disclaimer:
the earth is round
the grass is green
if i owned hp
the world wudnt be mean
chap 8: the fight
james walked up 2 snape & poked his wand in his pallid face.
"yo sniv," said james.
"back off gangsta," said snape.
"no" said james. he cursed snape.
"crucio."
students watched and laughed.
snape suddenly shouted "sectumsepra."
james was knocked off the rock he was standing on.
"jamie" sirius and remus called with concern.
"whats wrong." said sirius.
"sn-sn…." was all james uttered.
"doofus whats your problem," said sirius.
remus got so mad. he started to shake. then he exploded into a red-brown wolf and ran at snivvy.
"wait well get expelled," said james.
"oh ya, 4got" said sirius.
remus calmed.
then dumbledore came and told snape not to tell anyone remus was a werewolf but it was obviously b/c his last name was lupin – lupus means wolf. duh. everyone knows that.
Okay…well, I'm SO happy to be back to writing FFs!!!
SO I thought I would break it down to you guys in clear English…explaining about the Marauders.
JAMES: Stop making James seem like the bad guy! I know most of you might feel bad for Snape but…dude!!! James NEVER used Dark Magic. Stop making him the bad guy!!! He hates Snape because Snape used Dark Magic. Why would he use it himself? Stop making him such a sadist.
REMUS: Okay…we are all a little confused here. Remus is a WEREWOLF. Not an animagus.
And staying in the werewolf category, he's NOT Jacob Black!!! He turns into a werewolf at the FULL MOON. Not when he's angry. Thanks for reminding me, Tasha!!!
SIRIUS: Okay, going back to Remus here, SIRIUS IS THE ONE WHO WILL BE EAGER TO START A FIGHT WITH SNAPE. NOT REMUS!!! REMUS WAS HEAD BOY!!!
PETER: Aw, c'mon, guys. Just because Peter's evil, doesn't mean he didn't exist. He was part of the Marauders. Get used to it.
Okay. Moving On.
AMERICAN-NESS: Guys, come on. We know they didn't use words like "doofus" and "gangsta."
PUNCTUATION: People. We are not in kindergarten. Punctuation. PLEASE.
DISCLAIMERS: Okay, here's the deal. Disclaimers only need to be one line saying you don't own the book. For example:
DISCLAIMER: I DON'T OWN HP
Clear? You actually don't really need a disclaimer…because no one here owns any categories. That's why it's a FAN FICTION website. If JKR was really writing this, would she publish it on a fanfiction website? No.
I seriously saw one that was a whole chapter. Keep it simple. No one reads them if they're too long. You're wasting your time.
LATIN: Come on, guys. People IN the fictional story don't know the Latin roots to spells...though we might. Don't add them in your story. Please.
OKAY and I know everyone was making comments on my OC/Lily dating thingy.
Lemme explain. Lily LIKED Sev. You find out by the interview. She had feelings for him too (though I can't IMAGINE why…freak of nature). SO, she wouldn't go out with someone else. Right?
Of course, Hermione did that in the Half Blood Prince…to make Ron jealous.
Though I'm pretty sure Lily wouldn't. JK wanted her to be the one flawless character. (Not that I agree with her…but that's the way things are). I even read once that the flower "Lily" represents "purity."
Understand, now?
The other thing, I know people try to make Lily not-so-pretty because we're bored of reading a perfect Lily…
Well, that's the way JK wanted it to be. Deal with it. Especially though Snape's eyes…I can't imagine why anyone would make her UGLY.
Just like in Twilight fics…you know Bella isn't necessarily pretty but GOOD FICS from Edward's POV always portray her to be pretty because of his feelings for her.
SORRY. OFF TOPIC. Just needed a good analogy.
And some people said this isn't a FANFICTION because that's about YOUR ideas….
YES. FANFICTION IS ABOUT HOW YOU INTERPRET THE STORY, ADDING ON TO IT. BUT IT SHOULD GO ALONG WITH THE BOOK…OTHERWISE YOU SHOULD CREATE YOUR OWN STORY ON FICTION PRESS. GOT IT?
AND YES…THIS MAY NOT BE FANFICTION…BUT I CAN'T SEND A PM TO EVERY SS/LE WRITER ABOUT THIS STUFF.
See my point?
-MANDZ
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