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As the two masqueraded people stepped into the light, everyone could sense that they knew them but they did not know where from.

The girl was wearing a red dress while the boy a black suit except for the red shirt he wore underneath.

They didn't have long to think as Medusa sent another storm of vector arrows after them.

Soul jumped in front and cut them off with his blade which was the same red and black zig-zag pattern but brighter.

"Who are you?!" Black*star yelled, he was tired of these random strangers saving him! He didn't get to show off his godliness at all!

"The boy turned back and then turned to Maka; medusa didn't do anything because she wanted to know who the masked duo was too.

Maka thought this would give them motivation to help her kill the Kishin, so she nodded to soul who took off his mask. He then opened his eyes and smiled at them.

"SOUL!" They all yelled.

They all ran to their missing friend to hug him but then he did something strange. He dodged them all and returned to the masked woman's side.

"Soul?" Kid questioned him. "Is that-?"

Soul gave them all an insane grin and then took Maka's hand and spun her in a couple of intricate twists and then tipped her back in a dip.

"Ladies and Gentlemen, may I present my lovely partner in this dance of insanity. Maka-sama." He said as he pulled of her mask.

Everyone gasped as the saw Maka. She looked almost exactly the same except for a red mark which was forming on her forehead, it looked almost like an... an eye.

"Maka?" they questioned.

"Hi guys." She said as she smiled and gave them a small wave.

"Maka! Where have you been!" shouted Patty.

"I have been around." Maka said vaguely.

"Maka! Why didn't you come home?! Daddy missed you!" spirit yelled from his scythe form.

"Why would I come home? I'm free and I'm not going to stop being free anytime soon." She said glaring at Spirit.

"Maka you killed innocent people! As a grim reaper I have the power to pardon you, but only if you surrender yourself to the academy." Kid said staring at her seriously.

"Let me think about it. Nope. I'm never going back." she laughed as Soul grabbed her from behind and smiled.

"Hey Spirit!" he called out to the death scythe.

"What? you little octopus head." Spirit glared at Soul.

"I'm taking REAL good care of Maka, so don't worry." He smirked as he gently bit down on her ear.

"I'LL KILL YOU!" Spirit yelled transforming out of his weapon form to rush at the albino.

Spirit brought out his blade to slice the albino who had pushed Maka out of the way. Soul stood there looking bored until he brought up his blade at the last minute.

Spirit was too pissed to be shocked at the boys' strength, how dare he touch his little girl!

Spirit kept stabbing trying to get a cut on the boy but soul blocked them all with ease. Stein finally managed to pull Spirit away when Soul started to walk towards him threatingly, his face contorted into a huge insane smile. "Come on, can't you do any better than that? why don't you try and gouge out my eyes? Or how about you rip out my nails? Come on I wanna see blood!"

"Soul." Maka said in a bored tone. "We don't have time to play right now. We've got to go."

Soul looked at them with an 'if-only-I-could-get-my-hands-on-you' look before turning back to Maka and turning into a scythe.

Maka caught soul and climbed on to his pitch black handle before his blade shortened and the wings unfurled from the side of the scythe.

Maka flew over Medusa who had vector arrows aiming for Maka. she couldn't let her get past if Maka got past she might be able to really stop the revival of the Kishin.

"Hey! Wait!" Black*star said running after Maka with his enchanted sword stopping some of the arrows.

"Black*star!" Kid yelled flying after the blue haired boy on his skateboard.

Medusa was about to send more arrows after the kids when Stein came up and used his soul force.

"Your opponent is me. I wanna dissect you~ until you are nothing but meat and bone!" he laughed and shook his head as if to clear it from something. Stein swayed and laughed quietly as Maka's wavelength affected him.

'Maka must be well on her way to becoming a Kishin if she's already influencing Stein with an anti order/shinigami wave length.' Medusa thought as she turned back to face Stein.

Medusa has heard of this before but only in some stories, it usually never happens that someone could have an anti order/shinigami wave length. Those that serve lord death would experience a wave of sickness and madness which would make it hard to concentrate. It is a sub type of the madness wave length for those on the path of becoming a Kishin with the anti demon wavelength and when Maka finally becomes a Kishin it will merge and becomes a chaos wavelength. Maka's wavelength was already super strong if it became a chaos wavelength, Medusa shuddered at the thought.

Maybe if she had the help of another meister, maybe the strongest meister, she thought looking at Stein.


"Maka!" Kid and Black*star yelled as they chased after her. They were losing her fast, the wings on her scythe were incredibly fast and she was getting closer to the target as they spoke.
But something was wrong their head was all foggy and they weren't close enough to the Kishin but could still fell a madness wavelength pressing down on them. A fuzzy eye appeared on black star's face as his eyes started to melt away and pour blood from his eye sockets.

Kid jumped back from the sight and saw a normal Black*star, eyes and all.

"Kid?" Liz asked as she felt her meister's wavelength jump in shock.

"It's nothing." He said continuing on. 'how is it possible that Maka could already be emitting a madness wavelength of that strength?' he thought continuing on.

"Catch me if you can. We need to hurry or Asura is going to be alive again." Maka said to the boy following her.

"And why do you care?!" Black*star yelled. This was not the girl that they had been friends with, who was smiling and laughing with them a while ago, or who had stuck up for Black*star and Kid when they were being insulted. This was not the girl who was their friend!

"I will be the strongest. The Kishin could threaten that! I will not allow him to be revived!" Maka yelled.

Maka all of a sudden jumped down and landed in front of them. "and you're going to help." she said putting a hand on their hearts. "for power and for order."


"Was that girl's eye on fire?" Ragnarok asked as the two girls barrelled past him and Crona.
They didn't have long to contemplate it as three people showed up. One was a black haired boy with three white stripes and five black lines on his mouth making it look like someone hand tried to stitch his mouth closed.

The other was a blue haired boy with two blue stars instead of a pupil.

Last was a blond haired girl who made Crona shiver in fear.

"Order, Power, go ahead and help Miku and Rock destroy the black blood." The girl said as she jumped of the black scythe she was riding.

"Crona was it? have you gotten any stronger? Did you consider my offer?" she said smiling at the thin girl.

"I-I-I can't! L-l-lady m-medusa is my mother! I will not leave her!" she said with some conviction.

"Mother?" Maka laughed. "What kind of mother is she? Your beloved mother would drop you in an instant and yet you stay with her? What loyalty. You wouldn't have to be afraid anymore with me, you have more power than you know and I can help you reach that potential so you are never scared again. Don't you want to be free?" She asked.

"I-I-I-I-I-I-I-I c-can't! I don't know how to deal with this!" she yelled as her black blood sword formed.

Maka sighed. "I had hoped you would have come willingly but it seems that isn't going to happen. Oh well, you will be mine Crona. I won't let you be alone anymore!"

Maka didn't know why but she felt a fierce need to protect this shy girl. To be afraid of being abandoned Maka understood better than anyone. She would save her.

She moved into a fighting stance. "I am Maka Albarn scythe meister and soon to be Kishin. Who are you?"

"Demon swords man Crona Makenshi. Maka now I know who I'm going to kill." She said as her insanity took hold.


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