Pain, Love, and Betrayal

by dragonheart3

Max and the flock are flying back from New York. On their way back to Dr. Martinez's house, Max gets shot! She begins to slow down, and seems so much more tired. What's going on? She does something and sends the whole flock in a state of panic! FAX! R&R

12. Chapter 12

I'm not gonna even bother trying to make this up. I don't like ending stories, I'm not good at them!! Ugh, well I'll try to update soon. So anyways the other day I was walking around my house wondering about my fanfics. I was thinking, 'How can I make it better?'. And this little situation popped up in my head. Imagine it as a comic strip:

A RELATIONSHIP BETWEEN PARENTS AND MAX

ELLA: Max, Max! Mr. Chu kidnapped Dr. Martinez!

MAX: WHAT?!?!

[[next panel]]

ELLA: Max, Max! Mr. Chu kidnapped Jeb!

MAX:.…

ELLA: Max?? Did you hear me?

MAX: Yeah. Wanna pretend I didn't?

HA! Well, I thought it was funny. My incredibly quick-reading, smart ass that sometimes slows down or gets lazy when I am not inspired mind came up with this!! HAHA!! BE JEALOUS!!!!!!

Well here's the main authors note:

I'll try to finish up this story. Whenever I get inspired. You can't force it out of me, or it'll suck. I'll do my best though. :be prepared for a world meltdown:

Thank You for being patient! (or those of you who aren't, but you have to suffer anyways. =P.) Lol well later then!