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Stop saying I steal from "immortal" ok, I never read your story! Bull. This has "My Immortal" written all over it. And your all flamers and Flavias not blond ok?Shes greek not Latin!? Okay, so when I looked this up I found out that the name Flavia is actually Latin for blond. So, this blond hating "gothic" girl's name literally means blond! That cannot be a coincidence!

12….Bitter Betrayal!

Nox City, it was indeed the deadly place in California are you sure this isn't LA? *badumching!*. Streets winded in dark alleys with polusion like a tortured twisting of a tortured Soul. The polusion was brown and made from smoke. We walked though it, I shook my head in disgust, "Why would Artmeis be here, theres no wild place, just a big crappy city!" my heart filled with ferris rage, the mortals were rapping her woods and forest! No, they're raping her barren, lifeless desert. In fact, now that I think about it, why is there a thriving urban metropolis doing in this wasteland? How are they supporting this massive city?

"The polusion attrax monsters" Since when? Most monsters are technically wild creatures too! Nivo said serious, "Here comes some now" God, can't we go one chapter without an out of nowhere monster fight? *realizes that when xxMoonlitexx isn't writing half-baked fight scenes she's writing crappy romantic subplots or really weird stuff like people getting turned into grapes.* nevermind.

A lot of draceenas and some frost giants does she mean frost giants as in Hyperborean giants, or MCU frost giants? ran to us, I used my bow and arrow to skewr five draceenas at once and from then I named my bow "Draceenas Doom." Lame. Where's the horrible pun? Then I rode on Cresent Stag (my pegasus)and flew up by the giants faces and slitted there throats with Agamamemom., blood spraid out like a torrent from the dying soul "The torrent from a dying soul"? What? and got all over the place but not on me cause I was too fast like a lighting bolt. We can't have Flavia covered in blood! That would be un-sexy! "Die" I said and they did. Lastly I stranged the last draceena with Draceena Dooms string and I threw the corpus at a mortal well that's just rude who was staring at me like a Man he was probably on Crack or crystal Meth. Flavia, if anyone's on crack it's the author of this fic.

"You didn't save any for me," Said Albaster, suddenly it hit on me like a lighting of Zeus that he was kinda really hot. Really. He's been walking around shirtless this whole time, and only now do you notice he's attractive?!

"Your too slow" I said flirtly.

Albasters etyes smoldered hotly like coles in the distent fire. "Your fast."

"I'm the best at what I do" I said "And that's killing monsters!"

"Hey Im standing right here a$$hole" Bitched She's not bitching! This is a legitimate complaint! Ivy.

But the wisdom of dozens of complaining reviews from people with actual intelligence Artmeis spoke in my ear, "But Dryads arent monsters I just found that out," I said. Cripes, I've seen crappy comic retcons that are better handled than this.

Ivy cried with tears from solid joy That sounds painful., "No one told me this, if I knew this before I wouldn't of told Kornos where we were going!" Seriously?! When did that happen?! Also: *M. Night. Shyamalan saying "what a twist!"*

I frozed in dawn of bittered betrayal. "Ivy, you hore! You betrayed me…again! And I must kill you again!" You don't have to kill her.

Ivy kneeled down in horror, on her knees, "But he was so pervasive Pervasive: (especially of an unwelcome influence or physical effect) spreading widely throughout an area or a group of people.!And he said I was a monster anyway and monsters have to obey Kronos!" Totally logical. And very pervasive.

I looked at her with Scorn, I knew she was not worth to kill. "Well now Kronos is coming and its all your stupid fault." Like he wouldn't have found y'all anyway. I tied her to a pole that was there with Telemachus and now you can no longer use your whip so she couldn't betray me any more. I knew Kronos would be here in a hour How do you know that? so we had not much time to find Artmeis and the hunteresses.

We slitted up Yes, please kill yourselves!, Albaster and me went on one street and Nico went the other way. There was a lot of rappists It's rude to just assume someone's a rappist. They could be into other types of music! and sleeze, there were no houses Really? Why is this such a big city with people on the streets if no one lives here?only facteries making Coach purses for preppy hores like Brittany(who is actally a deimgod too and got put in Apheridit. I thought she was dead.) I could see Artemis face in the smoke, she looked at the city wrathly.

At last I understood what my mission was, I needed to return this city to the wild of Artemis! Oh, you're going to teach them the values of recycling! How nice!

Also: I have gotten some attention on my other dramatic commenting, "The Champion of Hope: A Scathing Spork", and another story of mine called "Saving Private Cassie", however since I am no longer updating those fanfics I am giving my thanks here. Thank you Loveeverything15, Hello Meghan, Jaret Gonzalez, MeetTheDragon and King. for following favoriting and reviewing!