a day. Harry couldn't tell. Every second passed like an hour. The darkness seemed never ending. Harry sometimes wondered down, into the darkness, but when he stopped to turn around, he couldn't tell if he had walked miles, or if he had even left the place that he had started at.
All that Harry knew was he didn't like wherever he was. He didn't like the darkness, the silence. That was the one thing that Harry truly feared.
Silence.
Not the silence of an ocean, the silence of gentle waves breaking on the shore. Not the silence of the wind, the silence of the breeze softly ruffling the leaves. True silence. A box, a cage, where there was no noise. Bare walls, nothing to focus on. Just silence.
Silence, where there was nothing but you. Silence, where you were left alone with your thoughts. Silence, where there wasn't anything but you, and your flaws. And the mask that you had put on, the mask that fooled everyone else could not fool you.
Just you, silence, and your flaws.
And your memories.
For that was truly all Harry could focus on. His flaws and his memories. Every scar that ran through him, internal or external. The darkness that had consumed him, the darkness that ran through him, the poison darkness of his blood.
And the memories.
Every scar, every flaw tied into a memory. And then there were the images. The image of the flash of green light that killed his parents, the voice of his mother screaming. The image of Sirius, his eyes still laughing as he fell through the veil. He saw his friends falling, their eyes blank, as curses hit them. He saw the blood spilt over the ground, the blood of his friends and his mixed together.
The blood that he had spilt.
And the worse image was the one he saw every time he closed his eyes, the image that haughted him constantly.
Draco.
He was always there. His silver blue eyes, the ones that seemed to look through Harry, look into him. The blonde hair that he had grown, that loosely fell into his eyes. The lips that Harry had never seen smile, only smirk.
The question haunted Harry every moment; it was always there, hovering in the back of his mind: Would he ever see Draco again?
Sometimes, he didn't know if he wanted to. What would Draco do? How would he react? Harry-his worst enemy-had saved his life.
He knew Draco would as why. What he did not know is what he would say when the question came. How could he answer with out Harry giving away the truth?
The truth that he loved him.
For Harry had decided not to tell Draco. He knew the way Draco felt, the way Draco had always felt. And he knew that Draco did not feel the same way. So, no, he would not tell Draco his feelings.
He would never tell Draco.
But, before Harry could decide what he would tell Draco, he felt himself being pulled backwards. He gracefully dived, parallel to the ground. He could feel his body becoming weightless. And then, suddenly, he was whirled backwards, his hair was being blown, and he shut his eyes to keep the biting wind from reaching them.
And then, as suddenly as it had started, it stopped. He felt his feet connect with the ground. He felt his feet slip, saw the bed next to him, and held out his hand to stop the impact. But it never came.
He fell right through the bed.
His heart pumping wildly, he pulled himself up, and looked around. He was in the hospital wing. And on the bed he had just fallen through...
Was himself.
An out of body experience? His heart told him no. But then, what was it...
Suddenly, the figure's eyes opened, and Harry gasped. He was...awake?
He heard a voice across the room, but the voice was soft, blurred, as though the speaker was yelling to him underwater. Turning slowly, he saw it was Madame Pomphrey.
"Mr. Potter!" The words reached Harry's ears slowly. He could see her lips form the words, parting slowly as each syllable left her mouth. "You're awake!"
Then Harry felt the same sensation he had before, but this time he was being pulled forward. He tried in vain to stop, to stay behind with his body, but the force was too strong. He could not make out anything around him. He could hear the voices, slurred as he rushed past them.
And then he stopped.
He fell to the ground again. Then, pulling himself up, he realized who he was standing in front of.
Hermione and Ron.
He felt the anger surge through him when he saw Hermione, their last encounter fresh in his mind. She turned to Ron and said breezily, "We should go see Harry."
Ron nodded, scowling. "Haven't been able to get a moment alone with him, what with that git Draco near him at all times."
Harry was barely able to contemplate that Draco was not by his bed when he woke, when he was pushed forward. He lost sight of Ron and Hermione as everything became a blur once more. He vaguely realized that he had turned two corners. Then, suddenly, he stopped.
He realized where he was at once. The kitchens. To the right of him was the painting of the fruit. And there, in front of him was...Draco.
Harry longed to reach out to him, though he knew Draco could not see him. Then a flash of movement caught the corner of his eye. Turning slowly, he saw what he had feared. A cloaked Death Eater, their wand pointing menacingly at Draco.
Harry ran to the Death Eater, fully aware that he could not stop him, but still trying to do so. He watched the Death Eater's mouth form the horrid words and the green light shoot out of his wand.
And then Draco fell.
Harry couldn't move. He stared at the fallen, crumpled form of Draco, his heart pounding in his ears.
It was then that he realized what this was. Not an out of body experience, no, but it was something of the supernatural.
A premonition.
He was being pulled backwards now, away from Draco, away from the kitchens, away from the Death Eater. He was moving backwards, and everything was becoming a blur once more.
Suddenly, everything stopped. He was in darkness once more. Then, suddenly, pain shot through his body. He couldn't breathe, couldn't think. The pain was circulating through him, his mouth was open in a scream, but nothing was coming out.
He fell to the ground, withering, his arms clutched to his chest. Another jolt of pain shot through him, and he arched his back...
And shot up in bed.
Harry Potter had woken up.
He turned to see Madame Pomphrey staring at him in shock.
"Mr. Potter! You're awake!"
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A/N: Okay! A bit of a cliffhanger.
Alright, I am so sorry that I have not updated. We were supposed to go to Mexico this week, but then, on Tuesday, we got word that my Great Grandmother had died, and I just didn't feel like writing ((sorry!)) and on Wednesday, we flew to her funeral, and stayed there for a week. I'm so sorry it's taken me so long!! I'll try to be faster next time!
Thanks to all that reviewed:
SarkLover- lol thanks! Yay, school's out! Wyoming, cool. Did you have fun?
Tara Potter101- lol! He's out of the coma! But now we have bigger problems!!
MyGildedCage- Thank you so much! I hope you liked this chapter!
Mistik-elf13- Inquiring minds' questions are answered! But now what about Draco...bump bump BUM
Celedriel-greenleaf- Lol, I loved your review! New chappie, yay! Hopefully the next one will be up sooner!
Riley Riddle- Well, it wasn't ASAP, but I hoped you liked it! AHHHHH!!! retreats from intimidating Flobberworms
Mandie- Lol! I've posted! And hopefully the next post won't take so long!
Serenity Slytherin- Kool, thank you, I'll check that out!
The Wing Master- I'll finish, I'm just not sure when...lol! Hopefully sooner than later
Dea Puella- New England! I want to live there! You suck! ! Well, that didn't exactly happen...but soon, soon...
Crystalstorm21- Hope you liked it!
Kitsune-fa-Toren- Lol, well I'm taking that as a compliment I loved angst
Son of twilight- Lol, thank you! I hope you liked this chapter! Mexico won't happen until late July...change of plans!
Hiei's fiancee- Well he's out of a coma, but now what?! MUAHAHAHAHAHA! Yes, I meant Godfather, sorry! Don't worry; Mexico won't be until late July ((change of plans since Great Grandmother died))
ROsE-ofHeL- Yes, the plot thickens, MUAHAHAHAHAHA!
p0l- Lol, I'll sue! Jk! Thanks!
Emeline- Lol, you envy my talent? What talent? Lol. This chapter was dedicated to you! I hope you liked it!
Elebereth- Lol, well they realized it, but now when will they act upon it! Now THAT could take ages! Lol jk!
Elven Warrior1- Uh oh, this was a cliffie wasn't it? bites nails
Silverlie- LOL, your review made me laugh!! I hope you liked this chapter! The next one will be up sooner, but don't hold your breath! YOU NEED TO BREATHE!!
Shadowed Rains- Lol, no it's fine that you wrote about yourself. Yes, I get a double cheese bugger too! But I get mine plain, instead of with everything on it. yes, I know what you mean...Well, I hope you liked this chapter!
To them, and everyone else, please review! I will update soon!