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Guest 11/9/12 . chapter 11
Today's Friday I suppose I was waiting 4 the chap but u didn't
I am very sorry to that person, please except my deepest apologies.
There was a ring throughout the Kudo residence. Someone was at the gates. Shinichi got up from dinner about to go let them in, but they just waked right up to the front door, then knocking on that. Shinichi grumbled, and then went to open the door. Had their parents ever taught them to wait?
"Yes…" Shinichi flung open the door, expecting a news reporter or something. Instead there was a high scholar, probably in Shinichi's grade.
"Are ya Kudo Shinichi?" The boy talked in an Osaka dialect. He kept a baseball cap over his eyes. He was holding a blue bag that was slung lazily over his shoulder. Shinichi looked confused, this was HIS house right? Who else could he be?
"Yes…" Shinichi said, still kind of annoyed for the boys rudeness. The boy put on a smile and said;
"I've finally found ya…" He took off his cap, revealing his face. "My name is Hattori Heiji, I've been looking for ya, Kudo-kun." Shinichi nearly jumped in surprise, but he wanted to keep his 'cool' face on.
"Oh, do you mean that high school detective in Osaka? I think I heard of you…" Shinichi rubbed his forehead.
"Ya, think? Well I have come ta challenge ya to a detective showdown, ta see who is better!" Heiji smirked. "People have always compared me to ya, so now I will show them all that YOU should be compared ta me!"
"Is that the only reason you came here?" Ran walked up on the two. "Maybe you should come inside, you may be out there for a while…"
"The little girl is right, ya should let me in!" Hattori complained. Shinichi let him in, knowing that this conversation might be hours.
"Achoo!" Ran sensed. She had somehow caught a cold.
"Ah, ya have a cold? Well I'll tell ya, I have this remedy from my family. they use it for colds like yours." Heiji opened his bad right on the kitchen table, whipping all the books onto the floor. He lifted out a bottle rapped in a paper so the label was covered. He grabbed a cup from his bag and poured Ran a glass. It looked like water. Ran closed her eyes and took a large gulp from the cup; it defiantly was NOT water… but some kind of alcohol. Ran staggered around the room.
"What did you give her?" Shinichi demanded.
"Just this…" Heiji pealed the wrapping of the bottle to reveal a kind of alcohol.
"She's only seven, how could you?" Shinichi waved around his arms.
"It's okay; I'm feeling a bit better now…" Ran lied. She actually felt much worse. Shinichi still glared at the Osakan boy with cold eyes, but now instead of titanium, they were rock. A little nicer now that Ran was feeling better.
"So, will ya take on de challenge?" Heiji smirked.
"Any day." The two burned with determination.
De next day~
"So you want me to do a check on your son's girlfriend?" Shinichi asked.
"Yes..." The woman looked at her lap.
"Name?" Heiji asked. He had stayed the night, even though Shinichi had obliged.
"Tsujimura Kimie…" she fiddled with her purse. "I'll go into more detail after we get to my house…" The four of them all left the house and headed for Tsujimura's home.
When they arrived, they took of their shoes and hung up their jackets. On their way to her husband's office, they stopped in front of an old man, maybe I his late 70s? he held up a picture of a fish and talked to the woman. Judging by the conversation, they were father and daughter. Kimie told her father to wait in the tatami room and he left.
They knocked on her husband's door.
"Dear, they're here. Dear?" There was no response. "That's strange, maybe he's not inside…" She fiddled in her purse looking for a pair of keys. She opened the door, revealing her husband asleep behind a large pile of books. There was opera playing, but at a very high level. "You're here after all. Really, leaving the stereo on and falling asleep here… Dear. Please, dear." She shook him, trying to wake his from his slumber. "Please wake up dear…" Her face turned pale. Her husband fell to the floor, free of life. Shinichi and Heiji's eyes grew wide. They rushed over to him, checking to make sure if he was dead or not. But it was too late, he was already in another world.
"Akane, call the police!" Shinichi ordered. She nodded and took off. Kimie wailed over the dead body, screaming "Dear" hoping that maybe he would just get up and be fine again. But it was just as effective as defending yourself from people with guns while holding only a feather. Shinichi bent over the body, noticing every single fact possible. Like how his lips had turned purple, how the body was still warm and how there was a small dot under his ear. He looked around the floor and saw what he was looking for. A small pin under the desk, most likely the murder weapon. Both Shinichi and Heiji leaned in to get a better look, but ended up bonking into each other's heads.
"Oww!" The both rubbed their heads in frustration.
Later that night Megure and the crew had gathered up, along with all the members of the house. Megure reviewed the facts. "The deceased is Tsujimura Isao-san, fifty-four years old. He was a diplomat. And off course, Kudo-kun is here, that Murder magnet. But may I ask, who are you?" He turned to Heiji.
"Hattori Heiji, high school detective." He sneered at Shinichi.
"Hattori Heiji? Oh it's you! You're the son of Hattori Heizo-san, Chief of the Osaka police department!" Megure said in awe. Suddenly Ran sneezed again.
"Are you okay, Akane-chan?" Shinichi asked. Ran sighed. This was bad, her cold has gotten worse now because of that Osakan detective.
"And all the windows were shut and locked. Which means this is a locked room murder case!" Megure stuttered. "And the cause of the murder is…" He has cut off by Heiji.
"That's probably a murder by poisoning. This old man was poisoned by someone. There's a small red dot at the edge of his hair, and a needle next to the body that might have been the weapon. This old man died sitting at the desk, but he was probably placed there like that after being poisoned." Heiji said in his competitive voice.
"But it could be a suicide..." Megure scratched his head.
"Idiot! Can't you tell? Look at the body! His lips and fingers have started turning purple while the veins in his eyelids are starting to bleed internally. This is evidence that is was death by asphyxiation. Despite this, there's no evidence that he was strangled, drowned, or even that he struggled. The only remaining possibility is that his nerves were paralyzed, which made him suffocate. It was an especially virulent poison made to kill him instantaneously! Adding to the fact that the body was still warm and neither lividity nor rigor mortis have set in yet, means he was killed within the thirty minutes before we entered the study. He was killed by someone close to this room!" Heiji Smiled proudly. (Ps, this was all copied from the original episode. This was NOT me. There for, since I am saying this you can't sue me!)
"I was going to say that…" Shinichi muttered.
"Then, someone could have used a key… Madam, do you have other copies of the key?
"No, only me and my husband… no one else has one…" She replayed.
"WHAT?" Megure rushed over the body and searched for the key. He found in his pants pocket. "Man, these pants are too small for him…" He complained as he took it out of the little pocket. At that moment, both Shinichi and Heiji's eyes grew wide, they are figured it out! But at that moment, Ran collapsed.
"Akane!" Shinichi rushed over to her. He felt her forehead, she was burning up! "I'm going to call a doctor, she has a high fever!" Shinichi picked her up. Akane was too sick to even blush on the fact that he was caring her like a princess. Shinichi placed her down on a bed and rushed to call a doctor.
Ran's body felt hot. She felt her body pulse, then once again. Pain engulfed her. "AHHHHH!" She gave one final scream before everything went dark.
How was that? It is a tad longer because I feel bad. Maybe I can post some more this weekend? Let's all hope. And also hope that I can reach 150 reviews!