Can we please talk about the title to this chapter? "The sark forest"? Is that like a forest filled with birds? Anyway, sorry for the long wait, I was moving and had no time to spare!

"NO!" (YES!) yewled StarKit. She run after TigerClaw. but he was to fat. (Wouldn't being fat make him slower? And isn't he a leader already? So his name would be TigerSTAR?) She cudlnt catch up. Finly she stoped. She was so tried so sad, (The love o' my life just left meh!) Teres begun to role down her face: her sitser was deed (I'm not dead yet!) and tigerstar had ExcapeD! 9What exactly are you planning to do when you catch him? Put him in Sol's den?)

"y am I so ulsess?/?/' (Oh shut up Mary Sue, stop whining!) she dsked. "why couldnt i kill her?" "its not opur falt. Sadi a voice from bedide her. "WHAT WHOSE THEIR" (Your worst nightmare, FREDDY KRUGER MWAHAHAHAHA!) SHE SAID JUMPED.

It juts me. (Who?) " said JayWing waking to bedside her. (Oh the guy who wanted to make love with a stick, I remember you!) "Yo couldt kill im becas u're nut dead." (Sadly) "what" said StarGleam "What dlo you men."

"hes in the Dakr Froset!" (Good riddance!) said JayFeather. "hess allready ded!" (Dangit!) oh no what do I do thouth starGeam.

"we can go to teh Dark Forste but its ver danger." (Do it! Do it! Do it!) Mewled Jayfeater. "tack me their!" sad StarGleam.

She slepped (She slapped someone, or she slept) and then they were in the Fark Forest. It was dark. (REALLY? It's dark in a place called the dark forest? I never would have guessed!) Here was no mono 2 lighte the way and it wass heard to see. They herd voices! It wass TiggerStar! (Kill her PLEASE!)

"ok tjen well kell her ND invade Thundercaln" (If you have a dream, don't wait, ACT! -Axel Kingdom Hearts II) he was said. "WHAT NOO!" said StarPaw (OH MY GOD IS SHE AN APPRENTICE A WARRIOR OR A KIT?) she jumped at him. she was aboot to hit him when BlackStripe was there! "TIGERSAR WATCH OUT" said BlackStrip. TierStar loocked at her and he clawed her. It wasnt fare! (It was very fair)

StarGleam fell to the ground blood was cuming from a wand on her sholder. (ummm... she just had a random magical wand sitting on her shoulder?) It was a lot of red blod. HawekFrost Looked at her. She was so buetiful so kawai, he was thought just like FirStar. He loved her. He had to save her. (Seriously? This girl could be a humongous Jerkwad moron, but no, she's pretty and that's all that matters.)

He jumped in TiggerStar! He bit him! But it wa s to lat. StarPaw was dyeing. "it was turning balkc. "I love you seh said as she did. (Hurl)

AND THEN STARGLEAM WAS DIED!11!111!11111!1!11! (YEEEEESSSSSSSS! FINALLLLLLYYYY! OMG I'M SO HAPPY! HAPPY DANCE! HAPPY DANCE! HAPPY DANCE!)

Hope you guys enjoyed!