Do you guys have any ideas about what you want to see in the rewrite?

This is because when I first starting this story, I didn't have a story plot line or anything like that so whatever idea I had in that moment, that's what I used. Wasn't very effective, but I felt like I had to post something, so any shit plot point was OK in my eyes at that time.

Looking back I realize how my (nonexistent) schedule wasn't very helpful, so if you guys have any ideas on how much times I should update, then feel free to leave a suggestion!

NOW I'll see you next year! Bye!