R/N So, this is me Jolene writing the note at the start. I'm forcing M to write another chapter. I'm evil. Well, Jolene is hopefully gonna be a bit more girlpower. Not promising anything here.

So I had to tell Dodo.123 and Fire City Girl yes, M here admits she uses he much so shes trying to improve that.

So here it goes chapter 12.

Liar

Gilan was sitting in the tree again recapping yesterdays event. His prank had turned out amazingly and Rick never got a clue that Gilan had done it. There was still, oatmeal, water and oil on the ground but now there were hundreds of animal tracks in it, he'd been examining them yesterday after Rick had showed the family.

Gilan had found a fox, some rabbits, a few deer and many mice tracks. This morning he had gone to see again and found some bird tracks too, and some red blood spot with a mark that could be an owl killing a mouse.

The trap, or prank itself had been removed by him under orders from his father, he had managed to convince his mother to leave the food for the hungry animals. Gilan himself wasn't really an animal killer but he loved looking at tracks and being able to explain what had happened.

Gilan now sat relaxing in the oak tree with his back against the trunk watching the birds hop from branch to branch above him and hearing their wonderful chirp.

Then he heard footsteps, and looked down seeing his brother and Jolene walking towards the tree again. There was some distance between them and Jolene seemed angry at Rick for something.

Rick pushed Jolene against the tree and tried to kiss her but she pushed him off her.

"Jolene... Why are you doing this to me?" Rick asked in a voice Gilan had never heard before.

It was soft apologetic and pleading something that wouldn't usually be found in a strong twenty year old.

"Rick, I saw you with Hannah." Jolene said pushing him away once more as he tried to push her back against the tree.

"I was never with Hannah." Rick said obviously lying.

"You're lying to me Rick, you've lied to many people." Jolene said.

"Jolene you're my only love." Rick said.

"Liar." Jolene said a bit lover but Rick kissed her silent.

Gilan sat there astonished that there was going to be one girl that would beat his brother in some way. He had to rethink his opinion on girls being complete idiots.

Jolene pushed Rick away, and said very loudly.
"It's over Rick. I'm not gonna be in love with a liar." Jolene said trying to get away but Rick grabbed her should and turned her around.

"Rick, let go of me." Jolene said pleadingly.

"No, I wont give up on such a beautiful girl." Rick said and Jolene sighed.
"I'd hope it never came to this." She said but then her foot went up very fast kicking Rick right up between his legs and he groaned.

"Don't worry, no ones going to want children with you anyway." Jolene said laughing and then she walked away.

Leaving a hurt Rick twitching on the ground and a very astonished Gilan in the trees. Had that just happened or was it a dream, was the thought racing through Gilans mind.

Has that just happened or is this a nightmare was the though racing through Ricks mind.

Gilans mouth was open and his eyes were full of tears of happiness. His brother had gotten beaten up... by a girl.

Go Jolene.

A/N The real authors note.

I tried to lessen the "hes".

Wel review PLEASE

I just corrected the very astonishe GILAN in the trees I must have been sleepy..