I'm start to think to get a beta to rewrite the whole story Not really 'rewrite', just edit the whole chapters with fixed grammars. Who's able to do that just tell me. I just need the grammar fixer trough… Actually I am going to ask JuneLuxray2 again but I don't know if she can take the whole angsty now XD I am still not sure who to correct this whole story's grammar… since I am trying to use my close friends to beta if they can. (btw Specs if you can, can you beta this whole story? ^^; well, not really need) But if they can't,… and if one of you want to fix the grammar… just tell me then I will think about it.
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The Fentons, Sam, and Tucker rushed into the Fentonworks. With unconscious Danny on their hands, they headed straight to the lab. Jack and Maddie prepared everything they will need to help their son. Sam, Tucker, and Jazz put Danny on the lab's experiment table; because that's the only thing where Danny can laid down. The raven haired boy rested on the table, still out.
Sam released the Specter Deflector from Danny, and two blue lights appeared on the boy's chest, changing him into his ghost form. Sam, Tucker, and Jazz are looking at him sadly, wondering if he could fixed.
The busy parents turned to the kids. Maddie opened her mouth and say, "We'll try to fix Danny,"
Sam, Tucker, and Jazz just nodded. The three looking at their best friend and little brother, before turned back to Maddie. "You three better wait upstairs," she said, her voice cracked. Jack turned to them with an invention on his hand. He and Maddie both ready to help their son.
At first, Sam and Tucker feel like they don't want to leave Danny. Neither Jazz want to.
But Jazz knew her little brother needed to be helped, so she turned to her brother's friends and pushed them outside the lab. "Sam, Tucker,… let's go upstairs. Mom and Dad will try to help Danny," she said under her breath. Giving a last glance on Danny, the three stepped outside the lab and went upstairs.
"Sorry," Jazz muttered, "Let's just wished Danny can be all right," again, in a low voice. Sam and Tucker not replied, just nodded in silence.
Some machine sounds can be heard from downstairs. The three are surely curious. They want to know what Jack and Maddie did there, maybe they can help. But Jack and Maddie don't want to be disturbed.
The three are not saying anything, until Jazz remembered something.
"Oh, yeah," She spoke, killing the silent. "We should tell Danielle that Danny's save," she said. Sam and Tucker are totally forgotten about Danielle. The two instantly agreed and the three walked to the guest room- where Dani's in.
Jazz knocked the door slowly. "Danielle…?"
The three can hear soft sobs inside the room. "Dani…? Can we come in?" Jazz asked again. But there's no respond. Sam, Tucker, and Jazz are looking at each other, and agreed to open the door. The door creeks, Jazz say again, "Dani, we're coming in…"
Inside the room, they can see the girl in blue sweater- is sitting on the bed. She is not crying, just sobbed. Her blue eyes still have some tears which left behind. There're some tissues on the floor. She has been crying ever since Danny's captured. She worried about her 'cousin' 's condition. She didn't go with the Fentons to rescue Danny; the Fentons knew she need some time alone- so they didn't even bother her to ask to come with them.
Sam, Tucker, and Jazz sat on the bed with her. Meanwhile Dani tries to stop her cry.
"Dani," Jazz called her.
"Y-Yes?..." she asked, with her voice small. Sam set herself closer to Dani, "Danny is saved." The three words jolted up the halfa girl, excitedly she asked, "Really? Where's he now?"
"Downstairs, with his parents," Tucker answered. Dani stood up and rushed to outside the room. But then she felt a grip on her hand. Jazz stopped her, "Mom and Dad don't want anyone to be there,"
"B-But,… Danny-"
Jazz stood up, standing next to Danielle. Then she looked at her eyes and say, "He'll be fine,"
Jazz's eyes looking at Danielle's baby blue eyes. "Trust me," she continued. Dani went silent for a while, before nodded. Then she sat down back on the bed. "So, what happened to him…?" the girl asked. Danielle's eyes moved to the sweat-covered Sam, Tucker, and Jazz. Noticing they're both dirty and looks tired. She wondered what's going on with them.
Sam took a deep breath before answer, "They messed up with Danny's powers,…"
Dani shook her head, and stare on Sam's purple eyes. Sam continued, "…we manage to break into the GiW's building and took Danny out,"
"And people were helping too," Tucker added, remembering the whole protest thing, wondering if they are still protesting now. Jazz cut them off, "Now,… we only can rely on Mom and Dad's try," she said. Everyone else nodded. Hoping Danny would be better soon.
Then Sam and Tucker noticed the time, they have been outside from the school's end. And they not yet contact their parents. They're both tired. "I guess we need to go home now," Sam said, as Tucker nodded. "Oh, okay, thank you guys," Jazz said before the two heading to the door. "Oh, and Jazz…"
"Please inform us Danny's condition," Sam reminded her.
"Oh, all right. See you," Jazz replied, with Danielle on her side. Watching Sam and Tucker walked outside the house. Then the two decided to check the television. They walked to the living room. Dani sat on a chair and Jazz turned the small TV on. Then Jazz grabbed a chair for herself and sat on it.
"People are still protesting to the Guys in White. Trough Danny Fenton already saved, they still protest for all they did to him." The screen showed the fight between townsfolk (mostly teenagers) and GiW members. Paulina screamed something about torturing Phantom. Dash shouted something about capturing their hero. Valerie said something about child abuse. The reporter went to ask one of the GiW members. "What's your response to all of this?"
The GiW agent's sweats dropping fast. "We… will do something,"
A loud 'woo' shouts can be heard from people.
"…We- will try to fix all this mess," the agent continued his words. Another loud 'woo' from people. "It's a child abuse!" One of the protesters shouted again. The GiW agent triggered his teeth, and glares on the protest herd. The news reporter asked again, "You'll be captured for abusing a child,"
The agent tries to search for an answer. Finally he say, "…We- didn't know!" but the response from people just another 'woo'. "They already saw he is a teenager why they still doing it?" another shout of the protesters. Sweats dropping fast from the agent's forehead again. "W-We… We're sorry,"
"We just want to know what's inside this new species- we want to study 'it', we-"
This time, louder 'woo' shouts from everyone.
Jazz turned off the TV and turned to Danielle. Both are silent. Until the two hear Jack and Maddie's voices from downstairs.
"Place it there, Jack,"
"Inject it, Madds."
Dani can't take this anymore, she want to see Danny now. She stood up from her seat but Jazz stopped her, again. Jazz sighed and say, "…Let's trust them," Danielle fell silent, and nodded in agreement to Jazz. "Now, let's get some rest," Jazz told the tired-looking Danielle, she always worried for Danny- just like her. But Dani is crying more, she should be tired.
And Jazz is tired already from the long day.
Jazz walked Dani to her room, while Jazz herself looking at the way to the lab.
Hang on,… little brother…
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…s. h. o. r. t…
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