Thank you all for everyone who reviewed, and followed this 'thing'. It's not necessarily a story. . .
I want to get a message through to everyone else viewing this. I AM NOT WHINNING, AT ALL.
Yes, I know the concept of Fanfiction is to write freely due to your likings, and whatever. Though, people are very picky about the 'likings' part. Majority of the things I rant about are due to the fact that majority of people agree with me. It's also to help author's 'keep in mind' about certain things while writing a story in this archive. The more original your story is, the more of a hit it'll be.
SO PEOPLE WHO HAVE THE NERVE TO COMPLAIN ABOUT THIS: Stop. I mentioned that; if you don't agree with me, don't read this. I'm offering a nicer, and simpler approach. If you want to be rude, go ahead. I'll just watch you rant to me like an idiot. I'm tired of getting long ass messages about how you disagree with me about one subject. Phew. ._.
Go check out some one-shots I've recently updated, and yeah. . . I'LL LOVE YOU FOREVER!
Disclaimer: I'm not Rick. Pretty sure everyone knows that.
Louisa4533 You Have Read My Mind. . .( The First Two Are Her -You're A Girl Riight?- Rants)
Basing Athena/Artemis Wrong. . .
Athena is a bit like Artemis, calm and serene to those around her. Although, she has a bit of a different aura. Artemis is stubborn, she knows when to back up. Athena knows when and how to break the rules. They both are calm and level-headed in panicky situations, and they both know when someone is different. (going onto Pertemis) Just because someone is different, doesn't mean that you want to DATE the guy! Get a grip! There is a difference between love and respect!
When Reading The Books; Athena Oblivious To P & A Dating. Hermes & Apollo Acting . . .Weird.
a) Athena is the freaking WISDOM GODDESS! and b) she's a lot of things, but oblivious is Percy, not Athena. And even if Hermes and Apollo are being childish, you have to remember that Hermes and Annabeth aren't on the best of terms. Hermes also wasn't child like or childish in BotL or TLO, cuz' of Luke being Kronos and all that whatnot. Hermes is more level-headed. Look at Hermes in SoM when he meets Percy! Sure, he's kinder than most of the other gods (or maybe the word is lenient), but that doesn't mean that he's an absolute fool!
Out Of Character. . .
Hesphaetus doesn't really show emotions. He can't handle socializing, yet having a long talk with someone. When he was talking with Leo in the Lost Hero, he seemed a bit awkward. When people try to make him emotional in stories, that's what drives me away. I feel like he is way out of character, and I can't read stories when characters are OOC.
Also, when Jason is an overly jealous guy. OK, in the Mark of Athena, did he or did he not praise Percy? Excuse me while I give you evidence.
" When Percy had finished, Jason whistled appreciatively. "No wonder they made you praetor." " (Riordan 23).
Yes, Percy and Jason bit at each others necks only for a reason: it's in their nature. Their fathers do the same, so it's commonly right for them to do so too. They have characteristics from their fathers. Nico even straight up told everyone, in front of Jason, that Percy was the most powerfulest demigod he knew. Did the book describe him being jealous? No.
Thalia a bundle of sunshine, Annabeth a defenseless puppy, Percy a player. . .
No. . .
OK, I'm done. Thank you again Louisa4533, if you want me to share your rant too, give me a notice.
BYEEE.
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