Once again, sorry about the wait. I'm horrible about that.

Work had finally finished on Titans Tower. Robin had used his savings he'd gained over the years of working with Waynetech. He had started his own business in Jump City with that very same money. Many people didn't think about it but Superheroes needed cash too.
He was on the rooftop adjusting their radio dish for the umpteenth time when he heard the engines of an aircraft he'd hoped he wouldn't see in a long time. Turning around he saw the Bat-plane landing on the tower pad. The top opened and out stepped Batman. Robin glared at him for a few moments then reined himself in.

Batman strode towards him and said in a terse voice "Robin."

"Batman."

"I see you've completed your headquarters."

"We have."

"It's easily accessible by villains."

Robin stared at him, rage starting to build inside him, he'd traveled all the way from Gotham to tell him of all the mistakes he'd made.

"This isn't Gotham Batman."

"A villain could simply walk onto the island and start blasting the tower."

Robin's fists clenched as he said "If all you came for is to lecture me on all of my faults leave now. I've got a radio dish to fine-tune."

He turned back and began working on the Dish again. But he didn't hear the Bat-Plane take off. He gritted his teeth as he heard Batman walk closer to him and then froze as he felt a hand on his shoulder.

"You could still come back to Gotham you know."

Robin didn't reply but Batman knew he was listening.

"I wouldn't keep you away, I didn't want you to leave Robin. I want you back home, I could always use an extra hand around Gotham. You can taste Alfred's cooking again, use the Bat-Computer, and I'll take you out on more missions."

Robin's brow furrowed, he'd missed Alfred's cooking. Fact was he missed Gotham as a whole in a way. He missed Bruce, he missed Alfred, he missed Barbara . . .

"No."

"What?" said Batman as if he didn't understand.

"I'm not going back to Gotham Batman. I left to make a name for myself and I chose Jump City. I have a team that looks up to me as their leader and I can't abandon them."

He turned around and saw that Batman was frowning down on him.

"This is what I would've expected from a little boy with no idea of what's good for him."

Robin's rage, so recently banished, surged back to the surface. Still he made an effort to keep it in check.

"Explain to me why I don't know what's good for me?"

"This team of yours is inexperienced, uncoordinated, and fraught with conflicting personalities. You won't last a year like this."

Robin glared at him and, forgetting all restraint, shouted "THIS IS ABOUT CONTROL ISN'T IT BATMAN! YOU JUST CAN'T GET OVER THE FACT THAT YOU'RE NOT MY COMMANDER ANYMORE. I DON'T HAVE TO LISTEN TO YOUR COMMENTS ON MY TEAM SO GET OFF MY PROPERTY!"

Both stood, father and son, glaring at each other. Then Batman turned and got into the Bat-Plane. He flew off and Robin didn't hear from him for a long time.

Robin stood heaving on the rooftop, then he walked to the kitchen. As he descended the stairs he knew with a certainty that every Titan in the tower had been listening to him and Batman argue.

Robin sat up, gasping as he woke from the dream that had been more like a memory. He sat in his bed, breathing heavily. While he'd been with the Titans Batman rarely ever contacted him. While he regretted the distance they'd put between each other he knew it'd been necessary. After a bit, he went back to bed and fell asleep within minutes.

Robin was working on the robots. So far he had the wreckage of Mr. Twister, the MONQI's from Ivo, and the detailed scans of the Amazo Android. He was working on studying, and if possible, replicating the process.

Then he heard the computer say "you have a call, will you accept?"

"Identify the caller."

"Caller identified as Batman."

"I accept."

Batman's face showed on the screen "Robin, I trust you had a good night's sleep."

"Not really."

"What happened."

"Nightmare" Robin said, and he left it at that. Batman decided to leave his inquiry as to the nature of the nightmare until later.

"Did you hear about what happened with Skip?" Robin asked.

"No, what happened?"

Robin explained and Batman nodded as he continued "I see, that subject is part of what I'm calling about. I have a new addition to the team."

Robin's face didn't change as he asked "and who is this addition?"

"She is an archer, and is the new sidekick of Green Arrow."

Robin's eye's narrowed, "Bruce, you and I both know that you're not telling me something."

Batman looked surprised but recovered and said "and why would you think that?"

"First off, you aren't stupid enough to put the new sidekick on the team Speedy's sure to be watching without some sort of ulterior motive that makes it worth the risk. Secondly, Green Arrow has been looking for Speedy for awhile; I find it highly unlikely that he'd take another apprentice because it would anger Speedy to no end. Thirdly, even if I had been wrong about the last two, your reaction proved me right."

Batman looked impressed. "Alright, here's the real reason."

Robin nodded as he listened to the reason, it was sound and he understood it. After a bit of thinking it over he came to a decision.

"Alright, I'll go along with this, but I have one condition. I get to bring in someone else to join the team."

Batman regarded him coolly, this should be interesting "who did you have in mind."

"Someone we both know, I've discussed joining the team with her and she was very enthusiastic about it."

"Alright, Artemis will join and this other person can join as well."

Robin nodded and told him who the name of who he wanted to join. Batman smiled, a rare thing, and agreed.

"One more thing Batman, I'm gonna need to borrow some cash from Waynetech to fund some projects, it shouldn't be too costly."

Batman nodded "you can explain later when we meet today." Then they both hung up. Robin sat back, wondering how this change was going to affect the team.

Then his thoughts wandered to the new living chandelier they had over the table in the kitchen. Megan had tried to telepathically contact him but had come up with nothing useful. It was as if Skip's mind was reset and he was reliving all his memories over again. They had no idea what to do so they had left the thing alone. Megan was worried though and Robin made a mental note to try and contact Dubbilex later if he could.

Robin heard some knocking on his door and he got up to answer it. Behind it was Megan and she was dressing in a swimsuit.

"Hey, Aqualad's here and we're all going outside to play, you want to come?"

"Well . . ." Robin said as he looked back at his work desk, then back at Megan who said "please?"

Robin remembered how Starfire had asked him the same thing, and he'd refused.

He smiled and said "sure."

A few minutes later they were all out on the beach and began playing. Kid Flash couldn't be there because he had started school. They had a rousing day of fun, playing volleyball, making sandcastles, and burying Superboy in the sand. Robin told them that they'd be getting two new members but kept it a surprise who they were. They all suited up at the appropriate time and went to wait out in the main room. The teleporters lit up after awhile and out walked Batman and Green Arrow. Behind them walked two girls, one in a green costume and the other in a purple and black costume. Megan squealed with joy and rushed forward to give the girl in the purple costume a hug.

After introductions were made they waited on Kid Flash who was said to arrive any minute. On time the teleporter lit up and Kid Flash rushed out, but to Robin's great annoyance he rushed out in a swimsuit with various beach paraphernalia.

"The Wall-man is in the house, let's get this party start-" he suddenly tripped and a beach ball bounced off in front of him. As he looked up from the ground Kid Flash suddenly realized how out of place he was.

"Wall-man" Artemis said in a voice that suggested she was trying hard not to laugh "love the uniform, what exactly are your powers.?"

"Uh, who's this?" Kid Flash asked.

"Artemis you're new teammate."

"Kid Flash, never heard of you."

Batgirl walked forward and introduced herself as well and Kid Flash just scowled.

Green Arrow then strode towards Artemis and said "she's my new protégé."

"Wait, what happened to your old one?"

Then they all heard and saw the Teleporter start up, saying "Recognized, Speedy, B06."

Speedy strode out of the light and said in an annoyed voice "well for starters he doesn't go by Speedy anymore."

Everyone took a moment to look at Speedy/Red Arrow, he'd exchanged his outfit for a new red and black outfit. Then Green Arrow walked towards him.

"Roy, you look-"

"Replaceable!" Red Arrow spat.

"It's not like that; you said you were going solo."

"So why waste time finding a sub? Can she even use that bow?"

Artemis walked forward too and said in a dignified voice "yes, I can."

"Who are you!" Kid Flash asked.

Both Green Arrow and Artemis said at the same moment a variation of "she's my niece."

Aqualad sought to defuse the tension in the room as he entered the conversation "She is not your replacement; we have always wanted you on this team and we have no quota on archers in this team."

"And if we did, you totally know who we'd pick."

Robin didn't even look at Wally as he said "Kid, shut up."

Kid Flash stepped back and crossed his arms as he sulked.

Robin looked at Red Arrow and said "you came to us for a reason."

Speedy looked him up and down and said in a contemptuous voice "don't tell me they gave you the job?"

Robin just narrowed his eyes.

"What, did Batman bribe the League or something to get you the job. What a joke, a 13-year-old who can't stop laughing and vanishing in charge of the team. I'll be surprised if you last 5 minutes into the mission."

Superboy started to take a step forward while cracking his knuckles in anger at the insults to his best friend. But Megan put a hand on his shoulder and said mentally "Robin knows how to handle himself. He wouldn't like you tearing Roy apart."

Superboy stood still for a moment, then stepped back, but still glared at Red Arrow. Batgirl also scowled at the unfair description of Robin.

Aqualad also came to Robin's defense "I think you're being a bit unfair Reoy. Robin has taken the job very seriously and has led us to victory on each of the missions."

Red Arrow just smirked at Robin and said "whatever, I came here for a reason, and that reason is called Dr. Sirling Roquette. She's a nanotechnology genius from Star City and she vanished 2 weeks ago or rather was abducted 2 weeks ago. By the League of Shadows."

Kid Flash's face lit up "you want us to rescue her. Hardcore."

"I already rescued her, but there's just one problem. The Shadows had already forced her to make a weapon."

He inserted a flash drive into the computer and several images came up, one of them showing what looked like an electronic cross between a beetle and a scarab.

"The Doc calls it "The Fog." It's comprised of millions of microscopic robots. They're capable of disintegrating anything in their path, stone, glass, flesh. But its true purpose isn't just destruction. The robots can hack terminals and download any information."

Artemis cut in "perfect for extortion, manipulation, power brokering, yeah sounds like the shadows."

Kid Flash began speaking but Robin glanced at him and he shut his mouth again, remember his previous orders.

"The Doc's working on a virus to render "The Fog" inert. But the Shadows know so they're going to target her. Right now she'd off the grid. She's stashed in the local high school's computer lab."

"You left her alone" said Green Arrow incredulously.

"She's safe enough for now!"

"Then let's you and I keep her that way."

"You and I? Don't you mean your new protégé?"

Green Arrow was about to say more but Batman grabbed his shoulder. Arrow gestured to the room at large and said "you brought this to the team, now it's their mission, which makes it her mission too."

"Then my work's done." Red Arrow said. He walked back towards the teleporter but as he passed Robin he looked at him and Robin could tell he didn't trust him to be a good leader.

Before Red Arrow reached the teleporter Robin called out "Roy, I respect the reasons that you want to be solo. But let me make something clear, it would be better if you kept us as your friends, not enemies. A good step towards that would be to get a better attitude.

Roy turned to glare at Robin but Robin matched him eye for eye and after a few seconds, Roy turned away. He walked to the teleporter and the familiar voice said "recognized, Speedy."

"That's Red Arrow, B06, update" and then he was gone in a flash of light.

In the school Robin had set the team up in specific locations but before they had gone he'd given them a motivational speech.

"The fate of the world could potentially hang on this. I want nothing but the best from you all, which is what I've come to expect. That means no infighting, no questioning orders, and no slip-ups. Some might think that this team is just a way to keep us as sidekicks. Well I say let's prove them wrong and go above and beyond the call of duty. Mors importantly, we are a team, we are the Young Justice!"

Once they were all in place Robin had Ms. Martian link up the team in order to avoid communicator interception.

"Ugh, this is weird" remarked Artemis.

"And distracting. Writing a complex computer virus is hard enough, now I have to hear Teen think in my skull."

"Lady, do you always complain when someone tries to help you?"

Artemis started to say something, but Robin, sensing an argument starting, quickly said "that's enough chatter. Artemis, go help the others on the outside patrol. Dr., can you track the fog?"

"Of course I can, but I'd have to go online. Might as well rent a huge billboard with my name and address!"

"Calm down, we're here to protect you."

The Dr. thought a bit, then said "tracking fog now."

A few minutes later, the fog was found and Robin debated who to send. He could go of course, but then he'd have to delegate the task of leading to Aqualad. Not that he didn't trust Aqualad it was just that on missions as important as ones like this he preferred to keep his hands wrapped as tightly as he could around the team. Superboy should go; his invulnerability made him one of the only one's who could withstand The Fog. But he was divided on the others. It was against the league of shadows and it required some technology experience. Then he had a brainwave. Send Artemis.

From the looks of things she and Kid Flash weren't gonna get along well. Send her with Superboy would solve that problem, at least for the time being. Also, her history with the League of Shadows might make her a liability. Also, Robin had an alternative to use if the virus no longer became an option. He called the two to him and gave them what looked like a small grenade. When they asked what it was he just said "it's a precaution in case the Virus doesn't work."

The two got into the Bio-Ship and it took off towards Philadelphia.

The building became quiet once more. Ms. Martian and Aqualad took patrol duty outside, Kid Flash took patrolling the halls, Batgirl stayed on the roof and Robin paced the room in which the Doc was seated.

Robin wished he could've put up cameras but they'd been so rushed for time he hadn't been able to. He continued to pace until he heard something. Any other person besides Batman would've missed it, but years of fighting in the dark backalleys of Gotham had sharpened his ears to miniscule sounds.

Without warning seemingly he threw two objects. One deflected every shuriken coming towards the Dr. while the other hit the doorframe and covered it with a wall of ice. Knowing that wouldn't last Robin shouted "GET DOWN DR.!"

Then he said mentally "WE'RE UNDER ATTACK IN THE COMPUTER LAB!"

Not even pausing to listen to the others Robin looked as the wall of ice smashed inwards and received a shock as he saw yet another familiar face.

Granted he had only known her as a nameless villain who was part of the Brotherhood of Evil, but still the fact stood that the grinning mask of Cheshire was staring at him. Robin drew two of his Birdarangs and two short swords sprouted in his hands.

Cheshire advanced, toting two extremely sharp short swords and remarked "oooh, you're good" in a mocking sort of voice.

She darted forward as quick as lightning and Robin blocked as the blades darted two and fro. Robin parried and blocked for a few seconds before his foot lashed out and connected with Cheshire's stomach. She stumbled back and then stood up. But as she held up her swords she suddenly had to whirl around and block a club made of water.

Aqualad and Batgirl had arrived on the scene. Robin caught vaguely that Megan was tied up in saving Kid Flash or something but he was still grateful that he now had some backup in the room.

Cheshire and Aqualad were dueling now and Robin joined the fray. Batgirl circled around with a Batarang, looking for an opening.

Cheshire found herself having to defend on both sides. Against anyone else in the group she might've had a chance, but against Aqualad who was moderate in fencing talent and Robin, who had been trained by arguably the most skilled man alive, well, she didn't want to stick around and get captured.

She grabbed a smoke pellet and threw it to the ground. Robin, having used this trick himself on many occasions, tried to find her but she was gone.

"She's getting away, you're letting her get away!" Dr. Roquette was shouting again. Robin just turned around and fixed her with a stare that told her in no uncertain terms that she was starting to get on his nerves. She got the hint.

Robin interviewed the others on what had happened. Apparently Megan and Aqualad had seen and heard nothing, Batgirl had thought she'd seen some shadows but concluded it must've been her imagination, Kid Flash had seemed some obvious shadows, so of course, him being his usual self. He'd neglected to inform the team and had gotten himself knocked out.

Robin contacted the away team and found they had bad news too. The lab in Philadelphia had been completely destroyed and ransacked. All the technology from the labs was now in the hands of the shadows.

Robin made the decision to move the Dr. As they moved he noted that at times like these it would pay to have a hidey hole to store the dock in, like the Batcave, only more replaceable. But then again, that problem might soon be remedied as the funds he borrowed from Bruce came through.

Robin took no chances this time and placed cameras everywhere. He also planted a few surprises for the enemy around the building where Megan would be impersonating the Dr.

Batgirl had the duty of patrolling the outside. She went through the motions of pretending to order Megan to make a perimeter sweep. Suddenly she felt something sticky hit her from above and she was dragged up into the trees and mercilessly kicked and hit until she lost consciousness.

Inside the building the doors suddenly flew open and what looked like a ninja in a skin-tight purple suit leapt in through the doors. Kid Flash jumped up and went to challenge the intruder while Aqualad found himself faced with a man with a huge hook on a chain for one of his arms. Neither of them noticed a window near the ceiling opening as Cheshire readied a crossbow.

What Cheshire didn't know was that one of the cameras Robin had set up was currently trained on her and he was waiting to push a button with a small smirk on his face. Cheshire fired her dart but one of the bench's flew up to block it.
"MARTIAN'S HERE, IT'S NOW OR NEVER!"

Cheshire leapt as the bench was pulled away by the Spider ninja but at the exact right moment. A bomb that had been placed at that exact window by Robin detonated.

Cheshire was blasted all the way across the room and hit the opposite wall. By the time she got up she was extremely angry. She leapt at Roquette/Megan but was intercepted mid-jump by Batgirl, who seemed to have been woken up by the explosion.

Robin, over in a small internet café a few blocks down, got a message from Artemis.

"Robin, the next target is a WayneTech facility."

Robin blanched. Almost everything that he and Batman used came from Waynetech, in theory among all the data they would get the Shadows could use the link to hack the Batcave, and perhaps even the Watchtower after that. The mission suddenly became all the more dire.

"USE THE BOMB, USE MY BOMB NOW!"

"Okay, how?"

"THERE'S A BUTTON ON THE TOP, PUSH IT AND YOU HAVE THREE SECONDS BEFORE IT BLOWS. THROW IT BY THE FOG AND IT'LL DO THE REST!"

In Gotham, the Shadows agent had released the fog and it headed towards the Waynetech building. Artemis broke one of her arrows and prepared to fire with the bomb strapped to the end. But at that moment a beam of red light hit her. The League of Shadow's agent was wearing a helmet that was similar to Seemore's in that it allowed him to shoot a beam of energy from one eye.

Superboy had an idea and whispered it to Artemis. She nodded and immediately began firing off indiscriminately in the Agent's direction. Superboy grabbed the bomb and leapt towards the fog. The Agent tried to blast him but he couldn't aim as he continually had to dodge Artemis's shots.

Superboy landed right in the fog and he could feel the millions of robotic insects crawling all over him. But thanks to his Kyptonian resistance they couldn't hurt him. He pressed the button on the bomb and 3 seconds later it began blasting what looked like blue smoke out of it. Superboy looked on in confusion but then saw that the Blue smoke was, for lack of a better word, eating up The Fog.

Within 10 seconds all of The Fog was gone and the blue smoke zipped back into the bomb. Superboy stared at it, and then he was reminded of the Shadow's agent by a shout from Artemis and rushed to deal with him.

The fight inside the lab with the phony Roquette raged on. Kid Flash and Aqualad were relatively evenly matched against their opponents but Batgirl was outclassed and she knew it. She was slowly but surely accumulating a number of scratches and nicks as Cheshire's blades danced around her.

Then, Batgirl heard a muffled noise coming from inside Cheshire's helmet, likely an order from her superiors, and then Cheshire shouted "THE FOG'S GONE, RETREAT!"

Cheshire then kicked Batgirl in the stomach and ran out the back of the building. The others were not so lucky. The man with the chain was knocked unconscious by Aqualad as he tried to leave and the spider guy was hit by Megan as he tried to leave.

They all sat panting; not quite believing that it was over.

In the computer lab, Roquette stared at Robin with and incredulous look.

"We didn't even need the virus, how'd you disable the fog?"

"Yeah Rob, how'd you do that."

"I must confess my curiosity as well."

Robin grinned mischievously "I guess that's something that I'd like to keep to myself. Just ask yourselves this, how many different types of things do Batman and I have to deal with?"

Actually, Robin had Slade to thank for the little invention he'd put to use. After Slade had used the Nanoscopic probes on his team to make Robin become his apprentice (something he swore would never happen again), Robin had had Cyborg design a portable countermeasure. The grenade carried millions of advanced nano-sized probes of Cyborg's own design that were meant to specifically seek out and destroy non-organic nanoscopic probes. Once let out, they scanned the immediate area for probes, if they found any they promptly destroyed them while avoiding harm to any people in the area. Once all the enemy probes were destroyed, they returned to the sphere they were stored in.

Robin congratulated the team as they headed back to Mt. Justice, especially Artemis, whom he made everyone acknowledge. Even Kid Flash.

In a room sat the leader of the League of Shadows. He gave his report to the 7 screens of light.

"We managed to retrieve the STAR Labs technology. However, the Waynetech technology eluded us."

"Once again, the Young heroes interfere."

"But I find Robin the most interesting, we managed to hear some of their communication and he was responsible for The Fog's destruction, not Roquette. He would make a fine Appprentice for me."

"However that may be, Robin continues to draw our interest. He may be useful, if he is made to see the Light."

The League of Shadows leader smiled evilly.

That night, Robin had an especially vivid dream. He dreamed he was standing on the edge of an enormous chasm. On the other side stood a girl he could just make out as Raven. Between them it looked like there was a bridge of light that was trying to form but it continually faded out of existence. Robin saw that Raven was the one who was trying to form the bridge and he called out to her. She called back but he couldn't make out any words. He kept trying but he could hear nothing. This continued for some time as Raven continually tried to form the bridge.

Then, Raven turned away and vanished. Then Robin heard some scrabbling and looked down into the chasm. The younger Robin he'd seen before was trying desperately to claw his way out. Robin got the feeling that he didn't belong in the chasm but he could do nothing. The Younger Robin began screaming at him that he was cruel and that he didn't belong up there. Then he slipped and fell back into the chasm. Darkness fell quickly.

Robin didn't dream anymore that night.

I feel like the chapters I've been putting out lately have been rather substandard. At least on this story. Please review and tell me what I'm doing wrong if so.

So now Batgirl is a part of the team. I apologize if that part was clumsily done. I hope you enjoyed the chapter.

Let me give you something to think about. The dreams aren't there just for fun. They actually have a point.

In an attempt to end all questions like when will the Titans come in and when will everyone find out about Robin I will say this: I am not going to spoil those parts! Seriously to say when would spoil a large part of the story so be patient. I know when they're coming so rest assure I have it under control.

CUE MAILBAG!:

SuperninjaX

Oh man! LIVE IT UPDATE SOON!

Thank you.

PS, try to calm yourself adequately next time to leave a coherent message. (lol, I couldn't really understand the LIVE IT part. Sorry :) )

Mika-Mustang

Woot =D Update! Love the fight with Robin and Canary! Plus, Robins little speech to Superman was great ^_^ Amazing chapter, but then again, that's nothing new =D

Thank you, I hope you like this chapter as well.

Rinka tokmiya

:) I liked it alot! Please update soon!

Question...: When do the titans come in?

The Titans will come when they come. Trust me, have patience.

KaliAnn

The way Batman in this story trust Robin and allows him to speak his mind about team issues shows the character difference between the two versions. I loved the fight between Black Canary and Robin. It showed how far he's come. They way he and Superboy worked together shows the same brotherly love that is suppose to exist between their fathers. Smart of Robin to call in Batgirl for Ivo. Like the message to Superman. Well if Skip is going through his version of puberty by eating so much, (that's what I meant by packing it in!) then all the better! I only have one question. Should Robin be made aware that the League is using Artemis as a double agent?

The versions of Batman can be different but also another thing I'm trying to get at is that this is a bit of an education for YJ Batman and you can bet he's taking notes so he doesn't make the same mistakes TT Batman does.

Robin has been made aware of something about Artemis. To be revealed later.

Thank you for your review. I am indebted to you for being my best and most constant reviewer.

Riqis Inna Sunja

That was great! and dont worry about update gaps with me, i havent been able to updazte my story in a few weeks, i dont have a computer, im reviewing this on my phone! i cant wait for the next chapter! good luck!

Hope you like it, thanks for the understanding.

TobiGB

Sorry I didn't review the last two chapters which were both really good and I enjoyed both Batgirl and Slade.

I enjoyed the talk Robin had with Superboy it was nice of him and I hope superman change his attitude towards Superboy.

I look forward to see how you do the next chapter/episode with Artemis.

I have two questions though will Robin be in the Kent Nelson mission. Will get to see how YJ Robin is doing? Well anyway keep up the good work I look foward to the next chapter.

It's alright. Robin can definitely connect with Superboy on the matter of a disappointing Father-Figure.

Robin will be part of the Kent Nelson mission as he is now living at Mt. Justice.

Hope you like this.

WhatNooooI'mNotACONTRACTOR

So... Nice job I like it.

Why thank you. :)

zz73

woo that was good what are you gonna donext but i thought this would be more about robin

This is mostly about how Robin will try and lead and secure a good future for the YJ. He recognizes that they are key to the future just like the Teen Titans.

Renegade

This is the best young justice fic I have ever read! I was dying for this update! Your writing is fantastic and I hope you update soon :)

I'm truly sorry about the long update gap. Thank you for the thoughtful review.

Evil Soul

Hey, sorry I haven't reviewed this chapter sooner and that it's so short. Been very busy lately with some short courses, job hunting and having a new girlfriend.

Anyway, this chapter was pretty good. Not as long as usual, but quality over quantity. It was better than the last chapter, but maybe not quite up to the standards of some of the previous chapters. Still, can hardly wait for the next chapter. Have fun.

Good luck with all three, I can sympathize because I just started a Technical School.

I'm on pins and needles as I sort of consider you to be one of the critique people of my chapters. I enjoy your reviews immensely because they are usually so thorough.

Hope this chapter is good enough.

Good Day and God Bless :)

Sincerely, LordGodsServant