LET ME MAKE THIS CLEAR TO EVERYONE. I HAVE SAID IT BEFORE. I DID NOT HAVE A LAPTOP B4 I NOW HAVE ONE. I KNOW THE STORYS WERE SHORT AND THE GRAMMAR WAS BAD. I DID THEM IN BETWEEN JOBS TO RELAX. MY STORIES WILL NOW IMPROVE. NO RUDE ASS FLAMES. CONSTRUCTIVE CRITISM ONLY. JUST SO YOU KNOW I TYPED THIS ON MY PHONE TOO. I DONT HAVE A BETA. DONT KNOW HOW TO GET ONE. I AM NEW AT THIS. THANKS FOR THE SUPPORT BUT DONT BE RUDE. YOU WILL BE BLOCKED. YOU WILL BE REMOVED FROM SEEING MY STORIES. I GUESS IF ITS THAT BAD IT WONT MATTER WILL IT. I HAVE A DISABILITY THAT DOESNT ALLOW ME TO WRITE TO SAY WHAT IM THINKING. HAVE A GOOD DAY.