I am seriously amazed how I have gotten 89 reveiws! Norea, I really appriciated your review. the longest reveiw I've ever gotten , and I liked how you told me the specifics. That is brilliant feedback for my story, and With feedback like yours, i can make my story better!
Also, Momo16 has an amazing story about a girl called Sinders. She is a half-vampire, like Reneesme , and Embry imprints on her. It is really good, so read!
Back to my story,
Where do you want the Date to be? Tell me in your reveiws!
1 more Reveiw to see their first date!
99+ Reveiws for Seth admitting his imprint to her/ their first kiss..
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Brady POV
Life hurt. Every moment without her felt like years. Every day felt like an eternity. And without Katie, I was just a lost cause. Just drifting forever in darkness. There was a hole where my heart should be. And my sanity was slowly fading..
But that was OK.
As long as Katie was happy. As long as Seth made her happy. I'd get by knowing that.
But I wish it was me in Seths shoes.
I long to be the one who was meant to be protecting her.
Putting my arms around her.
Kissing her.
I thought of when she was on top of me. When she was whispering in my ear. When she kissed me... It made me the happiest man alive.
Now that's all changed. She's Seths now.
I started to run faster in my wolf form: I needed to get away. No one else was on patrol, so I could just be left to think. But being alone wasn't good.
Because, When I was on my own, I would remember leaving her... Remember her pain... Remember how that pain in her face , her tears, it was all my fault...
" Brady!" My imprint shouted to me. I had to keep my expression blank - I couldn't show her how much pain It was causing me to have to do this.
"Heya ! Brady! Why weren't you waiting with Nessie for me?" emotion was seeping through the cracks of my mask, but I pulled it together quickly.
Katie walked over to me tentatively, as if walking on egg shells. "Brady? are you OK?" She asked, concern dripping off every word. It was killing me. How could I tell her that I could never be OK again without her in my arms? How could I tell her that I loved her more then I loved myself, But that only made every thing a million times worse? How could I tell her I needed her lips on mine, or I would be droven into insanity?
Thats right, I couldn't.
I would have to stick to the plan. "Br-" She started again. Her voice sounded like heaven, but it was driving me through hell.
" Leave me alone." I snarled, not out of anger, but out of desparation.
I couldn't stand it.
" Why Brady?" The pain in her face made me die inside. " Whats wrong Babey?"
Our nickname for eachother.
Once, I would have sold my soul to hear her call me that again.
Now I would sell my soul for her not to: It just made it too hard.
I looked into them deep, emarald grean eyes of hers that could keep me mesmarised for hours, and saw pure pain clouding them.
I knew that it was for the best though.
" Don't call me that" my breathing started speeding up.
But the truth was, all I wanted to do was hold her in my arms, kiss her like we did weeks ago: for her to love me, for her to scream out my name in pleasure ... Oh God...
Stop that Brady!
I couldn't think like that. It would just make me die further.
But I need her so much...
I couldn't get her out of my head - Her face: Her eyes, a perfect shimmering green, Her nose, cute as a button, her lips... Rose pink and plump... and so sweet on mine... moving as one... and her body... luscious in every way... I felt myself go into overload at the thought of her skin on mine.. The thought of seeing that lust and hunger in her eyes... And it being all for me.
God i'm whipped.
But it was so much more then that, wasn't it? it just HAD to be something more then that! It just HAD to hurt to see her with him! it just HAD to hurt, knowing that I could never even get close to her, because I would always want something more then just friendship!
He just had to see her first.
I howled in agony. It's too much! It's too much!
Life hurt without her.
And if I 'm losing my reason for living, I might aswell just lose my life...
So I ran for the cliffs, and didn't look back.
I love you Katie.
Ok, I didn't go into detail with some of the aspects of this because I'm only 14, So I can't really say some of the things in specific detail..
Leah POV
I sat in my cousins and my ex boyfriends house, very uncomfortably. Of course, how could it NOT be uncomfortable? There was just too many bad memories here..
" Well, we've been trying for a baby for the past few weeks. We think its time. " Emily smiled to the whole pack.
Oh my God.
Anger and shock spread through my body. I growled a low growl. Sam turned to me and looked at me with apologetic eyes. It hurt.
I wasn't good enough to be his imprint. So he went for my cousin!
It wouldn't have hurt as much if it was some one else- anyone else. But my COUSIN ! REALLY? It killed me that she could even THINK about going out with him.
I shook my head in disgust.
Everyones eyes turned to me as I got up, shaking from head to toe.
" Emily... Oh Emily you complete whore you!" I bellowed. Sam's eyes turned angry as Emily looked at me, pained.
" Don't Leah." He said in his alpha voice. I found the stregnth to ignore it.
" WHAT? You date me, but i'm not good enough for you am I Sammy boy? So you turn to my cousin, who is- no, WAS a sister to me. And to think that I introduced her to you! Ugh! you IMPRINT on her, because, hey, I don't have the right genes! me and Emily were FAMILY for fuck sake! and she's such an utter cow that she decides, ' Oh, I don't care whether we've been friends forever, and I don't think that blood is thicker then water, so why don't I just shag her wolf boyfriend!" I screached. Emily was crying now. No matter how much this hurts her, she has no idea how much she hurt me. " Then, Sammy boy, you ruin her face!" Sam flinched at this. All was silent. " NOW YOU WANT TO GET HER PREGNANT? AND I WILL JUST HAVE TO STAND HERE AND WATCH?"
I started shaking more violently. I ran outside and phased into a grey-silver wolf. I noticed i wasn't alone. I could see the suicidul thoughts passing through Brady's mind.
Brady? Why are you going to the cliffs - Oh no. You IMPRINTED on Katie too ? NO ! DON'T TRY TO KILL YOURESELF! YOU MEAN TO MUCH TO THE PACK! I shouted through my thoughts.
Leah I can't handle it. You know what it's like to have someone taken away from you. I flinched. Suddenly, I felt Sams presence.
Lee-Lee! please don't! I'm Sorry! I can't help this - BRADY WHAT ARE YOU DOING? STOP NOW! No Alpha, Please! I can't take this!
No. Come on. We're a pack! Sam said calmly but firmly in his alpha tone. I could see Brady stopping as we ran to find him ..
